| "A Daughter's Love" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: funnyduckie1 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2007 14:33 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awwww sWEET fiC!!! it almost made me cry
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Title: how cute.
Reviewed By: thoughtless [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2005 06:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow that was so cute, tear jerk. lol. kinda reminds me of how my dad is with me, lol. that story will and does probably relate to a lot of l'il daddies girls. overall it was a really good read, keep up the good work. hope to see some more good fics out soon.
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Reviewed By: chidogs [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2005 22:53 CDT
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I am introducing myself to the DBZ fanfics around and would like to say that I really like this story of yours. You seem to have a good grasp of Vegeta, full of furious bluster but tamed by his girl/s. I am a sucker for father/daughter stuff and this rang very true. good job.
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Reviewed By: zaitcev [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2004 01:23 CST
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I think that shifts in and out of reminiscing were done very well: seamless, well placed.
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Reviewed By: toasterwoman360 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2004 18:36 CST
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awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww, so kawaii! i just wanna cry...hey that rhymed! don't mind me, semi-hyper psychopath over here...^_^
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Reviewed By: Sukahiryuu On: October 21, 2003 17:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The way you jumped around was a little confusing, but it did not bother me. I really enjoyed your story. It was SOOOO sweet ! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Nitte iz On: September 06, 2003 22:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, this is really rigirous rating here at Mediaminer (this is my first time reviewing here).
I thought your fic was absolutely adorable! And I loved the G/B comment at the end!
Goten&Bra forever!!!!!! *whoops*
You know what I suggest? Post this on FanFiction.net, that's where I usually read and write.
You'd probably get more reviewers. |
Reviewed By: LadyBranwen2012 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2003 21:58 CDT
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Ah! That was sad. I don't usually cry, and it takes a lot to make me cry, but I did. Grr! But at least it was worth it in the end when she married Goten. I loved it! |
