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Reviewed By: Lady Sesshoumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2003 20:27 CDT
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Whoops. It sounds like Inuyasha has screwed up again...even if it is unintentionally.
I loved the Miroku/Kirara scene...too cute ^^ |
Reviewed By: Sara On: August 03, 2003 05:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This by far, has to be my favourite fanfic ever! please update more and soon! thanks in advance ^^
Laters,
Sara |
Reviewed By: Lady Sesshoumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2003 21:21 CDT
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Poor Inuyasha (with Kagome's sudden depression). I did love the scene with Shippou...and seeing Kagome take Inuyasha's side, for once ^^ |
Reviewed By: Kin-chan Pandun On: July 31, 2003 16:44 CDT
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LMAO, ROFL, OMG!!!!! "'I DON'T THINK I COULD"VE LASTED ANOTHER FIVE MONTHS'"!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?
This is without a doubt the funniest line I have EVER read in ANY fic to date!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Kirisame [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2003 03:23 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey , that was really nice , I love your point ^^
Go on please +.+
Kirisame |
Reviewed By: FV On: July 29, 2003 15:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was good please continue it i would like to see how it comes out |
Reviewed By: Geshron Tyler On: July 29, 2003 13:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my, chapter 8 was just priceless...
The way Kagome's sexual frustration starts boiling
over, and InuYasha is just barely hanging on to his
own libido, because he's afraid of hurting Kagome, and he finally learns he's been worrying over nothing, just had me rolling on the floor.
I applaud you also for making the two of them work for their relationship. While I believe the two do love each other, they have the greatest difficulties at times communicating. The fact that the villagers are by no means universally supportive of the couple is another point I like.
Not because I enjoy the angst, but it adds depth to the villagers, and is more realistic.
Traditionally, a Miko can only be a Miko if a virgin, and unmarried (An important part to the Devil Hunter Yohko Anime (and manga, if one exists)). Also it's usually implied that a Miko loses her powers. Of course, if Kagome were to lose her powers, that would put quite a kink into the story... ^_^ Besides, there often seem to be families whose daughters have traditionally been shrine maidens. Mikos are as far as I know not _just_ shrine maidens, but denote a woman/girl with spiritual/magical powers. Certainly, Tsubaki, the Kuromiko (black priestess as it were)
rival of Kikyo, that tries to poison and control Kagome through her own shards using Naruku's big chunk is evil. She's using demonic possesion to stay young- anyone's guess if she's a virgin, or if that even applies to someone so corrupted. In any case, she still has power.
Assuming Kagome remains powerful (perhaps even gains power)and able to purify the jewel, it would be interesting to see how the villagers, and perhaps other Shintoist/Budhists react to something that defies the common and traditional beliefs. I personally would be tickled pink if Naraku made the same sort of assumptions, and gets
his ass handed to him. ^_^
That said (quite a bit said, actually =P), I like
this story a lot, and I'll continue reading it.
Thiemo Günther |
Reviewed By: Amanda a.k.a. Kazk [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2003 12:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW, wow, wow! I love this fic. Yo really know how to write. I have never Been interested in so many stories by two authors before you and Kira really have a gift for writing. I wish you the best of luck in the continuation of theis and the rest of your stories. WOW!!!
~Amanda a.k.a. Kazk |
Reviewed By: Lady Sesshoumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2003 18:47 CDT
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Oh *wipes tears* Such typical male behavior! Nice work, very cute to see the human side of Inuyasha, worrying about the pup feeling him. |
Reviewed By: AsianGurl On: July 28, 2003 16:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good ! I say it was quite shocjing first and i thought it was about her pms but i was wrong !1 But this is a great story keep on writing dude !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Amanda a.k.a. Kazk [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2003 14:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This everything a great fic need. You really know how to write and I love the fact you update so frequently, please update again soon.
~Amanda a.k.a. Kazk |
Reviewed By: Lady Sesshoumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2003 17:35 CDT
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I like the development of the emotions between Kagome and Inuyasha. I'm wondering if he's suffering from the common 'fear of sex with a pregnant woman syndrome' ^^ |
Reviewed By: kira On: July 26, 2003 09:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oi Nanda! This story is getting better & Better! I'm glad I had a chance to sit here & read this now, instead of waiting until I got back! Thanks soo much for the pleasant surpirse off seeing it finished instead of reading little bits & pieces! Different but not a bad experience either! This truly is another one of your great stories! luv kira |
Reviewed By: notzathros On: July 25, 2003 18:16 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aaagh! More! More!!
Thanks. |
Reviewed By: kirara97 On: July 22, 2003 22:36 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i would have said 10 but i want more. funny expecially when InuYasha was gagged and tied up! it was great and i want more! (:) |
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