| "Foxy Ol' Injured Bardock gets Laid" Reviews/Comments [ 42 ] |
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Reviewed By: AMCM74 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2003 02:04 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
because you stole the lemon crown I decided to review... you shamless begger you! ... I hear ya Bardock. ummmmm dont go all ITS a clone on me either! |
Reviewed By: delicious On: July 15, 2003 07:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
After reading the other reviews, need I say more?
I mean...DAMN!!!! I NEED MORE.
MORE,MORE,MORE,MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This stuff is beyond good!
ahem....ok, that was it. |
Reviewed By: christabeleve On: July 12, 2003 12:29 EDT
Comment/Review:
I agee with Susan you are The Hentai Queen and Bardock is soooooo foxy. |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2003 15:48 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DAMN!!! I might have to replace my keyboard after that droolfest! Wow! that was.. that was... I can't even think straight, that's how good it was!
note to self: never read any more of bardockgurl's smut while hubby's at work >.< 6 o'clock just isn't going to come fast enough! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: July 11, 2003 12:40 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Jesus Christ Barb, I agree with Mel. Post a warning will ya?! My panties burst into flames!!This has got to be the longest and most delicious lemon that I've ever read. I bet you had a blast writing this fic and it shows. ALL HAIL THE NEW HENTAI QUEEN!! |
Reviewed By: Demetz On: July 11, 2003 03:43 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have NEVER read a lemon that long and that well written. That was absolutely amazing. Giving perfect 10s is unfair, this fic deserves perfect 10-to-the-third-powers. |
Reviewed By: manawolf [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2003 02:41 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooooooh myyyy.....
There's not a blasted thing wrong with this, in fact I daresay you went far above and beyond the call of duty.
Poor Bardock, tormented for so long... and the alien female, the description was rather like Zarbon's species. Would I be correct in that?
Anyway, if you put out any more material, I will enthusiastically devour it! |
Reviewed By: GreenEyes276 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2003 01:56 EDT
Comment/Review:
*twitches* *curls up* *more shaking* damn...damn you...dear lord I need to jump into a pool ice cold water after this!! My skin is all hot now, thank you very much! *fans herself*
Wonderful, wonderful, wonderful!! Absolutely fantastic!! You MUST write more like this. Please dont keep your lemon talents from us!
I agree with the other reveiwer about posting a warning because I AM horny as hell now hehehehe =o) |
Reviewed By: dragonzmoon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2003 01:39 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Still very much Staring in shock*
*Closes drooling mouth*
*Blushes*
"Mary had a little lamb, whos fleece-" I slap my cheek madly, to cast out the little voice singing in my head.
*Ahem* Wow- you could have called this:
Lingering negation of the delightful alien sadist, who gets her just saiya-jin desserts! o0' Kami, girl...I was morbidly blushing all though this yummy fic!!! Fantastic writing, don't even knock it!! I love it! |
Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2003 20:48 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First of all, I did NOTHING... except encourage you to use your God-given talent.I have loved this fic from the very beginning, and I have grown to love it more through each revision and change. This fic settles it... you are going to be the QUEEN of lemons before you know it... and the rest of us had better move over and make room! |
Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2003 17:57 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You really need to post a warning on this fic that people shouldn't go swimming (or driving, or direct traffic, or skydiving, or attempt any strenuous activity... well, they can do one strenuous activity) for at least three hours after reading this.
Also, people with heart conditions should not read this fic, nor should pregnant women, nor teen-age boys.
People that hold political offices should definitely not read this fic unless they are into scandal.
Don't read this fic if there's a full moon.
In other words, this fic will make you horny as hell!
Thank you very much. |
Reviewed By: mali On: July 10, 2003 17:42 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Shit, girl! This is perhaps the best lemon I've ever read! |
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