| "Baby sitting Demons" Reviews/Comments [ 87 ] |
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Reviewed By: A On: July 04, 2003 17:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this fun fic because it kept me wanting more after each chapter. I felt that it was a great story and i would love to read more! |
Reviewed By: Mrs. Jaganshi Hiei On: July 03, 2003 15:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought it was funny, and I just hop Hiei doesn't remember that Yusuke spanked him and all that other punishment, because if he did, I know Hiei would fix Hiei so he would never have children. |
Reviewed By: mistyangel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2003 18:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ooh, very funny! Usually you read fics where Hiei has to babysit. Me like! plz get next chapter up soon. |
Reviewed By: yurkara On: July 01, 2003 16:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the story so far. I can just imagine both Hiei and Kurama as little kids. I wonder if they will ever get turn back into adults. IT a great story so far keep up the good work |
Reviewed By: Koori Heishi On: June 30, 2003 19:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the cutest fan fiction I have ever read! I had a smile on my face the whole time! Please, keep writing, it is very entertaining! |
Reviewed By: Athena On: June 28, 2003 13:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I want another chapter*crosses arms and pouts* I am a little kitsune too, see *points to fake fox ears on her head and then turns around to show a fake fox tail* See. Now, I want another chapter or I'll cry. *scrunches up face and holds it until another chapter is produced* |
Reviewed By: Flameamber On: June 27, 2003 22:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
FFFFFFFFFFUUUUUUUUUUNNNNNNN!!!! Keep goin'! |
Reviewed By: LOVER-OF-HIEI [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2003 22:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE THIS STORY I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT!!!!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! You must be the greatest author of all time!!! Well, your fanfiction are my very favorite along with this one fanfiction bu Youko-Kurama called Addicted To You. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!! I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT UPDATE FOR ME AND EVERYBODY ELSE OUT THERE!!! WE ARE ALL WAITING, I BOW DOWN TO YOUR FEET!!!!!!!!
***********Otkau~Hoshi |
Reviewed By: 1richlittleangel On: June 26, 2003 16:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
It was goood!
I READ THIS BEFORE ON FANFICTION.NET |
Reviewed By: sailormoonmarisa On: June 26, 2003 12:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I rated your fan fic this way because thats the way it is! I give it two thumbs up. It what so funny the way baby Kurama learned to cry to get what he wants and that Hiei got the spanking he finnaly deserved. I your story Hiei sounds alot cuttier than he is when he is grown up. |
Reviewed By: sailormoonmarisa On: June 26, 2003 12:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I rated your fan fic this way because thats the way it is! I give it two thumbs up. I what so funny the way baby Kurama learned to cry to get what he wants and that Hiei got the spanking he finnaly deserved. I your story Hiei sounds alot cuttier than he is when he is grown up. |
Reviewed By: Rae On: June 26, 2003 05:20 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a very funny story. plz update soon |
Reviewed By: Black Dragon On: June 25, 2003 19:43 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
IT WAS GREAT I DID LAUGH BUT IT WASN'T AS FUNNY AS I THOUGHT IT WOULD BE!!!!
HiEi AnD kUrAmA
FOREVER |
Reviewed By: ShadowsLight [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2003 18:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
I love the little kiss Hiei gave Kurama, so Kawaii! Update soon, so I can read some more of you XiaoXiong^_^! |
Reviewed By: Ally Hearts On: August 18, 2003 20:18 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY you updated, twice! Like your other work its good, but too short. ^-^ |
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