| "The New Student and Kagome's Secret" Reviews/Comments [ 1030 ] |
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Reviewed By: asgfdhfs On: August 22, 2004 01:41 EDT
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r u going to finish this story? and if u r and u update atleast 2 times a month oh and i u arnt then i dont really care since i dont really care about this story anymore
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Reviewed By: FataLFelineOfTheNight [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2004 00:08 EDT
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pretty damn good. ever gonna finish it?
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Reviewed By: cindia On: August 09, 2004 22:00 EDT
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yeay for the new chapter. It was a pointless chapter but one that was needed anyways. i like the way the story is going but inuyasha needs to already get with kagome :)
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Title: update pwz
Reviewed By: seshochan500 On: August 07, 2004 13:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story this chapy deffinetly was not pointless so stop whynin and make another damn update !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! and another thing could you make a character higher ranked than sesshimaru thats pulling the strings that could be a employee at the castle?
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Reviewed By: darkempereror [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2004 15:17 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is really good. Keep up the good work. I gues you ahve the ssame problem as me where you ahve to reviw your own story to read other peoples reveiws?
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Reviewed By: WaterGoddess9(authoress) On: August 01, 2004 17:17 EDT
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Another excellent chapter...oh and your birthday is coming soon! How wonderful! I hope you party till the break of dawn! And thanks for the rose! ^_^. Keep up the great work.
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Title: Inuyasha
Reviewed By: VenumousEnchantress On: July 30, 2004 06:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey I just wanted to say your story is great I just started reading it yesterday and now I have read all 43 chapters. Your witting is amazing and extremly powerfull. At points I have cryed and laughed. I even think its is better then the tv episodes in many points. Plase continue writting this amazing story I can't wait till the next one it posted. And I think Inuyasha and kagome and Miroku and sango need some more intamate times in the near future.
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Reviewed By: ficfan On: July 27, 2004 14:38 EDT
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yay another update! cant wait for the next!
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Reviewed By: Priestess Kylie-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2004 00:56 EDT
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Reviewed By: Farahlayla On: July 24, 2004 18:27 EDT
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it was great to see another chapter from you! and evne thouhg it wasnt much it was certainly needed to know how the people reacted to him, inu sure has his job cut out for him. oh and i thouhgt his mothers name was "Izoi" or something like that...
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Reviewed By: Loves_Fanfics On: July 22, 2004 05:36 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really like your story and hope to read more. i really like that you follow the story line. and i think it makes the story even better when you add the little momments with inuyasha and kagome.i really hope and wish that you dont bring kikyo into it but its your story. all and all your story has keep me well entertained and on the edge of my seat to know what happens next. plz write more and i looks forward to reading more. bye
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Reviewed By: Orb (offline) On: July 21, 2004 11:38 EDT
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I didnt think this chapter was pointless. It totoally showed what the people thing of Inu's family. And that thing with him growling over Kagome was so cute lol. Happy birthday!! Mine was monday lol.
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Reviewed By: Lil'Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2004 04:37 EDT
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first and formost. happy birthday! second, you said you wanted to portray how the people Inuyasha was going to rule over precieved him. does that mean he's going to stay and be Lord of the Western Lands? and will the others say with him. Kagome wouldn't leave him would she? what do the others have back in the old city anyway? that chap made me so nervous! aii. up date soon and keep up the good work!! happy birthday again and have fun!!
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness(n.s.o.) On: July 21, 2004 01:10 EDT
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Man people are stupid! They just had to try and touch Kagome. Never mind that she is surrounded by demons that they claim to fear. They always have to touch!! Why would the idiot woman try and touch her anyway! She was on Kirara's back, and they have whole "AAHH AAHH DEMON DEMON!!!!" thing going on but they still want to touch the girl thats on the demons back. *rolls eyes* morons. But anyway good chapter very nicly written. Is the castle next??? It would be if you gave us an Inuyasha bath scene *wiggles eyebrows suggestively* Please update soon!!! I'll give you a hot dog!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Higurashi Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2004 01:01 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
can't wait to read more.....this is a great story hope you up-date soon^_^
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