| "Expectation" Reviews/Comments [ 82 ] |
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Reviewed By: Redwolf On: August 11, 2003 13:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm really starting to dislike Inuyasha for his lack of loyality. I mean, does his mind only understand one thing Kikyo??? And Kagome, is she that dumb???? Man, she needs to get rid of Inuyasha, he's to young for her I don't care if she is pregnant!!!! I think he needs a taste of his own medicine, let someone else care about her a little. Maybe Inuyasha would grow-up already. |
Reviewed By: ChUNky LuVeR [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2003 14:15 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Haha very funny how miroku gagged him. Ohh please write more!! ^_~ |
Reviewed By: raven39 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2003 22:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story. The dialogue and character interaction is terrific. Chapter 4 is my favorite. Please continue |
Reviewed By: Writer of Honor [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2003 21:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ohh please continue. This is a very good fan fic and it is very detailed in feelings Ohh please do finish with a happy ending too. I do agree fully with Lady Sesshoumaru about the The image of Inuyasha covered with ofuda and properly restrained. Great Job. |
Reviewed By: Pruningshears On: July 20, 2003 13:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
this is a little two angsty for me but written really well great job! loved the line "In fact, at that very moment, unbeknownst to the beautiful young lady sitting beside him, his hand was creeping unseen through the grass, making it’s way toward her as if compelled by destiny to ruin this perfect moment. " lol!! great job! |
Reviewed By: Lady Sesshoumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2003 21:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
Nice emotion in this ^^ I was drawn in quickly. The image of Inuyasha covered with ofuda and properly restrained...too good (^__^) |
Reviewed By: kirayasha On: August 25, 2003 10:34 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oi Nanda! I love this! I'm so happy you've decided to continue this one! I just love how you portrayed Inuyasha here! He's being so incredibly sweet here...he really really is! & I just love it! Hopefully Kagome will realize this & soon! I know if I were in the Hanyou's palce, I'd have killed her for all the crap & nonsense she's been heaping on him...hormones or no hormones! Kami but I can't wait to read the next chapter! Keep this up & I'll be leaving "Inuyasha" instead of "Sesshy" in your gb comments! luv kira |
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