| "The New Student and Kagome's Secret" Reviews/Comments [ 1030 ] |
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Reviewed By: Priestess Kagome On: November 25, 2004 18:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This is the greatest story I have ever read! I hope you get the next chapter up soon!
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Reviewed By: WaterGoddess9 (not signed in) On: November 19, 2004 21:08 CST
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Yet another great chapter. I love how you add both Inu/Kag and Mir/San. It makes the story even better than it already is! ^^ Please keep up with your talent. Best of luck. Byez.
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Reviewed By: hanyou_gurl004 (too lazy to sign in) On: November 18, 2004 21:18 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Chapter! Can't get enough of it! I eagerly await your next update and keep up the excellent work!
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Reviewed By: Doujo (dlg) On: November 17, 2004 18:36 CST
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wow, that was really good! I absolutely love your story and I hope you'll update soon again... see ya!
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness(not signed on) On: November 16, 2004 20:10 CST
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The only thing I would have a problem with in this chapter is how quickly Kagome was able to get up and walk. I've had sprained ankles before, and you do not heal enough to walk in one day. Other then that it was great.
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Reviewed By: tbiris(not logged in) On: November 16, 2004 18:17 CST
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cute.
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Reviewed By: _inu_ [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2004 18:09 CST
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Yay! I'mn soo happy you wrote the nezt chappie! Keep writing, i can't wait for the M/S fluff
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Reviewed By: animeluvr8 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2004 17:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! They totally got the wrong idea. And Miroku is supposed to be the perv. Sango thought it first. lol. They are made for each other. Great job as usual. You know, I feel like I'm repeating myself by saying that, but it's true. Oh well. I love this story? Do you have any idea how long its gonna be? Or jsut as long as it needs to be?
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Reviewed By: Higurashi Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2004 06:10 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great chappie can't wait to read more^_^
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Reviewed By: fenris fenrir [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2004 23:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
beutiful fluff. make him a lord. read my fic. ...read both of my fics. im being yelled at now, so i have to go. but you...you cant leave your computer until the next chapter is posted!!! ...please?? for me?? oh, and where it says "enjoyment factor: 10" add thirty more zeros, ok? thanks!!
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Reviewed By: _inu_ [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2004 21:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! Its soo good, don't stop writing!
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness(yea, I'll sign on one day) On: November 07, 2004 20:52 CST
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OMG!OMG!OMG!OMG!OMG!OMG!OMG!OMG!OMG!OMG!!!!!!!!!! You friggin goddess!!!!!!!! I LOVED IT I LOVED IT I LOVED IT!!!!!!!!! I LOVE YOUR FLUFF!!!!!! Nobody does fluff like you!!!!!!! I seriously did not want this chapter to end!!!!!!! I know you made it longer but I WANT MORE!!!!!!! I hate to sound like some ungreatful reader but the damn story is really that good!!!!!! As for the whole lord thing, I think you can work with either outcome. But I eagerly await the next update!!!!!!!! *runs around living room yelling 'fluff'*
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Reviewed By: hanyou_gurl004 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2004 09:10 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Chapter! Loved the Inu/Kag fluff at the end. When are they gonna finally get together. I kind of have an idea about what InuYasha should do. Maybe if he didn't want to be lord of the Western Lands, he could appoint Satoru to be Lord. He seems to trust him and Satoru seems to want the best for InuYasha and their people. Or If he wants to stay, he could ask Kagome to marry him or something like that. Whatever you decide to do, I know it will be great! Keep up the xcellent work and I eagerly await your next update!
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Reviewed By: InuChicka07 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2004 21:50 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fluff,fluff,fluff I think we've been waiting for this. It was also just such a great chapter, it got a big aww from me. just please update as asoon as u can.
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Reviewed By: WaterGoddess9 (not signed in) On: November 04, 2004 18:32 CST
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AWW! That was beautiful. I believe he should be Lord, and her...Lady. It seems to already be going that direction. Well...that is what I hope. Take care! Bye.
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