| "The Life of Shinimegami and MoonlitMeowth" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Title: Fruit Punch!!!
Reviewed By: Armored Red Eyes [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2007 17:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wooooooooooooooooooooot!!! And another chapter done again! I have to say, I think this is our best chapter yet! I mean, the muffins rocked, and I loved the water guns with the toxic chemicals and the fruit punch! ...I still want some fruit punch though... Anyways, perhaps our next chapter should be "that time of the month" when we go out on dates with our "boyfriends". You know? That might be pretty amusing... Well, we'll think it over then! ^.^
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Reviewed By: LaLunaLupe [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2006 15:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
This story rocks. Kepp up the good work. Poor Josh though, he does get some hassle. Lol, update some more please.
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Title: CHEESE!
Reviewed By: Armored Red Eyes [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2006 23:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope you realize what idiots we both are... Heh heh heh... Anyways, I hope more people appreciate our hard work with the funny... Oh well, I guess not everyone wants to write to us. But if FanFiction didn't boot us off, then we'd have WAY more fans than THIS!!! *sigh* Anyways, I can't WAIT 'till we get our next chapter out! It's gonna be BETTER THAN THE REST!!! Let's keep chucking out ideas, and writing them down!!! We gotta remember these things! @_@
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Reviewed By: Armored Red Eyes [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2005 18:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYY!!!!!!!!!!! THIS IS THE BEST STORY IN THE WHOLE WIDE WORRRRRRLLLLLLLDDDDDD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I forgot how totally FUNNY all this crap was! Yaaaay Shi-Rauko! We need to update this stuff!!! I've got endless ideas of what Shinimegami and MoonlitMeowth do next! Ya know...stuff that's totally AWESOME!!! Alright! See ya NEXT time!
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Reviewed By: Armored Red Eyes [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2004 17:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!! THE BOMB...OF A STORY!!!! Oh... Heh heh. Sorry sis. But, you know ME. WHY didn't I review SOONER? *shrugs* Oh well. It's the best of the BEST. Mainly because I'M in it, AND I wrote some stuff too. ^.^ Well, sorry I ate your hot dog. ^-^
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Reviewed By: Kitiara On: August 21, 2003 11:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! This is so kewl! You two are very funny! I love this and I hope you you make another chapter soon! Pwity pweeeese? |
