| "The New Student and Kagome's Secret" Reviews/Comments [ 1030 ] |
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Reviewed By: WaterGoddess9(authoress) On: August 01, 2004 16:17 CDT
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Another excellent chapter...oh and your birthday is coming soon! How wonderful! I hope you party till the break of dawn! And thanks for the rose! ^_^. Keep up the great work.
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Title: Inuyasha
Reviewed By: VenumousEnchantress On: July 30, 2004 05:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey I just wanted to say your story is great I just started reading it yesterday and now I have read all 43 chapters. Your witting is amazing and extremly powerfull. At points I have cryed and laughed. I even think its is better then the tv episodes in many points. Plase continue writting this amazing story I can't wait till the next one it posted. And I think Inuyasha and kagome and Miroku and sango need some more intamate times in the near future.
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Reviewed By: ficfan On: July 27, 2004 13:38 CDT
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yay another update! cant wait for the next!
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Reviewed By: Priestess Kylie-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2004 23:56 CDT
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Reviewed By: Farahlayla On: July 24, 2004 17:27 CDT
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it was great to see another chapter from you! and evne thouhg it wasnt much it was certainly needed to know how the people reacted to him, inu sure has his job cut out for him. oh and i thouhgt his mothers name was "Izoi" or something like that...
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Reviewed By: Loves_Fanfics On: July 22, 2004 04:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really like your story and hope to read more. i really like that you follow the story line. and i think it makes the story even better when you add the little momments with inuyasha and kagome.i really hope and wish that you dont bring kikyo into it but its your story. all and all your story has keep me well entertained and on the edge of my seat to know what happens next. plz write more and i looks forward to reading more. bye
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Reviewed By: Orb (offline) On: July 21, 2004 10:38 CDT
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I didnt think this chapter was pointless. It totoally showed what the people thing of Inu's family. And that thing with him growling over Kagome was so cute lol. Happy birthday!! Mine was monday lol.
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Reviewed By: Lil'Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2004 03:37 CDT
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first and formost. happy birthday! second, you said you wanted to portray how the people Inuyasha was going to rule over precieved him. does that mean he's going to stay and be Lord of the Western Lands? and will the others say with him. Kagome wouldn't leave him would she? what do the others have back in the old city anyway? that chap made me so nervous! aii. up date soon and keep up the good work!! happy birthday again and have fun!!
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness(n.s.o.) On: July 21, 2004 00:10 CDT
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Man people are stupid! They just had to try and touch Kagome. Never mind that she is surrounded by demons that they claim to fear. They always have to touch!! Why would the idiot woman try and touch her anyway! She was on Kirara's back, and they have whole "AAHH AAHH DEMON DEMON!!!!" thing going on but they still want to touch the girl thats on the demons back. *rolls eyes* morons. But anyway good chapter very nicly written. Is the castle next??? It would be if you gave us an Inuyasha bath scene *wiggles eyebrows suggestively* Please update soon!!! I'll give you a hot dog!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Higurashi Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2004 00:01 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
can't wait to read more.....this is a great story hope you up-date soon^_^
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Reviewed By: Priestess Kylie-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2004 23:10 CDT
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Reviewed By: tbiris(not logged in) On: July 20, 2004 19:54 CDT
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gee, poor Inu-kun, what'll he do to prove himself... *sigh* I hate contemplating these things, I never get the thing correct...
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2004 19:38 CDT
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this is a great fanfic please update soon
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Reviewed By: phoenixfire17 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2004 17:42 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sigh* I'm bored...*yawn*...and tired. But it was a good chapter. Gave me something to read. Update again soon!!! *yawns again* So sleepy. *slumps forward and head lands on keyboard, one letter pops continuously on screen-->*ZZZZZZZZZZZZZzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzZZZZZZZzzzzzz...
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Title: Great Chapter!
Reviewed By: Katana14 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2004 17:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! Great job keeping it realistic! The crowd's reaction couldn't of been any better. Inuyasha handled it like his charcter would've, and Miroku was a good boy for not asking any of the women to bear his child. Good boy, Miroku, for realizing that this is a serious situtation and for Sango's sake. Keep writing, this is great!
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