| "Foxy Ol' Injured Bardock gets Laid" Reviews/Comments [ 42 ] |
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Title: Oh My God!
Reviewed By: Black Joker On: August 13, 2004 03:22 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was one of the most if not THE most beautifully written lemons i have ever read. The sex was tasteful and highly erotic and the slow torture you put bardock through was geniusly written. I highly commend you for the hard work and diligent care you put into the writing and creating of this awe-inspiring piece of litterature. This was truly the brain-child of an accomplished and masterful weaver-of-words. I salute you.
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Reviewed By: yume_kai [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2004 21:01 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think this definitely showed some Saiyan nature *smirks* Badass Bardock... so sexy and primal.
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Reviewed By: SouthernSaiya-jinStealingHussy On: August 12, 2004 18:20 EDT
Comment/Review:
This fic is like a well-made lasagne. If you put it up and take it out again, it just gets better. (See, that's why they booted me off the Forrest Gump script writing team.) I think if you had used any Saiya-jin other than Bardock, the characters wouldn't have fit as perfectly as they did. No, The Commander did not make me say that!
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Reviewed By: Kethry [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2004 13:51 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
**pant pant pant , fan fan fan** Oh my sweet goddess! I need a ice cold shower now! This is the best lemon I have ever read! I..... I.... I can't think beyond that statment right now. **pant pant** **gets up from her desk** you know I think I will take that cold shower now. OH MY!
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Reviewed By: sarsa On: August 12, 2004 12:35 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
one of the best pwp, I have read in awhile. you really impressed me, the whole thing seemed to flow very smoothly and it was described just right. You ended the story with great satisfaction and left the reader feeling as if they could orgasm in their pants. Bravo!
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Reviewed By: Elenek [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2004 22:08 EDT
Comment/Review:
Still on my mission to correct my evil non-reviewingness. *Stutter Stutter* Wow!! I need a cold shower every time I read this. The Ending ... lmao. You're right. Bardock needs to be the main character much more often. -El-
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Title: Wow. Just...wow.
Reviewed By: AltairKaosu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2004 00:59 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That has got to be one of, if not the best lemon I've ever read. And with Bardock too! You rock my socks! Keep up the fantastic work.
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Title: oh my....
Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2004 20:38 EDT
Comment/Review:
someone could've warned a girl. my, my, my. *fans face* debbiechan
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Title: Excellent!
Reviewed By: BBoom [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2004 00:22 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my god.. you rule! you knoW, i Really would love IT if you writE MORE often.. LittErally, you are My gOddess. Nobody who diSlikes your fic should disgrace the world (or their families) with their preseNce! Or they Will be shot! P.S. Your fic is good, to say the least! =0
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Reviewed By: Hunny On: December 28, 2003 13:17 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've read it before and I'll read it again. I absolutewly love it.
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: Blue Siren( I wanted to log in But toopid MM won't let me) On: December 05, 2003 12:07 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok Two for the Barbaric father of my Radi-kun whi I will be shipping you as soon as I get Bar-kun. One question though...why did that woman had to play those games...has she no heart? After seeing "The bulge" under the sheets the first time I would NOT have walked away ^_~ ANyways this was a superb one shot that was not really a one shot;) Keep it up girl, keep bringing Bardie's sex escapades like only you can! :) BS
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Title: Oh,Wow..
Reviewed By: dragonzmoon [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2003 15:29 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm truly touched Barb, thanks for posting it.. It would have been lost too! *sniff*
This gets better every time I read it!! |
Title: Thats why Im a nurse!
Reviewed By: NSBVEGETA [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2003 22:52 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finally someone that shares my vision Goddamn it that was hot ,sizzing and worse for me cause im studying nursing and when I get to bathe a babe I'll be thinking of this fic *hentai grinn*
Barbara I need some practice in my bathing/patient skills could u let Bardock be my humping rabbit err..... my guinea pig just a few hours if u can spare u know .
Im in need of a good ol cold shower and the need of a sexy doc to fucking bathe me as well
Later!!! |
Title: Holy Shit!!
Reviewed By: Barbara C On: September 13, 2003 13:26 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my gawd!
I can only agree with the other reviewers, this was a fantastic fic!
It's nice to see Bardock in a lemon. He doesn't get enough attention, but you seem to be rectifying that. He's got to be THE sexiest saiyan out there, and now he has one of THE best lemons out there. |
Reviewed By: Dark Fate [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2003 12:12 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmmm... Very nice. I don't normally read het fics, but this one was extremely enjoyable. You definitely have a talent for this. |
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