| "Meant To Be" Reviews/Comments [ 223 ] |
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Reviewed By: VeRoN(nsi) On: October 03, 2004 12:19 CDT
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Awsome chappie!I loved the fluff between Inu and Kag!Anyway...about the options...I don't really care what you decide as long as it turns out as wonderful as this one, but action is always fun and even more if there's Inu vs. Koga in it. I really want to know what Koga plans on doing, so pelase update as soon as you can ;)Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Rezol [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2004 18:32 CDT
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I LOVE YOUR STORY! this is the first review i have posted at this site and also the first story i have read from here. I hope you update soon. i can't really tell you exactly what i liked because the whole thing was good.
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Reviewed By: sadaboxter83 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2004 23:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh please hurry i realy like this story and i cant wait to read more......
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Reviewed By: VeRoN(not signed in) On: August 16, 2004 22:08 CDT
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God that was funny!I mean, beavers???where did that come from??My mother must think me crazie laughing like that in front of the monitor(lol). Anyway, great chappie, update soon!!Ps: Inu was so sweet, I wish he could always be that way...
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Reviewed By: DBZ Lover (not in) On: August 16, 2004 10:40 CDT
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LoL, beavers! Kagome's got some kinda imagination, since hallucinations originally stem from real thoughts....^^. This chapter was funny, I loved it! Thanks for updating, hope the next chapter comes soon!
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Reviewed By: yuyu-inuyashaluva-not signed in On: August 16, 2004 06:55 CDT
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yeah!! u updated! so good. keep it up
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness(I have got to sign in one of these days) On: August 15, 2004 20:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wait! did I hear right?! Rin isn't going to do the cute whiny bit?! Looks like she's bringing out the big guns! Sess better run!! Kagome was so funny in this chapter!! And I think it was cute that Inuyasha didn't rub it in about being right. And even cuter the way he and Kagome cuddled together so she could sleep ~sigh~ I need to call my boyfriend! Question! And this time I hope I'm wrong; Is Naraku still going to do his evil plan even though he's with Kikyou now? ~squeal!~ you replied to me again! I feel loved!! Update soon please!!!
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Reviewed By: Higurashi Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2004 15:06 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awsome up-date do it again soon^_^
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Reviewed By: rachelll On: August 14, 2004 00:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love your story! it is really something else! however, there is one problem i have when reading it. during the dialogue, its written so that i don't know who is speaking sometimes. it would really help me if you kept that in mind while finishing the rest of your story. thank you for writing. you have a great plot and i can't wait to see what happens next! Rachel
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Title: Giant reviw for whole story up to ch 15
Reviewed By: LadyOrion [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2004 03:11 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Ok I promised you a long review so here it is. I am having a lot of fun with your story. The concept of the double switch is fun and I love that Sango is the Princess. About the swithch though. It is a bit confusing becusese you don't describe it enough. I would suggest adding a bit more detail in the form of Miroku/Inu & Sango/Kag discussing how to pull off the plan. I was totaly confused when Miroku was the one who grabbed Kagome I think it was because they didn't switch names. I understand why condiering the servents wouldn't have called them the right names but still. Mention somewhere that nither Sango or Miroku know the name of thier intinded because if they did the whole plan would be POOF when they kept the right names. That is the only thing truly bothering me. Yes there are some spelling and tense errors but WHO CARES. I would only sugesst a last read though to make sure you don't have the wrong word example: to, too, two. I my self am horriable about those and they are the only true types of spelling error that i notice when I read. :) Tense isn't much of a problem but because some times its hard to decide which to write in(I personaly don't care for presnt and always slip out of it when i write). I love your stoy and hope you don't mind my abnormaly long constutive criticism review. I want more ASAP I need to know what happend to Kagome. I want a big INUYASHA TO THE RESCUE! scean. I love that they still have conflict but not such heart renching as normal 'Orio |
Reviewed By: lil_rei_chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2004 13:57 CDT
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update again soon plz
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Title: Wow!
Reviewed By: kitkat2919 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2004 19:44 CDT
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Seriously, you are a GOOD writer! I really don't know what my opinion means to you, but I hope that it means something good! Also, take as long as you need to with the next chapter. We would rather have nice, long GOOD chapters, than a bunch of cruddy short ones. I'll be back, but cya!
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Reviewed By: Higurashi Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2004 19:23 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
can't wait to read more up-date really really really really really really really really really really soon^_^
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Reviewed By: DBZ Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2004 10:23 CDT
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Well, considering what happened at the end of this chapter, I guess InuYasha won that argument! Anyway, great chapter, hope ya update soon!
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Reviewed By: sabriel7 (2 laz to log on) On: July 26, 2004 02:40 CDT
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LOL! I can so picture that last part with Kagome falling over, SO FUNNY! Nice Mir/San fluff too, update soon!
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