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| "Dancing Rain" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] | Reviewed By: trunks1gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2005 11:40 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GAH! I was so into it and then there was no more!!!!!! (Crys hesterically) I must know what happens to my Hari! Please I beg of you! Update. Oh and dont rush along a lemon because you feel people want it. Its better for feelings to develop then meaning less sex. More please!
| Reviewed By: AyameLover#? On: November 13, 2004 14:45 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aahhh!!! Whay did you stop writing this??? I have to know what happens!!! I just love it so far -- very creative and well done!!! Oh, please, please, pleeeeease update!!! *puppy dog eyes* Pweaze???
| Reviewed By: TT On: September 13, 2003 13:13 CDT
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*laughs* Yes, yes, we all know how exhausting Shi-kun can be! But, this is the first vacation I've had from the naughty inu in ages, so don't expect a pick-up any time soon! Besides, he's much more useful to Ha-san over there, isn't he?!? *smiles* I thought so!
Well, I was hoping to see Ha-san get into Akito's yukata---or someone get into Ha-san's pants---this chapter *pouts*, but I forgive you. You know what they say about aniticipation making the appetite sharper!(Guess where I learned that little tidbit from? ^.~)Poor Ha-san...he's tied up in knots! And they aren't the fun kind, either! (BTW, have Shi-kun teach you that trick he does with the double-sheet-knot. It's amazing...and he was never a Boy Scout!)
Update soon!
Tsukitani | Reviewed By: Tsukitani [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2003 07:49 CDT
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Ah, the joys of the fourth-year student (or fifth=year, depending on how masochistic a student is)! I don't know---my third year was my heaviest course-load-wise, but my friends all said it was a real bitch. (I saved a bunch of 'easy' required courss for last.)
Shi-kun said to expect him tomorrow night around 6pm. He expects to be fed because he'll need his strength. And so will you. *blushes* I can't believe he had me say that. *sigh* The embarrassments I go through for the sake of that man's appetites. Oh! One other thing...no paraphanalia necessary. He'll be bringing his own. (He said it was borrowed from Ha-san, but I think he snitched it from Akito. *shudder* As long as it never enters my abode!) And have Ha-san waiting, too. He has something, *cough* special planned to get Ha-san more into the, erm, uhm, "freer lifestyle". *ducks head in supreme embarrassment and mutters* I can't believe I had to tell you all of that!
So, that's that! Benkyou de ganbatte kure! Soshite, hayaku tsugi no chapter kaite posuto shiro yo! Ja, ne! | Reviewed By: Margaret On: August 21, 2003 13:25 CDT
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I love this fic, but we need more interaction between Akito and Hatori!!! Can't wait for the next chapter! | Reviewed By: dragoneyes On: August 20, 2003 23:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! This was great. I've never seen an hatori/akito fic before. The last chapter was my favorite. Poor Hatori! Hatori's angsting and almost breakdown was portrayed really well. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter. | Reviewed By: Tsukitani On: August 18, 2003 09:12 CDT
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Yay! You've got more reviewers! *beams like a proud parent*... *blushes in chagrin at presumption of previous comment* I'm so happy for you!
Well, better chapter than all the others...my own personal opinion because Shi-kun was there! Thank you so so so sososososososo much! Now I know why he stood me up the other night---and why he was whimpering when I finaly tracked him down. Curled into a ball and mumbling about masters and eyes and blood and kisses...poor baby. *perks up* But I knew just what to do to help him recover! *wink, wink*
But, oh! The angst! The pain! The horror! The mess! Oops! Sorry...that wsa my own personal thought, not supposed to be there *blushes*. Shi-kun was there! Thank you soooo much! (did I already say that? Good!)But, poor baby, he couldn't tease Ha-san for very long. Oh, no! Now he's going to come over here and tease me! *cringes briefly, then relaxes* Wait...no, that's okay, too. *smiles gleefully* Thank you!
