| "Baby sitting Demons" Reviews/Comments [ 87 ] |
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Reviewed By: PandaChan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2003 15:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I luv this fanfic! Keep writing! =3 |
Reviewed By: the_friendly_void On: August 01, 2003 12:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I know that if you look at the ratings, they look phony because their all tens, but I loved your fic so much I can't remember running across any mistakes. Please keep up the awesome work! |
Reviewed By: Hiei's #1 girl On: August 01, 2003 01:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'v read this story over 5 times.So PLESE PUT UP A NEW STORY PLESE!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Hiei's #1 girl On: August 01, 2003 01:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'v read this story over 5 times.So PLESE PUT UP A NEW STORY PLESE!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Hiei's #1 girl On: August 01, 2003 01:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'v read this story over 5 times.So PLESE PUT UP A NEW STORY PLESE!!!!! |
Reviewed By: black_rose On: July 30, 2003 15:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
i forgot to add you should have Hiei get sick becouse of the sweet snow! |
Reviewed By: black_rose On: July 30, 2003 15:52 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was an awsome story!!!!!!!!please write more!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Ice Dragon On: July 27, 2003 23:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nicely written! i love your story! its so funny when kurama put Keiko's bra on his fox ears! lol and it was surprising that Hiei kissed Kurama on the cheek. its sweet and all but are you a yaoi writer? just wondering, keep on writing! ^^ |
Reviewed By: Eirwen Lai [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2003 19:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE IT!!!! I JUST FINISHED ALL YOU HAVE WRITTEN AND I CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE! I LOVE THE PLOT SO FAR AND I'M SURE YOU HAVE GREAT I DEAS FOR WHAT HAPPENS NEXT. PLEASE UPDATE AS FAST AS YOU CAN!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Eirwen Lai [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2003 19:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE IT!!!! I JUST FINISHED ALL YOU HAVE WRITTEN AND I CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE! I LOVE THE PLOT SO FAR AND I'M SURE YOU HAVE GREAT I DEAS FOR WHAT HAPPENS NEXT. PLEASE UPDATE AS FAST AS YOU CAN!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: LOVER-OF-HIEI aka Otaku Hoshi On: July 25, 2003 12:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
SO GOOD AGAIN!!! I LOVE IT!!! Especially when Hiei kisses Kurama ^_^ That is my favorite part so far. I really like it, you are such a tallented writer! But, I have a quick question for you: Where do you live and how old are you? I don't know why, I just want to know.. Anyway, I love all of your stories. ALL OF THEM!!! I am on vacation right now, so I cannot update my fanfiction to often. What is going to happen when Hiei and Kurama turn back to normal? I cannot wait to see! I would really love it if they were a couple in the end ^_^ heehee But, I understand perfectly if you do not want those two together in your story. I just really like them together, but I am just one person! Bye-Chu for now, update soon!
***********Otaku~Hoshi |
Reviewed By: Hiei's Girl On: July 24, 2003 19:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is by far one of the cutest fanfics that I've ever read. I love the baby versions of Hiei and Kurama. |
Reviewed By: Jessi-chan On: July 21, 2003 16:45 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hi! I was wondering if you would add a new character...Jessica she has long blond hair, blue eyes, and she is about 16 years old. She is a koorime ice demon, she is an old friend of Yukina's. She comes to visit her and ends up helping her with Hiei and Kurama,only she can't help but wonder why Yukina has children... |
Reviewed By: Jessi-chan On: July 21, 2003 16:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE this fanfic!!!!! Yusuke sounds just like my dad! When I was little I acted just like Hiei.
My little brother acted just like Kurama!You know he got all the attention because he was diferent!!! Anyway Keiko seemed just like my mom! |
Reviewed By: sereana lita [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2003 15:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
Make Kurama sick. I love Kurama, but I love him getting attention. Anyways it goes because he did snuggle closer to Hiei last night in the story.
But you don't have too. I sill love this Fic!!
Update soon. |
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