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Title: outstanding
Reviewed By: -o-r-a-c-l-e [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2008 18:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you must continue with your writing this series. continue your sequel. i need it more than anything. if it helps encourage you more to do it, know that i have printed out this novel here, and showed it to everyone i know that reads fruits basket and fanfics. it is by far the best i know. continue!
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Title: I love this story!
Reviewed By: Tohru819 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2006 00:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my gosh! You're one of my favorite authers ever! You write so beautifully, and you know the characters that you wrote about so well, almost as if they were your own creations. I cried so many times, this story is so touching and wonderful. Please never stop writing!
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Reviewed By: yes-im-married-2-Ayame On: September 21, 2005 02:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's great! omg, I thought this was very well written...I've read it to everone I know... and yes we cried...and yes we hate Akito even more! But still, we're all looking forward to the completion of the sequel! and you bet that we'll be reading all the other fanfics written under this author... really I do recommend it! ^_~ Ja, ne...
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Title: Hidden Emotions
Reviewed By: luvyuki101 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2005 18:13 CDT
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This was the first fan fic ive evr read. I strted reading it a few weeks ago. It was so beautiful,probably the most emotional fic i will evr read. Keep tuching others w/ wht u write
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Reviewed By: NeverTooOld [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2005 12:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Outstanding story. You have grasped the essence of the characters perfectly. Akito's need to control the world around him because of the burden of his cursed life is shown so many times, from his initial attack on Tohru, all the way to his final revenge of forcing her to betray the ones that she loves in order to save them. The interactions between Kyo, Yuki, and Tohru are very well done. As they spend more time on their own, they begin to grow and become stronger, but it really isn't until Yuki and Kyo tell her the TRUE reason for their constant fighting, that they begin to truly grow up. The pain and guilt that Hatori feels over removing peoples memories was shown very clearly: He does it because Akito orders him to, but Hatori claims full responsibility for following those orders. Anyways, I'll be reading your sequel next, and I am looking forward to the search for Tohru very much. Thank you for sharing your time and inspiration with us all. Jon Schuman NeverTooOld
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Title: opmh
Reviewed By: awww! On: July 07, 2005 02:24 CDT
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Omg I am seriously crying. Im gonna kill Akito. I love Shigure in this. He is so kind and brave. I also liked how you made the plan for the sequel. I just hope it has a happy ending. Omg Akito should be killed! Omg it would be so cool if Hatori only did a partial mind erase of the people. that would be cool. but if you think about it, the mind is like a computer. memories cant be erased. only put behind subconsious walls so it cant be found. so they need something to work as a key and open it up again. yay!
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Reviewed By: ShigureLuvr On: June 28, 2005 14:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
One, two, three...Akito was soooo evil. I was crying so hard when i got to the last sentence of the last chapter. I'm sooo glad yur writing a sequel. sooooo sad... I love how you did Shigure all smart and kind and all...^.^
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Title: Awsome
Reviewed By: Katara [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2005 19:24 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was a wonderful story. full of emotion and yet so caring. i loved it.
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Reviewed By: YukiAndKyouLover#? On: November 17, 2004 16:15 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!! I just loved this fic so much!!! *pauses to wipe away the tears streaming down her face and blow her nose* You are an excellent writer, but man! you are evil to have the story end like that! *looks down at her two empty tissue boxes* Eeeeevvvvvvviiiiiilllllll!!! (Actually, I thought the ending was good -- very sweet. I just never thought that you would have the story turn out that way!!!) I really enjoyed the descriptions in this, as well as the way you developed the characters.....you added alot to them, yet kept them the same old people that we have grown to love. Way to go!!! I have but two more things to say: keep up the good work, and thank God for sequels!!!!! ^__~ Ja ne!!!
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Reviewed By: Steffie-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2004 21:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow... that is to say. WOW. I was in tears the last couple of chapters and I have to know if there is a sequel. I do hope so, but at the same time, I hope not. It is so sweet because you just KNOW that she'll see them again and she'll know them again. I...words can't describe it.
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Reviewed By: bluemoonshark On: May 04, 2004 23:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You didn't make me cry until the very last line of the last chapter. Then, I did, even if just for a moment. Well done. This is a marvelous work, nicely avoiding most of the cliches associated with fanfiction and a fluffy anime series. I look forward to reading more of Resolutions and any other work that you put up.
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Title: YAY!
Reviewed By: Narakusmiasma [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2004 19:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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YAY! I admit it, I'm a sucker for Triangles....*sigh* I really like this story! It's really good! I DO hope you will put a lemon in it!! A lemon with Yuki and Tohru and then one with Kyo and Tohru!! Oh, I can't wait! It's nice to see some FB fics that aren't one shot PWP smut....although those are nice some times too. ;-P BTW, you are SO going on my favorites!
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Reviewed By: Tsukitani [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2003 22:39 CDT
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*sniff, sniff* Waaahhh! I cannot begin to tell you how much I've enjoyed this fic! And the ending! I was about to rip your throat out for what you did to poor Tohru...but, well...*glomps Carpetfibers* Thank you soooo much! And isn't it just like Shigure to know all and see all? *sighs happily* Ahm. Now on to 'Resolutions'! |
Reviewed By: Kendricks Alashane On: August 11, 2003 09:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it. Keep on going I'm dieing to know what happens next! I can't believe I skipped over this the first fewe times. |
Reviewed By: hatuka On: August 08, 2003 18:04 CDT
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More!!!
I dont think I can rightfully rate this fic until it's finished. But pretty far it's great. :) |
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