| "This Can't Be Good" Reviews/Comments [ 265 ] |
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Reviewed By: chris On: July 10, 2003 00:22 EDT
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update or else! |
Reviewed By: Mellie On: July 08, 2003 14:00 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am having fun reading this, you are walking the fine line on your humor and your writing is easy to read. Ideas are consistant with storyline with just the right amount of frisky attitude. Bring in Kouga and don't forget to let us see what happens when they go back through the well, how will Hojo's attitude change? |
Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2003 14:21 EDT
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I am very happy with the updates. I was laughing so hard I had tears in my eyes, my family thought I was crazy! I could hardly contain myself as Hojo finally realized that InuYasha and Kagome had a 'thing' and still yet Koga has to be explained. Is Koga going to show up too? Pleaseeee say yes. Even if he is there for only a brief moment. It would to funny if InuYasha had to deal with both Koga and Hojo! And in return Hojo would get an even better idea of the situation that he has stumbled into. And how does Miroku take Sango's rising intrest with the boy who only has eyes for Kagome. But on a lesser not Chapter 16 was a little confusing. The part where you are trying to tell us how InuYasha and Hojo are positioned could be worded better. And I am slow but I just found out that Koga is spell like this and not Kouga. ( It looked right to me, too. )Be awaiting to next update. TA-TA
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Reviewed By: BakaGajiin On: July 06, 2003 13:34 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is such a good story! Everytime I see you've updated my heart actually does a little skip of joy! Please continue, for this story is both amusing and intriguing! (BTW, what's up with Hojo and Shippo...?) |
Reviewed By: appelcline [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2003 18:49 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
More? Please? We humbly plead for more! |
Reviewed By: Aphrael On: July 03, 2003 12:21 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
::laughs:: I love the part where Miroku talks about Hojo being a 'natural'. Keep writing it, or I will hunt you down Mwahahahaha!(j/k) |
Reviewed By: princess_impatience On: July 03, 2003 07:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic! It seems that hojo is finally showing that he has something in his head, sort of. please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon! i don't think i can stand waiting to see what happens next |
Reviewed By: MommyRogers [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2003 21:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay - this fic keeps getting better and better. I just finished Chap. 15 and I LMAO! I would say in all honesty that this fic is the best one I have ever read. Period. On MM, on FF, on the internet. Sheer brilliance! Characters stay in character, dialogue and description are seamless. Technically speaking, the grammar and spelling are excellent. The plot is believable, well thought out, and the humour is inspired. It leaves me thirsting for more (now now now)! An exquisite read. |
Reviewed By: nekobaka [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2003 16:32 EDT
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you cant leave us haning like that!!! s not fair!!!!
i want more - hehe i want to see inu and hojo's confruntation giggle |
Reviewed By: kookie On: July 02, 2003 16:02 EDT
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I look forward to every update!
Thanks so much for writing and keep it up! :) |
Reviewed By: Aisuru On: July 01, 2003 16:12 EDT
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What a great chapter! I am loving this story. |
Reviewed By: luvli guurl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2003 15:21 EDT
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OMGOMGOMG this is the best fic evert please update soon. or iwill see no reason to continue living. thanx
^.^
U |
Reviewed By: Geshron Tyler On: June 29, 2003 18:22 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It took me a while to start reading this fic, since most of the "A new person falls down the well" fics don't catch my interest. But since you continued posting your fic, I gave it try, and was greatly amused! ^_^ I do like fics where a character or characters that have been out of the loop of the main plot suddenly get drawn in. I've always hoped that there would be more story arcs that would take place in modern Tokyo, but the other way is just as good. In a way, I'm itching to see Hojo's reaction to the grim realities Kagome and company have had to deal with, so that someone else from Kagome's time has an appreciation for what she's going through. Her family is quite supportive, and I really wonder if Takahashi will reveal that Kagome's mother knows more than she lets on. Still, I can't help recall all the devastated villages, the cruelty and death that Kagome has been a witness too, and wish that there be another witness to her courage and strength of spirit.
Write ON!! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Lazy Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2003 16:11 EDT
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Stoopid Hojo; it seems now to me that he thinks of the demons in the group as subhuman. Prejudice! Racism! Give 'im what-for, boys! |
Reviewed By: Precious On: June 26, 2003 22:55 EDT
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I read Ch 13 and I liked it. Keep the up dates coming!! And Kurama is a great side story.
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