| "The New Student and Kagome's Secret" Reviews/Comments [ 1030 ] |
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Reviewed By: Farahlayla On: November 04, 2004 13:08 CST
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awww! such a sweet chapter! I think Inuyasha should become the lord...but have some way to still keep in touch with his freinds...maybe even have kagome with him..by setting up some sort long distance school..thing, who knows!
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Reviewed By: Inuyashin [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2004 09:27 CST
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Hi there, First of all, I love you fic! It's something unusual and it's also a good exercise for me because English is not my mothertongue. So thank you for sharing that story with all of us and PLEASE UPDATE SOON. Besides, I am still waiting for an update of "In The Heat Of Passion" :-) Greetings, Luna
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Reviewed By: Miztikal_Dragon nsi On: November 03, 2004 22:56 CST
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OMG that was sooo cute! *giggles* I can't wait to find out what happens next! Please keep up the great work and update asap. -Krystal.
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Reviewed By: AngelOfDiamonds~Lia~ On: November 03, 2004 22:06 CST
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1 2 3 awww... I love your story! And yes I think Inu-Yasha should be Lord of the Western Lands. But don't split them up! Please update soon... and good luck on your tests and homecoming! AngelOfDiamonds ~Lia~
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Reviewed By: Higurashi Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2004 20:07 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great chappie and can't wait to read more^_^
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Reviewed By: animeluvr8 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2004 19:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That was B-E-A-UTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!! I'm gonna cry! omg! Here's what I think shoudl happen. Inu becomes Lord of the Western Lands and Kag becomes the Lady. Everyone calls her that anyway. I know it's a little fairytale but... I mean... awwwwwwwwwwww! It's so beautiful! Keep it up!!
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Reviewed By: Doujo (dlg) On: November 03, 2004 17:42 CST
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awwwwww.... I really loved the end! (and the rest too of course) and I think he should be the lord ^^ But Kagome will stay with him! and please, don't put kikyo somewhere in the story to ruin everything...... I really hate her (sorry for kikyo's fan) anyway. Update soon! ^^
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Reviewed By: Priestess Kylie-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2004 12:40 CST
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Reviewed By: yasmin On: November 03, 2004 08:21 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww touchy ending!!!!!!!
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Title: InuYasha should be Lord
Reviewed By: Chelle82 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2004 01:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story is among a few fan fics that truly draw the readers into the story. With your vivdly described imagery, you make the story breathe and that in its essence is a great story. Now on to my title. InuYasha should be Lord b/c in order to rectify what was destroyed by Sesshomaru, he would be the only person who would be able to do so. He knows love (at least starting to with Kagome:), and remembers how his city thrived and was peaceful under his father's rule. He'll be the only one to impliment that same rule and even surpass what his father had done. With the friends that he has, that truly believe and support him, there is no way that he should fail. Also Kagome should be his Lady (of course!)With the combination of Sango, Miroku, Shippo and Myoga as confidants and Kagome as his heart, there can only be success!~~Michelle
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Reviewed By: Inuyasha's_Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2004 23:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your a great writer and i think inuyasha should become the lord of the western lands
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Reviewed By: sabriel7 (2 laz to log on) On: November 02, 2004 23:15 CST
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AAAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!! That was so sweet, I think I'm going to cry. I love how you update so frequently and with such passion. Anyway I have a request, PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE let them admit that they love each other! I'm DYING to read the part! Also, I don't care if Inuyasha becomes the Lord as long as him and Kagomr stay together which sounds really sentimental but it wasn't supposed to be.........ok maybe it was. -.-;; Anyway, hope you read this and update soon!
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Reviewed By: Firedeom86(not signed in) On: November 02, 2004 20:48 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I say Inu-Yasha should be the lord but I don't understand why Miroku, Sango, and Kagome don't stay with him. I mean I don't think a lord could ask for better aids then his best friendsand his lovily lady Kagome. SO PLEASE THINK ABOUT THIS AND PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Saccharine-Ish (NLO) On: November 02, 2004 20:30 CST
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i love you. that was such a wonderful chapter! and the whole bed convo/scene was amazing. cant wait for your next update.
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Reviewed By: essie2 On: November 02, 2004 20:23 CST
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aaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh that was soooooooooooooo cute please update soon
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