| "Baby sitting Demons" Reviews/Comments [ 87 ] |
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Reviewed By: sereana lita [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2003 22:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
Yay, you kept your promise!! To update more. Cute smile. Yami Akira Hmph, Took you long enough.
SsereanaLita makes an angry face don't insult him/her, him/her stories are real good!! Yami Akira Yeah, whatever. yawn. Come on Yami A. let's go home. Said her body double. Go to FictionPress.com or FanFiction.net to visit Akira and Yami Akira. Go to Akira the Wanderer. Oh well, the fic was reaL, real,real good!! WRITE MORE!!! |
Reviewed By: gundamgirl66 On: July 16, 2003 07:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love it write more becuse they are sooo cute when there little lol i want baby hiei |
Reviewed By: sereana lita On: July 14, 2003 00:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
I love this fanfic and can't wait for more!! It's
rare to find a good yyh chibi fan fic. And keep your promise about finishing it!! but make the chapters long. oh yay! i check this site and fan fiction.net for your updates everyday:> |
Reviewed By: Fire Kitsume On: July 12, 2003 17:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story! Keep writing more chapters and I'll keep reading them ^_^. The story is so funny, I can't stop laughing! I love Hiei and Kurama forever! |
Reviewed By: chrisitne(abc7_123@hotmail.com On: July 12, 2003 17:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it write more please i think hiei and kurmam are so cute and the way they act when they are little lol so cute love your story |
Reviewed By: EvilChick666 On: July 09, 2003 17:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
I think this story is the best i`ve read so far update it soon pls!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Hiei lover On: July 07, 2003 13:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i rated it this because it's the best fanfic i ever read! it's funny to think of Hiei and Kurama as kids! |
Reviewed By: katie On: July 07, 2003 13:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i rated it this because it's the best fanfic i ever read! it's funny to think of Hiei and Kurama as kids! |
Reviewed By: Baka-chan On: July 07, 2003 12:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pleasa try to finish the fanfic |
Reviewed By: kuramaluver On: July 06, 2003 21:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like it very much!!!!!!!!!!!!!! xcept 4 da grammar............... |
Reviewed By: LOVER-OF-HIEI [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2003 22:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi! I really like you stories! I know I do not copy you, and I know you don't copy me! I plan my stories ahead of time, so it is actually almost impossible for me to copy. I really love your stories a lot! I haven't gotten a chance to read Hope For Fox yet. I have only read the first two chapters, I will finish this following week. I am also gonna work a lot on my own fanfics ^_^
About the overall rating being a 9 is because I miss Hiei and Kurama playing together, just them. I feel sorry for poor Hiei sometimes... Anyway, keep up the GREAT work! Do not give up, your stories are to good for that!!!!!!!!!!!!! Bye-Chu!
***********Otaku~Hoshi
P.S. Please update Hiei And The Umbrella as well! That was the fanfic that I read of yours first! It is very special ^_^ I love it because it remindes me so much of mine, and yet you did not copy me! It is so cool! |
Reviewed By: LOVER-OF-HIEI [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2003 22:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi! Just reviewing again. I think that Youka is cute. I just kinda liked it better before. It is still good. You know, I really think that we two have the most similar ideas! I swear I did not copy, but I was planning to have them go to an amusment park in one of my stories. So, if you ever read it, please do not get mad at me and think I coppied, because I did not ^_^ Anyway, keep up the good work!
*********Otaku~Hoshi
P.S. I really do not know why, but the reason my rating went down was because, well, in a way I kinda think Youka took over Hiei (in a little way), well at least Hiei and Kurama's friendship. Do not get me wrong, I think she is cute ^_^ I really do! I think she is a wonderful idea, I just kinda liked just Hiei and Kurama. But thats just me ^_^ |
Reviewed By: A On: July 04, 2003 17:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this fun fic because it kept me wanting more after each chapter. I felt that it was a great story and i would love to read more! |
Reviewed By: Mrs. Jaganshi Hiei On: July 03, 2003 15:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought it was funny, and I just hop Hiei doesn't remember that Yusuke spanked him and all that other punishment, because if he did, I know Hiei would fix Hiei so he would never have children. |
Reviewed By: mistyangel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2003 18:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ooh, very funny! Usually you read fics where Hiei has to babysit. Me like! plz get next chapter up soon. |
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