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Reviewed By: Immortal Evil Fanfic Chibi [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2004 00:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
I LOVE THIS STORY!!!! WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Omish Nezumi On: May 18, 2004 18:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AHHHHHHHHHHH I LOVE THIS STORY so please write the rest of the story
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Title: =^-^= mew!
Reviewed By: Sanjuno [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2004 14:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Salut! *waves hello* I have to say, wonderful 'ficcy you have here. I love the way the characters are interacting and relating to each other. You've got a nice blend of light and dark moments without muddling things up. Your plot is clear and relativly easy to follow. My only complaint is how some of your scenes are a bit jerky. They stop and start, jumping around all over the place. This isn't a big deal, except that all of your other sections flow smoothly from one POV and scene to the next. I adore how you've managed to keep the chara's IC despite the changes to the timeline as a result of the crossover. Please keep up the good work. I look forward to the next part of your 'fic. =^-^= mew! Ja matta ne! *waves and wanders back into Word to work on her 'fics.*
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Title: ooopps...
Reviewed By: _Katsu_ On: May 15, 2004 15:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I actually thought to scroll up once I submitted my comment... and... yeah... my ratings are wrong... so I re-sumbitted them...ehh... *sweatdrop*
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Title: *stands in awe*
Reviewed By: _Katsu_ On: May 15, 2004 15:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 2 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 2 of 10
Overall Rating: 2 of 10 Comment/Review:
How strage that the ratings box doesn't say which rating is the best, but for my ratings, 1 is the best and 10 is the worst... and my name... is already in use... *sob*... Yeah, anyways: I am setting up a shrine to this fanfic! It's just to amazing how you could blend the two series into each other so seamlessly... And to churn out such a long fanfiction? I've been trying to write a decent book for over 3 years and I haven't made it past 20 pages without scraping something or overhauling the whole plot- and that depends on if there's a plot to begin with.(May I borrow some of your mad writing skillz? Please???)You could seriously tweak this, send it to the producers of Fruits Basket, and convince them to make a prequel series or something... The only things I could find wrong were grammatical/spelling... in the first chapters every time you said "a part" it was typed "apart", and there are a lot of "to"s that need to be "too"s. That's all I can really remember- oh, and once you said "reciepts" instead of "recipies", and I'm pretty much sure I just butchered that spelling-wise too... -.-' The storyline got a little boring at one point, but I think that happens when you read over 200 pages in a row like I did, so I guess that rating is wrong. Well, I suppose I should get to work constructing that shrine! *starts ordering around the people in her head and wanders off* Write more please!~ *waves*
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Reviewed By: Chibi Fangirl from Hell On: May 07, 2004 17:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
Poor Kyo... But I do LOVE this fanfic. I personally think that THIS should be a series! All of my friends are getting sick of me telling them about it and forcing them to read it, but after they read the first page- they're hooked just like I am! *bows/worships* I just have one reaquest: KEEP WRITING LIKE THIS!!!! *rambles comments for a few hours untill she collaps in exhaustion*
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Reviewed By: Chibi Fangirl from Hell On: April 24, 2004 13:56 CDT
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*Re-reads the story* Once again... Wow. *bows down and worships and builds a fanclub and worships.* ALL hail Cousin D!!!!
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Reviewed By: Chibi Fangirl from Hell On: April 19, 2004 13:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
*reads the story* Hm... What's this? *Finishes what is posted and then stares at her computer for thirty minutes strait*... Wow... And you didn't help write the original story line for Fruits Basket(one-of-the-best-anime/manga-I've-read/seen) why? You're a good enough author... Waaaay good enough. *bows down and worships*
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Title: SORRY!
Reviewed By: Sterling On: April 04, 2004 22:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
I am SO sorry! I accidentally clicked the submit button too much because my (first) review got posted twice. Not only that, but only half of it was posted. Gomen! Gomen!
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Reviewed By: Sterling On: April 04, 2004 22:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! I just sat down and read your story straight through. This story has to be one of the best that I have EVER read! ^_^ Not only that, but the plot is absolutely FANTASTIC! I just love how all the characters are interlocking. I know that 'interlocking' is an odd word to use, but it is true. Every single character, minor or major, have some realation to every other character. Hard to explain, but I just want to commend you on it. I honestly do not know if you take the time to read your reviews, or look at the ratings that you recieve, but I feel that I should explain the reason that I gave you what I did. Everything is perfect, in my opinion of course ^_^p, EXCEPT for the grammar. The only thing that I have found to be incorrect is your use of the words to and too. Now you may want to check me on this being as English is my second language, but the proper use of the words is like Bob was talking too quickly for Shirley to understand him. That was the only thing that I was able to pick up on, and please feel free to correct me if I am wrong. ^_^ The only other thing that I wish to inquire about is: How did you come up with your ideas for 'the Pits'? Surely you do not have a place like that where you live? O_o That would be terrible! Now I do believe that I have written entirley too(
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Reviewed By: Sterling On: April 04, 2004 22:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! I just sat down and read your story straight through. This story has to be one of the best that I have EVER read! ^_^ Not only that, but the plot is absolutely FANTASTIC! I just love how all the characters are interlocking. I know that 'interlocking' is an odd word to use, but it is true. Every single character, minor or major, have some realation to every other character. Hard to explain, but I just want to commend you on it. I honestly do not know if you take the time to read your reviews, or look at the ratings that you recieve, but I feel that I should explain the reason that I gave you what I did. Everything is perfect, in my opinion of course ^_^p, EXCEPT for the grammar. The only thing that I have found to be incorrect is your use of the words to and too. Now you may want to check me on this being as English is my second language, but the proper use of the words is like Bob was talking too quickly for Shirley to understand him. That was the only thing that I was able to pick up on, and please feel free to correct me if I am wrong. ^_^ The only other thing that I wish to inquire about is: How did you come up with your ideas for 'the Pits'? Surely you do not have a place like that where you live? O_o That would be terrible! Now I do believe that I have written entirley too
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Title: o.O whoooooo....
Reviewed By: Cor-chan On: March 23, 2004 04:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
o.O Holy shiznit. Is this THE climax, or just leading up to it? Cos this is seriously good schtuff. I'm reviewing here, cos I can't get ff.n on this comp for some reason, btw... Oh my gawd, if you don't update within days, I WILL hunt you down... *mind swirly*
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Reviewed By: Youkai Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2004 05:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just finished the latest chapter, and I am so amazed at how well written this story is, and that you have all these wonderful ideas in your head. The fact that you have perfectly blended together Pet Shop of Horrors and Fruits Basket is beyond most peoples imaginations. Please keep up the good work, I can't wait for the next chapter. One question, are you going to devlop the relationship between D and Leon more?
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Reviewed By: kessondalek@msn.com On: March 07, 2004 06:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is my favorite fanfic EVER!!! Please write more.
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Title: long denied
Reviewed By: madameShannon On: March 05, 2004 22:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AAAAHHHH!!!! this fic was truly great!! First of all you maneged to take two of my favorite mangas (psoh and fb) and fit them into a single storyline. Seconed you did it in a way that allowed them to stay true to themselves and to the characters!! I started and couldn't stop! It was the best 2 hours of my fanfic reading life! The storyline that you used to connect the two stories was very imaginetiv and I throughly enjoyed it! I was quivering in my seat!*-* I laughed ^-^ I cried ;-; I screamed and begged for more! @0@ (are you starting to get the idea that i loved your story so very VERY much?? Because i did!) so a rose to you @---^---- and a very heartfelt *THANKYOU*
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