| "The Deepest Disire" Reviews/Comments [ 76 ] |
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Title: The Deepest Disire
Reviewed By: Dah88 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2004 17:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it i can't wait until you update. i hope you continue i know its been a while but this is a good fic. I have never read a fic where Hojo(sp?) is the bad guy!! I can't wait to see what going to happen when he and Inuyasha face each other. OR sesshy? When is kagome going to wake up? Is she going to be ok and when is she going to be a goddess? What going to happen to sesshy and her?
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Reviewed By: Kristie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2004 21:22 CDT
Comment/Review:
OMG great story you have got to update it really soon ok thanks tootles
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Reviewed By: eaglehawk On: December 30, 2003 03:19 CST
Comment/Review:
they love too quickly. sorry, I just can't deal when Sesshomaru falls for her - a human - the race he loathes - so quickly.
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Title: chapter7
Reviewed By: Inuyasha665 On: October 20, 2003 13:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay I'm walking away from the computer, I am opening the door walking out and then I closed the door . I walk out of the house, and AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!! !!!!!!!!!! (Its really good so far^^)
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Reviewed By: i_luv_sesshoumaru On: October 19, 2003 22:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
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Title: chapter6
Reviewed By: Inuyasha665 On: October 19, 2003 20:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
How sweet'.'
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Title: ...
Reviewed By: Inuyasha665 On: October 15, 2003 18:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW*0*
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Title: Sorry^^
Reviewed By: Inuyasha665 On: October 15, 2003 18:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
If you noticed I put chapter3 in the HA! HA! review I ment to put chapter two:)He he he. (Your story is really good so far!!!)
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Title: chapter 3
Reviewed By: Inuyasha665 On: October 15, 2003 18:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HA! HA! HA! HA! HA! HA! HA! HA! HA! HA! HA! HA! HA! HA! HA! HA! HA! HA! HA! HA! HA! HA! HA! HA! HA! HA! HA! HA! HA! HA! HA! HA! HA! HA! HA! HA! HA! HA! HA! HA! HA! HA! HA! HA! HA! HA! HA! HA! HA! HA! HA! HA! HA! HA! HA! HA! HA! HA! HA! HA! HA! HA! HA! HA! HA! HA! HA! HA! HA! HA! HA! HA! HA! HA! HA! HA! HA! HA! HA! HA! HA! HA! HA! HA! (Meaning it in a good way^^)
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Title: chapter two
Reviewed By: Inuyasha665 On: October 15, 2003 13:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok first of all, The way you spell Sesshoumaru is wrong. You spell it like this Sesshomaru, the way it is really spelled is Sesshoumaru. Sorry to complain^^But in your future storys you will know how to spell it:)(CHATER TWO IS GREAT!!!)
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Title: ^^
Reviewed By: Inuyasha665 On: October 14, 2003 22:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have read the first chapter! It is great:) I will read the next chapter as soon as I possibly can^^(ITS SO GOOD!!!)
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Title: chapter 5
Reviewed By: Rune2004 On: September 30, 2003 05:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
Real name is Rune2003 but just didn't feel like loging in ^^() Okay I love your story and all but this chapter kinda sucked because they went from "YOU PERVERT!!HOW DARE YOU SLEEP WITH ME!!!!!!!!" TO "Oh Sesshoumaru I love you too"with nothing in between so that chapter sucked and I hate saying sence I love the story
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Title: great
Reviewed By: KougaGirl16 On: September 28, 2003 16:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapter. I can't wait to read the next one because i love this story.lol. see ya soon.
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Title: great
Reviewed By: KougaGirl16 On: September 28, 2003 16:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapter. I can't wait to read the next one because i love this story.lol. see ya soon.
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Reviewed By: iluvinu On: September 27, 2003 19:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
its gud! update soon!
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