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 Reviewed By: goofy_goober [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 22, 2009 02:40 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Alright, I at least like to leave one review for every story that I read. Overall, I thought that this story was fun. I think that your writing has great potential, but there were a lot of points were I got confused and had to re-read what you were trying to say, or the grammar just through me off...but other then that, I was able to get the story. I think that it was pretty creative. I am looking forward to other things from you. Writing is always something you can grow in, remember that! Great job! P.S. - How could you end the story like that? lol. But I thought it was good. It shows that there are like endless possibilities and a lot of the times, that is what writers want their readers to come away with. Okay, that is all I wanted to say. Keep up the good work!!
 Reviewed By: luvme4eternity  On: April 24, 2007 05:38 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
This was a very good story and I enjoyed myself a great deal. You are a great writer and never forget that. You did a wonderful job on this and I'm glad that I got the chance to read it. Keep up the good work and I hope to read something else done by you. Never give up, even if it seems that others don't like it... Who cares what they think, the only thing that matters is what you think. If your confident in your writing then nothing else should matter... keep that in mind always. Well take care of yourself and keep writing fantastic stories.... You have a wonderful imagination by the way.
 Reviewed By: adea neri  On: April 18, 2007 14:59 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
loved the story the last chap ws a bit confuing. but enjoyed it none the less.
 Reviewed By: adea neri  On: April 18, 2007 01:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
loved it.
 Title: Potential
Reviewed By: A_bigfoot37 [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 05, 2007 17:36 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
The title in specific is under meaning of a potential sequal to this story, with Kagura confused about Naraku and Kikyo and what's right in her opinion. She goes through different phases trying to figure herself out and comes to one final decision that will decide the path she walks. You could probably form a friendship between her and Souten due to the friendship of Kikyo and Hiten. Give it a bit more of a push and you could bring Shippo into the equation. Four terrors that love mischief, Shippo's nature as a fox, Kagura just to be spiteful, probably the same with Sansei, and Souten just because she doesn't want to be left out. You have not once mentioned the mishievous little Kitsune in this story. The same thing goes for Souten. If you have a sequal you could probably bring the Shikon no Tama into it as well. Then you got Koga and Ayame, he appears to be very attached to her and hasn't even realized it yet, it's only a matter of time before he figures out that he is feeling something, one can only hope that she doesn't ditch him before he can sort his thoughts. I actually like pairing off Koga and Ayame. It's obvious in the Anime that Koga has feelings for her, he is most likely too confused to sort them out, probably also too dense to sort them out as well. I can't really think of anything else to put. I liked the story though and I can only be hopeful that there will be a sequal. My FF.Net is Anime Insaniac if you want see some of my stories, not that there that good. But hearing opinions and knowing that you entertain readers is enough to at least make me keep writing.
 Reviewed By: OrlandoLover [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 05, 2007 16:43 CST
Comment/Review:
loves the fic...my only suggestion is when switching stories??? u no like going from Mir and San to Inu and Kags but my suggestion is to put in Kag said...and Inu said... so that way it's a tad bit easier to follow......but besides that i loved it...SAVE THE EARTH IT'S THE ONLY PLANET WITH CHOCOLATE...Cheers
 Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 28, 2007 21:14 CST
Rating(s):
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
OMG I LOVE IT SOOOOO MUCH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! awwwww im so tired that i could sleep on the keyboard but i LOVE this story SO MUCH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 Reviewed By: Cartel Lover  On: December 25, 2006 02:31 CST
Comment/Review:
the prince of tennis is pretty good. and i love this story!
 Reviewed By: aspiringtolove [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 17, 2006 01:43 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I stayed up all night reading this. It is amazing! I cannot wait to read more!
 Title: yay
Reviewed By: cassie06 [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 16, 2006 00:43 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
YAY..inuyasha and kagome..they need a spring wedding!!!!
 Reviewed By: Odoriko-chan [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 15, 2006 21:55 CST
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Wow I really enjoyed that chapter! I really like your writing style. ^_^ Crimson Hero is really good. I don't know about the other two though sorry!
 Reviewed By: dreamer789 [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 14, 2006 20:55 CST
Comment/Review:
just wondering. what is aff. net? love the story update soon!
 Reviewed By: dreamer789 [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 14, 2006 20:02 CST
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
i love this story! liek it is definatly one of my favorites. please please please udpat soon i cant wait til you do. i really want to know what happens next.
 Title: great
Reviewed By: cassie06 [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 11, 2006 18:41 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I just wanted to say im really enjoying your story! i stumbled apon it today!! and i have not been able to stop reading lol. also i notice some of your notes, like saying how you weren't really talking about kikyo and naraku cause it made people gag! i thought that was kinda funny.. i didn't make me gag.. i don't who kikyo is with, just as long as it's NOT inuyasha.hehe.. well thanks for writing this story i love it
 Reviewed By: adea neri  On: November 08, 2006 01:17 CST
Comment/Review:
kool an update
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