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| "Long Denied" Reviews/Comments [ 75 ] | | Pages (5): [ « < 1 2 3 4 5 ] | Title: geh???
Reviewed By: sumeragi sei On: March 01, 2004 05:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i'm really glad i was able to find a fanfiction this great~!! and i've been following it closely since then. *sheepish grin* i always make sure to visit mediaminer weekly just to look for your updates on this fic. *laughs* i'm very ecstatic at what will happen next. like you, Shigure is also my favorite character in Furuba. and even if i'm not that big of a fan of Petshop of Horrors, (i've only watched the anime but haven't read the manga) i still think that you did good justice to all the characters in your story be it from furuba or from Petshop of Horrors. You've actually made me like Akito. Back then, I used to hate him because he's such a sadistic bastard~!! ^^;; you made me change that outlook and now, i actually pity him. *sigh* poor akito. *shakes head* oh yeah, reminds me... is Akito the one Shigure love the most? ahehe that's just a guess 'tho... well, some might say that it's already blatant by the way they act with each other, still... i wanted to be sure. oh well... that's all for now. please continue this soon, ne? Ganbatte ne~!!!! ^__~
| Reviewed By: GakiFang On: January 11, 2004 00:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. I'm so hugely impressed. I went back and watched the beginning episodes of Fruits Basket and it's incredible how well the stories seamlessly mesh together. And Akito, the backstory and reasons you give him are just incredible. He is now one of my favorite characters. Please keep writing this awesome story.
| Reviewed By: ShadowsLight [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2003 18:16 CST
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This fanfic is by far the most amazing work of fanfiction I've ever seen. I enjoyed it a lot and hold it as one of the best fanfics ever, that I have read. The way you made Shigure in this story is rather good, it is a simlair interpertation of him that I have. Simlair but not the same, your thinking comprehension is amazing, how you thought of how things happened, their emotions as it happened, everything. In the end your an amazing writing and wrote a fabolus piece of fanfiction, update somtime soon, please.
| Title: Really good
Reviewed By: Rem122 On: November 23, 2003 21:06 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is really good, I enjoyed reading it! So, I'll be waiting for your next update.
| Title: long denied
Reviewed By: babs On: November 11, 2003 16:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i luv this fic! pleeze pleeze pleeze update soon! ^_^ :) hee hee thanx!
| Title: Is cool
Reviewed By: Rem122 On: November 10, 2003 18:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed reading it. I'll be waiting for your next update on the story ^_^
| Title: you're forgiven
Reviewed By: Zorra Reed On: November 03, 2003 23:23 CST
Comment/Review:
Hello, I know that D and you have proboly talked already via email. But I wanted to say that I too, forgive your firends. I agree with D on removing the reviews left only because the reviewers names where not listed on this site, no story title, email, or link was posted. There was no way to prove that such a fic existed. D's fic was a crossover and they also failed to state which catagory they had writen for too. Had any of the above been left I would have insisted D not remove the reviews. But because I found out about this after her request to have them removed it wouldn't have done much good anyways. I don't hold you accountable for your friends actions. Perhapes a friendship can't be worked out between you to, but you're firends will still need to apoligize to D as well if they want to do the write thing. I can understand them being hurt and upset and standing up for each other, but next time, please inform them of the proper way to leave a flame and not to rush into stuff till they are calm enough to be understood clearly. Also you said: Please excuse my freinds behavior, it was her first story she was going to post, how would you feel? I will e-mail you in hopes of freindship, ok? If this was the first story she was GOING to post, then how could D have read or copied it? Is it posted somewhere else and you ment she was going to post it here on this site? Tell your friend to go ahead and post her fic. I'm sure no one will flame her about the similaritys like she did us. Since the fic wasn't copied and all this is cleared up, it'd be a shame for her to wast her talents and hard work. Please, tell her not to worry and to post her work and be proud of it. Thanks zorra zorra@ryosanada.zzn.com
| Title: Long Denied
Reviewed By: babs On: November 03, 2003 15:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i always wanted to hear some kind of history behind the curse, and i love how you make it more from shigure's point of view. really good fic! pleeze update soon k? ^_^
| Reviewed By: Balis On: October 30, 2003 19:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I love this story so much! You're such a great writer. ;_; You make me jealous. It's obvious you've put alot of thought in this, and have worked a thousand and one things out. I can't wait to see what happens next! \^_^/ And yay for Ren finally getting what she deserved! I think that has been the best part of my day. Continue the most excellent work, and I can't wait to read more.
| Title: I'm sorry...
Reviewed By: Ritsukona On: October 18, 2003 20:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
... Oh, really? Can somone call anybody a liar? Who's lieing? This person said "I'm not calling you a liar, but I don't buy it." She said there were simularities... I'v read her version... there is simularities. A lot. I wached her write it. I helpped her. I love your version of the story as much as hers. You are both very talented. I don't think it was fair to erase her review which stated how she thought. Actually... it was fair. I don't want to cause trouble, She was hurt. I'm sure this person was to. Is there any possible way this can be resolved? Maybe this should stay out of the reviews... I loved the story though! I would love to put up our version... but I want not to arouse trouble. Your creativity was awsome... I appriciated it. ^_^ I hope in the upcoming times we can be freinds. I will not blame anybody. Please excuse my freinds behavior, it was her first story she was going to post, how would you feel? I will e-mail you in hopes of freindship, ok?
