| "This Can't Be Good" Reviews/Comments [ 265 ] |
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Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2003 22:36 EDT
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Another great chapter. To bad they had to break up their moment. It would have been hularious if Koga had walked upon them. (Yes I know I can be evil sometimes) Hurry with the next one the suspense is killing me. But it will probably be somebody like Shippo. Koga finally lets his tounge lose on Hojo! To bad he was half way wrong. Oh well, maybe next time.
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Reviewed By: paxnirvana [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2003 04:36 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good comedic timing. Enjoyable storyline. Leans toward the comedic side of the series for characterisation and holds it well. But I do so like seeing the 'boys' all flummoxed by simple *niceness*. Sango's actually very poignant in her shy interest - but Hojo's little 'problem' with Shippo makes me want to drop a boulder on his 'nice-guy' head. *grrr* And when Kagome finds out... *grins toothily in anticipation*... ooooh... make sure to let us watch...
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Reviewed By: sternocledomastoid On: September 27, 2003 11:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ack!!!! you can't leave it there!!! update update update!!!!!
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Reviewed By: peacewish On: September 27, 2003 03:26 EDT
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I swear, your little bit with Kurama is funnier than anything I've ever read - not that your actual story isn't funny either! comedy is such a gift, be sure and cherish this talent you have. can't wait until the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Hell's lil Bitch On: September 27, 2003 00:05 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is great its so funny and by the way u should have an inu/kag lemon! *grins mischieviously*he he he ..... well anyways Leave My Darling Kurama A-L-O-N-E,ALONE!!!!! stop taking his boxers! got it?!?! Hey Kura-chan U should threaten that 'woman' with ur death tree. she might leave u alone then^_^. & dont worry if she doesnt *wispers to kurama* "i have the best lawyer on the face of the earth. never lost one case. u can borrow him if u like." well anyways im waiting for ur next update!
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Title: NOOOO!!!!
Reviewed By: YamiNeko [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2003 11:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHERE'S THE REST?! WHERE IS IT!!! *twitches* i DON'T SEE THE REST!! iS THERE MORE?! *looks at table covered with empty double esspresso cans* MMMM....mmmmm...MOOOORRREE!!! Okay, okay, I'm... calmer now... Maybe you should name yourself THE GREAT UNDIE CAPER or MAGIC FINGERS... =^n__n^=
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Reviewed By: oracle44 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2003 18:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
so, so cute. keep it up. good work.
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Reviewed By: Crystal Singer On: September 12, 2003 20:10 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please write more, longer chapters. You are so gifted in your timing, and delivery of your zingers.Let Hojo make an overture to Kagome that Inu Yasha or Kouga would misunderstand...so they can be the knight to the rescue. |
Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2003 11:25 EDT
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Sorry I havn't been writing you any reviews lately. First my computer wouldn't boot up. And after it that was fixed the keyboard gives out on me! I couldn't type the letters: 'e','a','r','d', or work the space bar! (And I think that the left windows button is on the blink, too.) But My dad got me a new-used computer but I won't get it up and running until Sunday. Just wanted you to know that I am still reading! And I will give you many long comments when I am back in the swing of things. Ja Ne.
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Reviewed By: Arc [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2003 14:08 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I, being somewhat obssessed with wolves, cannot express you how overjoyed noting that Kouga has a semi-positive in this story makes me. While the idea has been done before (and is the most common type of Mary-Sue plot found in this genre) you wrtie this very, very well. I would applaud you, but these blasted ergonomic keyboards make that rather difficult to do.
A few of my favorite lines and why:
1. "I know they're demonic snake monsters and all..."Hojo? Shippo peeked around a corner to find Hojo holding a bowl of food and a perplexed expression. "...but why was their breath so bad?"
This is an excellently delivered line. Something about the first part is intangibly comic and very appealing. I can just see somebody saying, 'I know they're demonic snake monsters and all'
2.Kouga shrugged, gulping down a mouthful of rice, "They probably eat humans." He shook his head, "I remember how some of my wolves would get. I tell you, it almost wasn't worth the -what?"
Here Kouga seems more like the Alpha that he really is-- you keep to the true attitude in a pack. It is also in character with things Kouga has said in the past. This line reminds me of when Kouga lifted one of his wolves to prevent it from eating Shippo, saying, "You're getting fat!"
3. Miroku suddenly turned to the wolf prince. "Would you like to go get drunk?"
Classic, classic line. yum. |
Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2003 00:16 EDT
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This just keeps getting better and better! I said it before and I 'll say it again...I love when they fight it is so funny!
So no one still has not told Kagome of Hojo's fears? Someone will let it slip sooner or later. How long is Koga going to stay? And finally a chapter that didn't end with Sango covered in up chucked chunks. (isn't she happy)
I need to know what happens next. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: classified On: August 24, 2003 04:06 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
good story, you should write some yu yu stories. juts a suggestion |
Reviewed By: pearlcat [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2003 22:13 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is really yummy! i cant wait to read the next chapter! i feel bad for kurama, but how much are you charging for his undergarments? |
Reviewed By: Raye-Rei [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2003 21:15 EDT
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UPDATE!!!!! This is soooooo good! Keep it up! ^_^
Raye-Rei |
Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2003 03:31 EDT
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I mean the last section, bottom paragraph. Gomen!
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