| "This Can't Be Good" Reviews/Comments [ 265 ] |
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Reviewed By: Raye-Rei [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2003 17:14 EDT
Comment/Review:
LOL!!! Loved the neutered conversation. That sent me into a fit of laughter, I almost fell out of my chair! I couldn't breathe! Keep it up!
Raye-Rei |
Reviewed By: GeshronTyler On: June 10, 2003 17:55 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, this story is getting better and better.
I just loved the ear-scratching scene. LOL!!
I have this nagging suspicion that Hojo
might have some Miko and Hanyou in his ancestry...
Or maybe that's too easy.
Looking forward to more. |
Reviewed By: Paws [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2003 11:49 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Uhh so this was Shippo's plan of tortures for both Inu and Hojo? *grins* The little Kit sure is going to have fun then! *laughs* |
Reviewed By: Raye-Rei [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2003 19:31 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's sweet, it's funny, and it's highly entertaining. I loved the 'scratching the ears' part. Inu was sooo cute, and it was soooo funny when he tried to hide it. LOL, Hojo's afraid of Shippou. Me likie!! Keep it up! ^_^
Raye-Rei |
Reviewed By: HardCandyVegetto On: June 09, 2003 16:59 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this story.. it's cute... in character... and well.. it's so cute! i love it. |
Reviewed By: Paws [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2003 21:59 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Ohhh I Loved that bit of Fluff between Kagome and InuYasha! More like it!! Hobo shouldn't have interrupted at that time!? Grrrr.
Maybe Hobo should see InuYasha slay another demon! Then he'd know what he'd have to face if he tries any moves on Kagome! *snickers* |
Reviewed By: Paws [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2003 20:27 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
*blinks* Ok, What is that thing on Hobo's neck anyway?? Some sort of protection tailsman? |
Reviewed By: Paws [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2003 20:01 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
*laughs* Oh it gets more and more twisted for the Guys don't it!?? *chuckles* Oh what if it all ends up that he's actually not as Miroku thinks he is and that he's just Dense?! By the way...what was he going to say when InuYasha interrupted him with the tree branch? Hobo is 1/4 what?? |
Reviewed By: Paws [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2003 19:45 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
You know you really have me thinking about Hojo now that you had Miroku think such things! Way to Go! |
Reviewed By: Alena On: May 30, 2003 20:57 EDT
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This is funny for sure! Looking forward to the next part! |
Reviewed By: MommyRogers [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2003 00:35 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loving it - very fresh! I'm hooked. Please update soon! |
Reviewed By: Gita [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2003 18:15 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the originality of your concept, and the boy's reactions to Hojo. I've been waiting for a good fic on this topic for a long time, and I'm not dissapointed. I can't wait to see where your going with this, and I would love to see more about what Hojo himself is thinking. and the Sango angle is very fresh and interesting. I always wondered how the girls would react around someone who isn't a pervert or a jerk... Please keep up the good work, and thank you for the frequent updates! That must be a lot of work... |
Reviewed By: Kachie-chan On: May 08, 2003 15:50 EDT
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Update soon, please! |
Reviewed By: gal On: May 06, 2003 14:02 EDT
Comment/Review:
teehee! I'm enjoying it--please continue :) |
Reviewed By: hanyou99 On: April 29, 2003 20:18 EDT
Comment/Review:
If it's been done before, I haven't read it, but this is really good and I'll be expecting more chapters. I can't wait to read what's going to go on in Miroku's mind!! I also enjoy reading Inu-Yasha being jealous, hope there's more to come.......Later... |
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