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 Reviewed By: Dustychic  On: June 09, 2005 16:20 CDT
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I swear this fic as more drama than young and the restless,LOL.But it did after all occupy my attention so I can't complain now can I? Thanks for posting ^_^.
 Reviewed By: cj flutterbye  On: June 08, 2005 19:45 CDT
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**sniffle** they are just so tragic, but in his own way, I suppose Kouga has the right idea. I think his means of making that determination are a bit skewed, there are other ways.. he didn't have to tell her.. still great plot point, and her spin on it, interesting too. I eagerly wait for more!
 Reviewed By: leilachan [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 08, 2005 16:45 CDT
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maybe you should have added angst on your list of genres. =P j/k. geez, i can see how that would be hard to write this chap., cuz it was hard for me to read. i feel so bad for kouga. i mean, he obviously loves kag, but, wants her to be happy as well. i can see his logic. but, when you do something like what he suggested, someone always gets hurt. badly. whoever kag ends up with, even tho you know our preferences, please let them ALL be happy. somehow. please update when you have the time. p.s. if you want, i will hunt down and make everyone who (hits) on your fic and doesn't leave a review, sit and watch poorly english dubbed anime FOREVER! that'll teach 'em.
 Title: sigh...
Reviewed By: D. Clawfang  On: June 08, 2005 14:48 CDT
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K, it was sad. Even if I'm a Kag/Inu lover, that was sad. See, here's what's wrong to me. Kags hasn't even given Inu a chance! For crying out loud, she slept with Kouga the same night Inu confessed his love! She's refusing to even try and see him as more then just a friend. Anyhow, the love confessions in this chapter were a sure thing, so no big surprise. The thing is, Kagome is gonna lose someone here, no matter what. Inu took a big step on the ledge confessing his feelings, and she has yet to pull him back. Again, you gotta end with ths story being Kag/Inu!
 Reviewed By: D. Clawfang  On: May 21, 2005 16:24 CDT
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this is good so far, and some good lemons, but pleeeeease let Kagoem choose Inu! Please!
 Reviewed By: cj flutterbye  On: May 19, 2005 01:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
The sketch is going to be totally cool - she'll get a great grade for it. Now, if she could just figure out what or who it is that she wants... poor baby - Hey, is InuYasha really with Sango?? He sounded like he was telling stories... Looking forward to your next chapter!!
 Title: hurrayz! an update.
Reviewed By: leilachan [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 19, 2005 00:21 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
wow, what a steamy, yet mind twisting and heart wrenching chap. i am even more lost and confused now than the last few chaps. i think one thing one moment and the next moment there's a whole new road block in my brain. how DO you do it? what you won't tell me? :( oh well. i'm glad that you are updating even though you are busy. i love this story so much. i just can't wait to find out what you have planned for the ending. then again, i never want this fic to end. mwahahah. j/k geez, i'm tired!
 Reviewed By: leilachan [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 19, 2005 02:51 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
nice chap, but i am WAY more interested in what you have planned for the next chap! what will happen between sango/inu and kag/kog during their weekends together? is kag going to be o.k. she seems to be a little shaky in the brain where inu is concerned, or is it just me? i still have no idea who you're going to end up pairing everyone with. but then i think you're keeping the suspense up on purpose. ^-^ bye.
 Reviewed By: Miztikal_Dragon (not logged on)  On: April 19, 2005 00:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
hey there great chappies! I can't wait to find out what happens next. GO INUYASHA! we always know that he's the one at the top of Kagome's "I want to ravish you like a sex deprived monkey" list. Please keep up the great work and update asap. I wanna know what happens next. -Krystal-
 Reviewed By: cj flutterbye  On: April 18, 2005 13:33 CDT
Comment/Review:
poor Yasha, he's so sad...
 Reviewed By: pooies  On: April 09, 2005 12:32 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
OMG! this story is amazing! sigh..it just plays on emotions soooo much! it almost seems like every scene that involves inu and kag makes me wanna cry!! aah! i really hope inu gets his chance in the end..*crosses fingers*..anyways keep up the AMAZING work!!
 Reviewed By: Annonymus  On: April 07, 2005 16:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ok! I really like this fanfic! I am not usually a Kag/Kouga fan, but this one is just too good! Please update soon! I want to see who she picks!!
 Reviewed By: Tarzan from fanfic.net  On: April 05, 2005 01:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
aw poor kagome and poor inuyasha. I'm a fan of Kag/Inu so it'd make my day if they ended up together. haha not like I'd b able to change your mind if it wasn't them, but great story nonetheless. update soon please!
 Title: another 10...duh!
Reviewed By: leilachan [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 04, 2005 13:45 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
could you make things any more complicated? yep, you can and probably will before this fic is finished. but i luv it. thank you for updating. i check every few days just to see if you have. =P give us some more soon. please!
 Reviewed By: cj flutterbye  On: April 04, 2005 10:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
oh my. He SAYS he doesn't want it to be complicated.. but he sure as heck just make it complicated!! I enjoy this AU very much. Please continue - and that new one too!
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