Wow! Aya was really OOC...I liked it! I mean, I love Aya (who wouldn't?)but he gets shafted a lot. He can't be that annoyingly hyper and shallow ALL the time, right? Right! And he really does care for Ha-san. Good for Aya! He acted like a responsible adult! A sexy responsible adult. Hmmm...*spaces out* Oh! Sorry...slipped off into a little daydream there.
Anyway, there were some other things I wanted to comment on, but I can't remember them at the moment. Exhausted by a long flight last night. (Finally returned from the Powerless Wonder City)I'm glad you're back home again, and look forward to your next update! Will Ha-san go ballistic when he sees Akito next? Will Shi-kun (did I think you for all the inu time?) cave and torment Ha-san about his slippery...I mean 'slip-up'...of a dream? Will Aya start dreaming about Akito? *shudder* Will I start dreaming about Akito? *licks lips, then shudders...then licks lips again* I need help. But you don't! Great job, keep it up, and I'll be waiting! | Reviewed By: Faith On: August 18, 2003 04:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh I feel so sorry for Hatori! I can imagine this situation to be really weird and confusing after all it was Akito who blinded his eye and took away Kana-chan...
But I can't wait for Akitos reaction when he realizes what Hatori feels.. for him... | Reviewed By: Faith On: August 14, 2003 10:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow this fic is really great. I adore your style of writing and the atmosphere of it all is so... romantic, yet sad.. I love rain too, and Akito is my favourite character *sigh* | Reviewed By: Tsukitani [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2003 23:32 CDT
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Angel-chan, Angel-chan...you disappoint me! You leave lines like "his quivering member grew into unspeakable proportions" in there (wonderfully erotic), but don't tell me HOW BIG?!? I want exact measurements, you hear? EXACT! (Ha-san never would let me near him with a tape measure *sigh* Shi-kun thinks it's fun to compare, though!)
I am still not a fan of yaoi, but...DAMN GIRL! That was HOT! Poor Ha-san, though! All that, just for a dream...and now a personal crisis of sexual orientation (although Akito is rather feminine). You'd better be treating that dragon VERY well to atone for the abuse you're putting him through. I don't blame him for pouting (although, if *I* were in Ha-san's place, you wouldn't hear me complaining...well, you'd hear me, but it definitely wouldn't be noises of complaint!)
So descriptive, just graphic enough to go beyond sensual to sexual. A good touch for getting the reader hot and bothered, too! I can't wait to see if Akito treats Ha-san as usual, or climbs all over him.
P.S.--Does Ha-san really wear boxers? He was always such a prude for me...and Shi-kun won't tell. For some reason, he just snickers whenever I ask... | Reviewed By: Tsukitani On: August 05, 2003 09:43 CDT
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Wai! Shi-kun! I got to see Shi-kun! *hugs AnGeL* Did you do that for me? Or just to torment Ha-san? You naughty girl!
Well, we all know what Ha-san's problem is...he needs to get L-A-I-D!! LOL That's always been his problem! (Why aren't YOU taking care of that? Do I nee to drag him back to my place while you're otherwise occupied?)
Again, another great chapter, and don't feel bad for the long wait. Lord knows I'm guilty of that, as well! Just keep writing! Ganbatte! | Reviewed By: Tsukitani [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2003 13:50 CDT
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Hey! One of my few fans wrote a fic of her own! I'm so proud! Okay---compliments and criticism: I LOVE the way you describe the rain, and Akito's reactions to it. What he says about it is completely in character with his personality. Very lyrical. I know you can't change it, but only problem is that the honke (main house) doesn't have Western glass windows. Everything is shoji and fusuma. But who cares! This is fiction, and we can manipulate where we want! It doesn't bother me, becuase of the beautiful way you wrote about the patterns on the glass...*sigh* kind of like the weather here now!
Okay, I'll be honest. I'm not much of a shounen ai/yaoi fan, but this is a completely underdone pairing. The complex relationship they have--love, loyalty and hate--is simply a goldmine! You get a gold star for being the first person I've ever seen to exploit it, and I would love to see you bring some of those elements into play. Makes good Furuba angst--an absolute requirement!
Keep it up, and I'll be watching!
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