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Title: Maintaining
Reviewed By: Lyralei [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2014 01:50 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are outstanding! I loved this story and have already read it
and the sequel twice now. I'm sure I will keep coming back to them.
Thanks for making such an enjoyable piece of work!
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Reviewed By: Zofo [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2008 18:07 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of truly epic Vegeta/Goku stories. I re-read it whenever there are no new stories to read and it always leaves me smiling and satisfied. The drama and content are amazing. Really I can't praise you enough. I thank you sincerely for writing it.
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Reviewed By: shivalatina [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2006 07:59 EDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Very nice. I never expected the story to true out so well. I did a lot of guessing at what was happening and I'm glad that the clues were placed.
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Title: Sorry!
Reviewed By: Frozenflower this is SN but cant login On: March 31, 2006 07:58 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey there--I want you to know I'm a big fan of this story, and I'm planning on checking out your others. You guilted me into reviewing *grins* and even though it took me 15 minutes of logging in and out, trying to LEAVE a review, i persevered and finally made it. I love your fic =) was never a big Goku/Vegeta fan, but I think you may have made me a believer! Also, big supporter of the rights of homosexuals/other non-heteros to marriage. I don't know your persuasion, but you should check out the boycott marriage initiative online. Also, you don't get as many reviews as you deserve, because mediaminer is such a cunt about letting anyone do it. I swear, tighter than a conservative christian fundamentalist on her wedding night. And on that lovely note, i'm off to read more! =)
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Reviewed By: lord_of_the_pies [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2005 14:33 EDT
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Fantastic story- so much so I have spent nights up until 2 am reading. There are so many things I like about this- such as it being one of the few stories where I didn't manage to guess what was going to happen (when I found out it was Frieza using the slave bond, I had no guess at that prior) until it did, or very close to, and the good OC (I actually grew to like Rezu's character). And on top of this, the lemons were good too (I particularly liked the exploding sex, and even more so, the double body effect). I like the way the characters where used, from the interaction between Goku and Vegeta (as well as Frieza), to that of Vegeta and Piccolo, and the emotion between them all was wonderfuly dealt with. I'm sure I've missed something, but I honestly enjoyed reading this, so I'm off to the sequel!
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Reviewed By: Bakani Banana [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2004 05:07 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My personal views on gay marriages is this: Let's all be miserable together. My folks have been married nearly 30 years, I'm edging up on 10 myself. As a married mother of three, I wholeheartedly WANT gays to be married. A loving and commited relationship with someone and there's no wedding involved? Oh HELL no!! Say vows, jump broom, common law, whatever it takes! Be joined before man and God and sit next to your married straight friends and bitch about the lack of sink space in the morning. Oh, the story is awesome so far. Got a bit distracted here....hmm.
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Reviewed By: Turtle Dreamer [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2004 09:34 EDT
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Great story!! I look forward to reading "Quest".
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Reviewed By: Turtle Dreamer [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2004 09:32 EDT
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Great story!! I look forward to reading "Quest".
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Title: chap 45
Reviewed By: XxNeko_YoukaixX On: July 27, 2004 16:18 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY!!!!! i got a lemon! *jumps around Pixelgoddess lap then purrs loudly against her to show she(neko girl) loves the fic* sorry i didn't review the last one 'cause i was still on my nekonip high *neko grin* so all u have have got was a bunch of mombo jombo & thought i went nuts. but yeah i LOOOOVE the endin' it was both cute & hot. *grins up at Pixelgoddess* now 'bout this sequel r u gonna put anymore pairin's in it? & what about the weddin'? when is that takin' place? & what 'bout Trunks & goten? whats gonna go on with them? (damn thats a lot of questions. i guess i'm still sufferin' from that neko nip HA that explains why i can't seem to stop jumppin' around Pixellgoddess's lap) ......errr(brain fart it happens when i get hyper & after a lot a questions i suddenly get a brian fart so i'll just do this while i get my brain settled) *crawls under Pixelgoddess's shirt & curls up next to her & gives a loud pur for attention from Pixelgoddess* i'm just gonna wait here for that sequel & when it does u better believe i'm gonna scrabble to see it *ears kept purked up for the sequel while her fluffy brown tail twiches in excitment*(hehe i'm truin' to calm myself but its not workin' to well NOW WHERE R U TO PET ME!!!!)
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Title: *applauds furiously*
Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2004 14:08 EDT
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I'm very touched you gave me such a lovely scene. I'll treasure it always *sniff, sniff* Actually, I do love it when Vegeta cries--I just wanted him to hurry up and get over it and be able to do it with Kakor!! :-) Can't wait for the sequel...oh and thanks for the Raditz flashback--I still think that's the most awesome lemon ever (early in this epic!) your fan debbiechan
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Reviewed By: chayron [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2004 11:38 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes! Happy ending! Thank you so much for this incredible story! Now I'm waiting for a sequel.
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Reviewed By: Kethry [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2004 10:09 EDT
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What they didn't distroy the house!? gods think what they will do at SS3! Maybe Bulma should make them a few more just in case. **clears throat** sorry, power is such a turn on. I get the ichy feeling the brain washing will be back in the next one. You wonderfully evil thing you **Smirks** . **leans in close, one foot poking the muse tried to the leg of her desk** You have to make that mean old muse listens to you. I just rope mine in or he goes and dances naked on the roof.
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Reviewed By: Elenek [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2004 21:38 EDT
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*Standing Ovations!!!!!* I get all excited when I get my e-mail that Maintaining by Pixel Goddess has been updated. And now I'm not going to get anymore *cries profusely* I'm going to have to move you from favorite story to favorite author so I don't miss the new story. I already did it once. It was a mess. Very beautiful ending. My BR is not a Yaoi fan but reads them from time to time because she says the plot lines are better in Yaoi fics. For that reason alone, I keep telling her to read this one. This was a great and fantastic story!!! I am so looking forward to the sequel I cannot tell you. -El-
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Title: hi
Reviewed By: ladyKATT [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2004 20:19 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cool happy ending! Looking foward to sequil. Are you going to put the others in it more? Like Chi and her wife and the kids? could get to povide the nesary equitment needed so ChiChi can have a kid? You are planning on making the one who down grated Goku for being with his prince pay...I hope so because they got off to easy and if Veggie is going to be better they might die just looking at them wrong....right? I could happen. (sigh) Well looking forward to next story please let me know when it is up. Katt39@hotmail.com Thanks Bye Bye LadyKATT
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2004 19:25 EDT
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Piccolo saved the day! Good for him--Vegeta's crying was starting to get on my nerves. At least he has Goku to take care of him, poor Veggie. I'm impressed that you've followed this story almost all the way through and kept your level of writing so high. You're awesome! your fan, debbiechan
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