| "The Deepest Disire" Reviews/Comments [ 76 ] |
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Reviewed By: claudia67g On: April 05, 2003 15:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmmm
Ok this is wayyyy to fast.
Sessy melting that quick?
NOT..
but.. im not bashing
just seems rushed.
Please continue but make longer chappies if you can.
I can barely wet my whistle on what you have written. I need a bit more for my imagination.
claudia |
Reviewed By: Me.. On: April 04, 2003 22:31 CST
Comment/Review:
You should continue....by the way, you know A Single Spark site (Sess/Kag site) and fanfiction.net??? You can put this fic there......... :) |
Reviewed By: caley On: April 04, 2003 21:50 CST
Comment/Review:
that was a mean cliffy but stil like it |
Reviewed By: fluffy-sama'sfollower On: April 04, 2003 19:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a really cool fic! please continue!!!!!!
i only have one thing to say..sesshomaru-sama uses "this sesshomaru" when he's speaking first person ..but i love this fic!!! |
Reviewed By: silverbutterfly On: April 03, 2003 22:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like your story...hehe...Inu can be such an Idiot...and you protrayed him so well :) as for fluffy...well...i want to read more so update when you can.
Silver |
Reviewed By: Christina On: April 03, 2003 19:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
'Tis wonderful, my dear. lol! It's really good. As usual, your writing exceedes that of the average level. |
Reviewed By: paperheart [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2003 18:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please write more!! MORE I BEG OF You i think that it's creative plese update soon read mine and tell me what you think!!!
paper heart~ |
Reviewed By: fey On: April 03, 2003 13:59 CST
Comment/Review:
first person pov generally sucks, too onesided. otherwise, very good so far. pleasing to continue |
Reviewed By: adorable akane On: April 02, 2003 21:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please continue! But don't use "I" anymore for sesshoumaru, its so dumb.Not that i'm calling your story dumb, I really like!! |
Reviewed By: spaghettios09 On: April 02, 2003 15:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought the story was good and a little bit funny. But other wise u did a really really great job on it |
Reviewed By: Jenn On: April 02, 2003 09:27 CST
Comment/Review:
Heheheehehehehee... This is cool!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: caley On: April 01, 2003 22:47 CST
Comment/Review:
i liked it and wan't to read more hope u review soon |
Reviewed By: Fluffysgirl4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2003 19:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ithink your story was ok. Please write more! |
Reviewed By: Munku-JGSPTV On: April 03, 2003 04:18 CST
Comment/Review:
Please fix up that spelling from Sesshie's POV onwards. Just that last bit seemed a little rushed, so take your time when writing. ^_^ Someone else suggested no more SessPOV *shrugs* I suppose. yeah.umm.. what was I going to say? :S Oh yes. I could actually imagine someone doing what Kagome's doing. I say to my friends that if I was going to kill myself, I'd probably do it to hurt someone. The ultimate. But I dunno if I'd actually go through with it. Oh well. *sigh* Post again soon! |
Reviewed By: ittymonster On: May 07, 2003 16:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
You left me hanging!!!! I wanna know what happens next! WHAT HAPPENS?!?!?!?! by the way, great story. exciting and suspenseful. my fave. |
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