| "Foxy Ol' Injured Bardock gets Laid" Reviews/Comments [ 42 ] |
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Reviewed By: Fozzy On: January 25, 2013 23:52 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so glad your wrote this because there are so few good Bardock lemons out there. And what a lemon this was! The pure Saiyin instinct is, like other reviewers have mentioned, raw. I really liked the...hmmmm. Can I say tenderness Bardock exuded? I would love to see this version of Bardock coming home to his mate and treating her to a dose of Saijin male dominance. You really brought out all the good qualities of an attractive mate. Wish you would write more! |
Title: Sigh...
Reviewed By: Kricket [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2008 23:40 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved how Bardock was characterized. :B
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Title: Amazing
Reviewed By: Aridor On: July 29, 2007 11:29 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are extremely talented and I hope that you go somewhere with your writing.
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Reviewed By: goliath184 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2006 16:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
a great fic but at points it was a little difficult to picture although i love bardocks little revenge. there needs to be like a sequal to this.
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Reviewed By: ilex9 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2005 07:49 EDT
Comment/Review:
uh... you actually expect me to write some kind of review that makes any rational sense after reading that?! good show. ;)
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Reviewed By: SnowyBlackOwl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2005 13:35 EDT
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I'll be honest with you and tell you that I haven't seen such a well-writen DBZ lemon in such a tantalizingly long time! Bardock was somewhat instinctively and rather sexy, so ... I can't even find a word to describe you greatly you portrayed him! It was wonderful! It was a wonderful read!
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Title: Foxy Ol' Injured Bardock gets Laid
Reviewed By: shadow_of_the_shades [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2005 00:50 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy SHIT!!! THAT was the BEST :EMON I've EVER read!! You were SHY of THAT at a point?! I'd give ya' a 1000 if I could. That was perfect!! I was amazed at the length of this story, but I loved each word of it!! That was so unbelievable! I absolutely loved Bardock before reading this, but you, my friend, have taken that to another level as far as I can tell! I wish I knew what the hell happened to the doctor after that. *sigh* *cries* I'M SOOOOO HAPPY FOR YOU!! *slaps self* Well...one thing for certain...you never went out of character on that one. ^-^ lol. I completely congradulate ya'. WRITE ANOTHER!! Tchao! ^-^
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Title: I thought you said this fic was crap?!
Reviewed By: Lady Pesh [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2005 00:00 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Barb, you liar. Here I was all prepped to fill your head with wondrous delusions of grandeur, and now you've stuck me with telling you the truth of your grandeur. -_-' That was positively delectable. The sex was hot without being dirty. Bardock was irresistibly sexy. In fact, I may just have to force his payment out of him for that clone he ordered. *notices innocent bystanders* (Don't ask, folks.) The torture was titillating beyond compare. Seriously, you rival Geeb in the hot writing category. Now you're going to have to suffer through more reviews from me on more of your fics. That's it, woman. You're doomed! Anyhoo, thanks for the great read, Barb. It was exquisite. *eyes Bardie appreciatively* On to the next fic! Bwahahaha!
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Title: *shocked senseless*
Reviewed By: greengal48 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2005 13:49 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
my god! if i could give you 100's, i would! this is one of the best lemons i have read for db/z/gt! i must admit that i love vegeta but... you're making me rethink things. please write more about bardock. you seem to do him justice. *grins wickedly*
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Title: One-Shot
Reviewed By: Plyric [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2004 01:51 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
VERY NICELY DONE!!!! I love the torture Bardock and the doctor put each other through, right up to the very end! Wonderful piece of work!!! =)
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Reviewed By: B-Dog-1 On: November 05, 2004 08:15 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was quite posssibly the best DBZ lemon that I have ever read.You really should continue writing things (i.e. pure smut) like this, as you obviously have a natural talent for it. In all honesty, there are only a few evangelion lemons that I think were written better. In short, keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: B-Dog-1 On: November 05, 2004 08:15 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was quite posssibly the best DBZ lemon that I have ever read.You really should continue writing things (i.e. pure smut) like this, as you obviously have a natural talent for it. In all honesty, there are only a few evangelion lemons that I think were written better. In short, keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: anonymous 105 On: September 11, 2004 20:33 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was probably one of the best fics I've ever read... I'm usually obsessed with Vegeta but you're starting to make me question my loyalty...
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Reviewed By: debbiechannotloggedin On: September 02, 2004 19:31 EDT
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you didn't think I'd do it, didya? I went back and read this (yet again--prob my 4th time since May) and am reviewing again, only to remind you that if the lemon you write dear Raditz is 1/10th this lovely, there will be dancing in the streets. I can't believe you are lemon-shy--this piece is, like, amazing. Sorry I can't say anything more eloquent but I'm a little breathless right now....
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Title: Red HOT!!!
Reviewed By: Vegge's Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2004 00:08 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Damn girl! You know I'm in love with Vegeta but DAMN!!! That was hot! I like your monkey. I might just steal him. ~_^ Excellent story. You write wonderfully. And although I already like Bardock, you have made me love him immensely. I'd love to read more fics from you about him (hint, hint).
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