| Title: To the fabulous flamers
Reviewed By: Zorra [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2003 23:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello Nacratis and Sanarus if those are you're real pin names and that you're not the same person twice. There's a good chance that you'll never see this note but that's okay, I'm willing to risk it. I saw the reviews, yes reviews not flames that you left for D. You really need to learn to do a proper flame if you're planning to go around and hurt people. You're spelling STANK and frankly I'm inclined to believe you both have the mental capacity and maturity level of drunk retards. "Faker?" That's not insulting anyone but yourself. What are you, twelve maybe thirteen, still an uneducated child that thinks they know everything? "Firery Wraths" do you mean Fiery? That sounds an awful lot like a line from The Lord of the Rings. In fact, it is! Cuz I used it in my school report five years ago. Face it, your reviews where funny, stupid, worthless, and pointless. Oh wait! My bad, you did have a point. You said she stole from you. Hmm, now let me get this straight, she's never heard of either of you. She's not read your fics, I guaranty that; D doesn't have time to read other peoples work. She doesn't even read mine most of the time. Plus, all her inspiration and ideas come from Valandra and myself or her muses or out of her own imagination. You're jealous and wanted to ruin her outstanding status hoping someone would give a damn about your useless ass. But we can forgive you. You are human after all. Plus you don't seem to have any stories. I've checked this site and others for the names you two left in your reviews and nothing. Can you explain that? Do you post under a different name? Also, when you accuse someone out of the blue of stealing, you'd better be able to back it. Leave the name and location of your fic in the review so that others can compare it. Because children, if that story isn't real, then you didn't flame, you spamed and spaming is a punishable crime. YES CRIME! You can be fined for shit like that. But since it's such a little crime, I'll settle for you being banned from this and any other fanfiction site I find you on. Feel free to check out my stuff and flame me to get even with me for bashing your 'oh so noble' names. I enjoy flames, really I do. I'd love to see if your vocabulary improves. And please, don't use a lot of big words you found on the computer thesaurus and don't properly understand. I hate it when people overdress a document and completely ruin it and their point by trying to sound smart. Also, leave a link to your fic, unless you're afraid I'll out-flame you. Oh believe me, I'll read your fic and I'll be honest about it. If I like something I'll tell you, but I'll tell you what I don't like and why. You can find my stuff on Mediaminer.org or Fanfiction.net. You'll have so much more to work from if you go to fanfiction.net though. I've two accounts there, Zorra and Zorra Reed. Enjoy your reading. I look forward to your wannabe flames. Also, if you meant evil not ebil, well, this might shock you but we really are evil. If you've read anything D's written you'd realize that. I'm willing to bet that her fic was up before yours was anyway. If not on this site then on some others for sure, so don't even start with your 'I'm first' shit. Zorra Ps. News flash, Bitch, there are no new ideas, just new ways of looking at them. Everyone writes similar stories and unless you can prove that she read and copied then keep your (and your friend's) mouth shut. I promise you, there are hundreds of other fics out there with the same story line, though it might not be for the same subject. You'll learn to get over it one day, when you're older. pps. Sorry to post this here D. Nice fic by the way.
| Reviewed By: Greenember On: September 28, 2003 17:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm still impressed with your work. It's amazing. The intricate details are noticed. I think your originality is still magnificent. I also understand it's hard to keep the characters acting normal. It's even harder to interpret how the characters acted when they were young in a way to please the audience. You've done that. Only a experienced author can please the audience while putting their originality in it accordingly. Truly amazing. It's amazing!!
| Reviewed By: lilmisspimp1887 On: September 22, 2003 02:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow this one of the best fanfics i have ever read. This has been well planned. IT's got me hooked and I keep on beleiving this is what really happened. I wouldn't be surprised if Takaya Natsuki-sempai wrote this herself. This has a lot of depth and what u have written explains a lot about the current sohma family. Keep it up. I can't wait until the next chapter. Hurry and update please!!!!!
| Reviewed By: Kearoru On: September 16, 2003 09:53 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! I really like how you're doing this story. Although, I was a little hesitant before starting it, when I saw that it is a cross-over with Pet Shop of Horrors, just because of the reason, I don't like spoilers of manga or anime which I'm defiently able to own, and I now own the first two volumes of Pet Shop.
I'm curious to see how you are going to patch the two together. I'm also curious of why the cat was taken too. I do have an idea of the man in the book, but I don't want to ruin it for someone who doesn't already know, so I'll just keep it a secret.
I like how long your chapters are too. Since my laptop is in the shop, for the meantime I just print out stories I intend to read at school, and read them between my classes, but it was a good thing I didn't do that today, otherwise, you'd have gotten your reveiw Thursday instead of today.
Please, please keep it up. I'll be waiting (although impatiently) for the next installment.
Wow, long review, plus I'd like to add the note that I appreciate how you are portraying Shigure and Akito, (though my fav. is Kyo) so that they are not as vicious and evil, or as ehhh, underhanding I guess, when they were little.
Ja ne! | Reviewed By: greenember On: September 15, 2003 20:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's magnificent! Your originality is very impressive. I enjoyed it very much. It's by one of the best past of the Souma's I've read. I'm very exited about the next chapters. Amazing storyline! I'm somewhat glad you made Shigure less evil. I disliked Shigure in the manga, he seemed so dangerous. I like your interperation of him better. It marvelous! | | Pages (5): [ « < 1 2 3 4 5 ] |
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