| "The Deepest Disire" Reviews/Comments [ 76 ] |
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Reviewed By: NightShadow On: April 30, 2003 00:55 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GREAT chapt.!! Keep up the GREAT work and UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Draco MalfoyGirl 16 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2003 23:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it girl. Keep on writeing. I will love to read the next chapter. Please up date soon. i wanna read more. |
Reviewed By: Inukamisashi On: April 25, 2003 01:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This so cool!!! Update as soon as possible ^_^ |
Reviewed By: doa On: April 11, 2003 21:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please continue because its a good story |
Reviewed By: Kagome-chan On: April 11, 2003 06:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved your story. Anyway, I have an idea. Inu-yasha could notice her gone and try and find her and Sesshomaru could fall in ove with Kagome and turn into demon or half demon. |
Reviewed By: Lady love On: April 11, 2003 00:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I just saw very few errors! I enjoyed this fic a lot! Well here are some ideas! When they wake up (I know this part it a little OOC but thats for you to decide) Kagome be shocked but yet feel safe! She gets out of the bed to walk to her bag (I don't know if you had him bring it with him) and gets a brush to brush her hair or something to do like study. Well she cleans up, and starts studying her school work when she hears a noice. Sess. Wakes up (will actually gets up because he has been watching Kagome since she moved waking him. And from there your imagimation can fly!
Why not later in the chapters have Kagome start to teach rin and Sess. feelng grow. And why not have rins birthday be soon and she only wants one thing. A mother! Which sess. knows and so does Kagome. Well why not at the party rin get her wish. just ideas to use if you wish of not! Your chose! |
Reviewed By: Jaxxia7 On: April 11, 2003 00:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have been a Fluffy fan for quite some time. This is a little different from all the Sess/Kagome fan fics I have read but still a little of the same, which isn't a bad thing at all. Sesshomaru is a little OOC but it's a refreshing change. Since Kagome is angry at Inu maybe Sesshomaru could help her get over him in his own personal way. Just an idea to throw around in your head. Anyway, thanks...keep writing. |
Reviewed By: sesshoumaru lover1 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2003 20:51 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NOOOOOO!!!!!! SESSHOUMARU LOVER HATE WRITER'S BLOCK THEY SUCK!!!!!!!
ME GOT IDEA SO ME E-MAIL YOU K!
T-T-F-N.
TA TA FOR NOW!
PLEASE CONTINUE!!!!! |
Reviewed By: vampirebunny On: April 09, 2003 22:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
he he he blushed? lol omg thats a first!! hes got emotions!!!!! ive live to see the day!!!!! nice story man keep it going ill keep reviewing for you later! |
Reviewed By: Lili On: April 09, 2003 16:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow very good fic i hope you write more chapters!ItalicsFont SizeFont Color |
Reviewed By: claudia67g On: April 06, 2003 14:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
not bad
just need to make the chapters a bit longer.
good start i like how your going with this.
claudia |
Reviewed By: Rin_chan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2003 22:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Everthing is perfect..except...well, your chappies are kinda short....do you mind if you can write longer chappies?please? I'd rather take a long wait and read a nice, long , chappie then reading short ones. Thanks!
*gives a big smile, grabs Sesshy and run away*
Rin_chan
PS: I no have stories yet ;_; but I'm working on it! ^__^ |
Reviewed By: spaghettios09 On: April 05, 2003 20:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love the story but please give me a thank at bottom please.
thank you nina aka spaghettios09 |
Reviewed By: NightShadow On: April 05, 2003 20:01 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was great!! The only thing that was wrong with it was that the chapters were really short, oh well. Great job I can't wait to see what's goin' to happen next. UPDATE SOON!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: spaghettios09 On: April 05, 2003 17:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love it please do more but try to make it a little more funny.i hope you still keep because your stories are really good. |
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