| "For the Love of a Child" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: Elenek [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2004 01:35 CDT
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As I wipe the tears from my eyes. This was really good. I hate songfics so I wasn't to crazy about the ending. Your ending also seemed rushed and not quite as cohesive and emotionally driven as your other chapters. You hit the pinnacle in the plot line then dropped it like a brick. You might have done better writing another chapter between 14 and 15. It would have allowed you to release the emotional charge gradually as well as tie up a few more of your plot strings (Bulma, Goten's teacher, A little bit more Goku-Gohan-Goten). Overall though this is a fantastic fic and will be put on my list of reccomended reading. -El-
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Reviewed By: Lady Solarys [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2004 01:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story. Many of the chapters had me cluching my chest, wanting to do nothing more than reach out and hug Gohan to my chest. I actually had tears running down my cheeks for chapter 13. I like how you ended it.
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Title: ^-^
Reviewed By: kuramarose8888 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2003 14:04 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
CCCCCOOOOOLLLLLIIIIIEEEEEE!!!!! How on earth do you do it? *sigh* Why can't I do that?-_-0 ~Kitty~
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Reviewed By: Vege_Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2003 21:58 CST
Comment/Review:
*eyes widen* no chapter?! *falls over deadishly*
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Reviewed By: Vege_Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2003 00:06 CST
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*glares at the mistype on her screen name* That was supposed to be the title! *boots mediaminer*
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Reviewed By: *falls off a cliff* [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2003 00:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*eyes widen, still clutching the sides of her monitor just as she falls off the cliff she'd already been hanging on* Damn those cliffhangers! *falls into the ocean, not to be seen till next week*
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Title: For the love of GOD!
Reviewed By: Vege_Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2003 20:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
for the love of... THE SUSPENCE IS KILLING ME!!! I can't wait till tomorrow!! *Reaches toward her monitor and grabs the sides, shaking it* RAR!!!!
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Title: For the Love of a Child
Reviewed By: Anime Kikei [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2003 13:57 CST
Comment/Review:
I've been enjoying this fic from the start and really like it. Can't wait for the next chapter! keep up the good work! :)
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Reviewed By: D69 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2003 23:40 CDT
Comment/Review:
i think him and the techer shold get to gether
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Reviewed By: D69 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2003 23:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
good i whant more more
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Reviewed By: Vege_Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2003 12:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Beautiful. Simply, beautiful.
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Title: very cool
Reviewed By: village idiot [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2003 18:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
very good story can you read mine Crono's story
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Reviewed By: village idiot [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2003 18:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
very good update soon but Gohan was a bit rude will he and videl get together in this story?
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