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 Title: F33l the 3vil
Reviewed By: RabidFan notloggedin  On: July 12, 2004 18:49 CDT
Comment/Review:
I'm happy and sad at the same time! I just watched the last Fruits Basket anime vol. 4. I liked it and I thought it ended nicely but I'm soooooo sad it's over!!!!! I'm going to sue Funimation for making me cronically depressed. But I just got the third manga book so I'm also happy! La! Kyou is so hot on the cover *drools* actually he's always hot. HEHEHEH. ---bai bai---Rabid P.S. Do you know if FB anime is going to have a second season?
 Reviewed By: RabidFan notloggedin  On: July 12, 2004 18:43 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
How could you write such an evil cliffy?!? How dare you!*strangles author*. Just kidding, if I killed you I would never know the ending! I hope you do another Kyou pov. I'm really curious! Give the Zodiac more time because Jill and Leon are pissing me off because they dont know whats going on and are having bad missunderstandings (not like thats their falt..)! I'll be sad once the story is over. I hope you'll do another story on Furuba! hmmm, I hope the characters have happy endings even though I know thats not your style. I hope Kyou doesn't become more lonely because he's become a god-like-thing(or whatever he is). Oh yeah please tell us what happens to Kureno and Uo I know that part was tiny but Kureno is so F*ked up. I hope his life gets better. And Shigure's life! Poor shigure, he is soooo misunderstood. I hope he and Akito get together. And Leon and Count D too, they are scarily meant for each-other. Hmmmm can you kill Rin for me? She such a poopy-stupid-ugly-mean-cruel *beep*. Sorry. I just shouted a lot of obscenities it's a good thing know one is in my house. Heh heh. Well those are my oponions! Thank you for your lovely contribution ot the Fruit Basket fics.
 Reviewed By: ThisisMeandering  On: July 12, 2004 03:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
I can't log on... somehow my PC always closes me down... Great chapter, but why do I get the feeling you're running away from Kyou being 'hatched', or do you just like making us wait, hmm? Anyway, MORE!
 Reviewed By: Immortal Evil Fanfic Chibi [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 10, 2004 20:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
*blushing* that was suppost to be AGAIN!!! Oopse... Oh well I'm just glad it finnally worked! *tosses her computer and Mediaminer each an electronic treat.* YAY!!!
 Reviewed By: Immortal Evil Fanfic Chibi [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 10, 2004 20:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
It cut off my review ADAIN!!!!!!!!! EVIL COMPUTER AND EVIL MEDIAMINER REVIEW PROGRAM!!!! *yakes a break then returns* Let's hope it works this time... Ok what I was going to say... I think... was " "Great and All Powerfull Mighty Authoress of Fanfiction" (which is a title reserved for few authors and you're in the top three) Cousin D." I had a lot more but my computer ate it and is being mean to me... so I'm just going to leave it at that. I almost used up all of my 1500 characters too!!! Darn! Ok that about concluded my extra super large review. (I've never done a review this large before! I feel proud of myself... even though I'm really just rambiling about how good a writer you are and how you shouldn't keep people waiting so long for updates 'cus it drives them insane ^_^) I'll review again next chapter! BYE!!!
 Reviewed By: Immortal Evil Fanfic Chibi [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 10, 2004 20:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
It cut off my review... darnit... ok what I was going to say... I think... was " "Great and All Powerfull Mighty Authoress of Fanfiction" (
 Reviewed By: Immortal Evil Fanfic Chibi [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 10, 2004 20:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
*looks at the review below her* ... Oh Hi Katsu! Long time no see? How's the Guild on Gaia doing? I haven't been able to go on lately. Sorry... ^_^0 OK... back to busness... *calmly gets on her knees and attaches herself to Cousin D's right leg* PLEASE UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON! HOW CAN YOU BE SO EVIL AND JUST END A CHAPTER LIKE THAT?! HOW COULD YOU?!?!?!?!?!?! YOU EVIL PERSON! YOU HAVE ME(actually everyone who reads more than the first sencence but a, the list would be too long and b, I'm just selfish that way) AT YOUR MERCY!!!!!!!! EVIL COUSIN D, EEEEEEVIL!!!!!!!!!!!! *looks up and says in a small and quiet voice* I know you care alot about quality and it really does show... but could you maby try a little super-extra hard and update a little sooner than planned... I can't wait. *calmly removes herself from Cousin D's appendage and goes to man her shrine to both the fanfic and the (as I put it) "Great and All Powerfull Mighty Authoress of Fanfiction" (
 Reviewed By: _Katsu_  On: July 07, 2004 11:41 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Dying... I'm dying from the cliffhanger ending of the latest chapter... slowly, painfully dying... There's not much I can say that hasn't been said already, whether praise... or well, more praise. I'm quite sure I'm going to go mad, and then I won't be able to read the next chapter!!! AHHH!!! *passes out*
 Reviewed By: ThisisMeandering  On: June 30, 2004 04:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
YOU EVIL PERSON! Leaving us hanging like that! Grrrr! *stomps off and blows things up, then stomps back* You better write more! OOC: This is Meandering. I haven't logged in.
 Title: OMG OMG OMG
Reviewed By: RabidFan [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 30, 2004 01:09 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I literally read this chapter and said OMG. I don't ussually do that just to tell you. Anyways WOW this is such a great story (I keep thinking that). I want to find out the ending but at the same time I never want it to end. The story makes so much sense tho. You make it sound like it would be immpossible to incorporate both your stories (petshopofhorrors and FB) but you tie it up perfect. Thank you for this great addition to fruits basket stories! Please make more in the future!
 Reviewed By: Jexia [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 28, 2004 20:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
Another great chapter chock full o' content. Angst, family feeling, mystery, revelations. And Kyou fighting his way out of the cocoon. What a pleasure it was to see that you updated. I'm happy that Ayame had such kind and loving words for Shigure. Poor Shigure, so loving and devoted himself, to hate himself. He deserves something better for his fidelity.
 Reviewed By: Youkai Girl [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 28, 2004 11:50 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Wow another great chapter. This story is getting better and better with every chapter, and i can't wait for the reaction of the Souma family to Kyou's change. Keep up the good work!
 Reviewed By: Jexia [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 24, 2004 08:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
Well, I've read the balance of this novel in the past two days and I have to say that I simply love it--the angst,the tenderness, the complexity, the overall creativity in terms of flow and the near seamless joining of the two worlds--spectacular work. I love the sensitivity you show, not to mention the psychological and emotional insight, ooh, glad I remembered to throw that in. This is such a colorless review for such a vibrant story that kept me up until midnight last night and got me up at 5:15 this morning, to finish reading. That should give you a better idea of just how compelling I thought your story was. (What? How come I didn't stay up to finish reading?) Eyes like sandpaper and I wanted to have the joy of reading the two chapters that remained when I was better rested. They were to be savored like one of the delicacies brought to Count D, by his beloved Leon. Suffice it to say, I am truly looking forward to the final unraveling of your wonderful fiction. Thanks for the hard work you put into making it all seem so effortless.
 Reviewed By: Youkai Girl [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 23, 2004 23:45 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Please, Please, Please update this fic! I really want to find out what is going to happen, and right now I am on pins and needles waiting for an update. Keep up the good work, and please update soon.
 Reviewed By: Jexia [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 22, 2004 20:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
Could the second chapter be even better than the first? This is great and Shigure's mourning with the wolves made me cry.
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