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Reviewed By: Shippo Gene [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2003 23:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oi! i don't wanna wait for another chapter! i wanna know what happens! talk about a cliffy! well...please update soon! thanks!
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Reviewed By: Shippo Gene [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2003 22:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i thought i'd stop long enough to write a review! this is a good story! itz so cute and fluffy! but at the same time, not too fluffy. you balanced it just right. so far at least. anyways, i approve!
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Title: yay!
Reviewed By: Shippo Gene [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2003 20:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey! good story! i'm only on the second chapter, so i don't really have much to say yet...but good AU! you portrayed it very well.
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Reviewed By: DBZ Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2003 19:01 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this story! I've never read anything like this one. Update soon, I'll be waiting for the next chappie!
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Reviewed By: Aurora_thorn (Sorry not signed in) On: December 15, 2003 22:53 CST
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Yeah, good job on the spy thing. I'm so happy you updated! I can't believe that Sango decided to leave... *groan* and Kagome didn't even get to find out that Inuyasha wasn't Sango's finance. WWWAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!! Oh well, I look forward to the next chap and I hope you update really soon.
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Reviewed By: meera [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2003 19:59 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is an awesome fic!!! AH!!! DON'T MAKE SANGO AND KAGOME LEAVE!!! NOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: BabayBunny aka BB On: December 15, 2003 17:49 CST
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First of all i would like to say what kind of Golden Heart Mira must have. Manten! MANTEN! Who in their right mind would pick Manten over Hiten!!! Bald Boy Manten over cutie pie Hiten! Where im from those kinda things are just not done! Second i still dont like kikyou..not that its anything new....*growls* So i dont get it...Is Inu mad because Kag didn't explain what happened? Or is he sad because Kagome left? He should know that she could not stay if Sango wanted to go. I wonder how you will get them back together? Whats with Kouga? I think kik did not know she liked inu like that till kagome? I also think inu is confused about kikyou because he sees her like a friend and now she is acting all jealous.*growls* I hate her....*growls* *growls* *growls meanicingly* Okay shake it off!I like this chapter. But now i wanna know what happens!!! Last but not least *clears throat* *kneels down on floor* THANK YOU RYUDO!THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU!!!!!! THANK YOU!!! THANK YOU SOOOOO MUCH!!!!*stands up* Okay now i can repeat for you to update *falls to floor and holds hands up as if in prayer* PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!! UPDATE UPDATE PLEASE!!!! PLEASE UPDATE AND SOON!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE!!! YOULL MAKE MY WEEK!!! UPDATE SOON!!! *climbs up again* okay i think that is enought groveling for one day. Oh yea. don't mind my horrible spelling
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Reviewed By: Higurashi Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2003 00:56 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
really love this fic and this chp is the greatest.......i really hope that Inu/Kag and Sag/Mir in the end r 2gether!!!!!!!!!!!well can't wait till u up-date^_^
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Reviewed By: cursed_jax [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2003 19:17 CST
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Yes, they did spar. I love fights, even if they are short. I like that spar, although it has to suck that it probably wont happen again for at least a little while. talk about a plan that backfires, hope that kouga is there to tell them to turn around or something. thanks for the mail, although your story is on my favs, so you don't really have to worry about me knowing when you update. have fun with the rest
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Reviewed By: Saccharine On: December 14, 2003 18:56 CST
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this is great! cant wait for the next chp!
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Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2003 17:23 CST
Comment/Review:
Thanks for reviewing.
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Reviewed By: (fireash) On: December 14, 2003 17:17 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow thanks. i like being someone's fav reviewer. but i can't help not to...i love this story. it is sooooo good. tsk...everyone always jumps to conclusions. both pairs lied to each other so they are even now. well the girls don't know that the boys switched too. hmmmm well i really enjoyed this chapter. thanks for updating and i hope to read more soon.
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Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2003 15:55 CST
Comment/Review:
Thanks for reviewing.
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Reviewed By: BabayBunny [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2003 14:05 CST
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*rereads last chap* NOOOOO!!!! If i didn't hate kik before!!!! *growls* AND I DID!!!! You dont wanna know half the senarios i made to kill her. They involved salt flats and cement walls covered with go-away-evil symboles! SEE LOOK!!! This is what i told my friend while reading!!! Akiaoshba1: BITCH WHORE!!! Nathalia9182: ? Akiaoshba1: INU WAS GOING 2 KISS KAG FOR THE 1ST TIME N KIK SHOWED HER UGLY FACE!!!! I THOUT I HAD KILLED HER!! Akiaoshba1: *GROWLS* Nathalia9182: ... Nathalia9182: o Akiaoshba1: *ATTACKS* I THOUGHT THE LYE DID THE TRICK Nathalia9182: guess u need something better than that Akiaoshba1: GOD DAMNED BITCH!!!! *USES HAND AND RIPS OUT BLACK HEART* Akiaoshba1: *RUN TO SALT FLATS AND BURRYES IT* Nathalia9182: heh Akiaoshba1: DYE BITCH DYE Nathalia9182: u mean Nathalia9182: DIE Akiaoshba1: FOR ONE IN YOUR LIFE OR AFTER LIFE DIE THE RITE WAY!!!! Nathalia9182: not dye Akiaoshba1: *HACKS BODY INTO MICOSCOPIC PEICES/MOOSH* Akiaoshba1: *FEEDS TO MAD COWS AND KILLS COWS* Akiaoshba1: *BURNS THEIR FLESH8 Nathalia9182: wow Akiaoshba1: *GIVES IT TO INSANE MEN* Nathalia9182: lots trouble Akiaoshba1: TO EAT Akiaoshba1: *KILLS CRAZY MEN* Akiaoshba1: *BURNS BODYS AGIN* Akiaoshba1: *MIXES W/ GLUE* Akiaoshba1: *MAKES INTO CEMENT WALL* Nathalia9182: lol Akiaoshba1: *COVERS WALL WITH EVIL WARDS AND BLESSES IT* Akiaoshba1: that should work Nathalia9182: it better Nathalia9182: or u'll die Nathalia9182: from an attack Akiaoshba1: lol I cant wait to see what happens!!! How horrible is everyone going to feel when they fall in love. With people they can 'never' have!!! I want Inuyasha to tell Mir...that he loves 'the princess'! UPDATE UPDATE!!!
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Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2003 11:12 CST
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Thanks for reviewing folks. I am happy to annouce I am almost done with chapter 10.
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