| "Two Halves: Circles" Reviews/Comments [ 60 ] |
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Reviewed By: Turtle_fire On: January 06, 2004 02:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What an interesting chapter, you did a great job describing the old convent, it gave me the chills! I can't wait to read more about the adventures ahead!
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: January 05, 2004 14:39 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Update soon, I can't wait to read more.
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Reviewed By: TurtleFire [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2003 17:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The morning after was so bittersweet. you'd never make things too easy for Heero and Duo, ne? Thanks for the lime, it was interesting and delicious! I am glad the storyline finally turns back to her ladyship and the convent; I always wonder what she actually was, and her role in the choas.
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Reviewed By: bgal [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2003 21:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I really like the way you are playing with theri bacic personalities to fit your story
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Reviewed By: GoldenRat [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2003 12:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Heero & Duo making out. ::hee, hee::
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: December 10, 2003 12:05 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finally. The moment we were waiting for! Heero and Duo get together. Got to love the way Duo's mind work. LOL! Keep up the awesome job and update soon.
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Title: Zefyr
Reviewed By: Zefyr [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2003 12:02 CST
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Woo! Heh, I adore this story. Nothing like a break from writing to say - hey! distraction! another chapter from Maldorer! *doing the snoopy dance* You've nailed Wufei on this one, I think, and too bad there was no appearance from Sally...your version of her just cracks me up. (Twit! bwahahaha)
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Reviewed By: Riyo On: December 07, 2003 17:41 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I hope you'll update soon. Sometimes RL can be a bitch about it, but hopefully you won't like to lea your dear readers hanging on, ne? ^_~ I'm enjoying this fic very much, so I'd like to read more of it soon! G and J bickering is hilarious, and I'm just waiting for some more Heero and Duo action! Hey! Are you planning on putting a lemon is this story? Also, I'm just waiting for Treize to show up! Bye the way, how many chapters will this fic have? I can't wait for a happy (maybe lemony! That would be good!) ending for Duo and Heero! =^^= Love your work. Please write more soon!
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Reviewed By: Tsuki Doriimaa On: December 04, 2003 21:17 CST
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Oh lovely. hehe ::smirk:: So stuttering and incomplete sentences is Treize eh? ::chuckles:: That's classic. Who's the elequent one then? ^_^ Hmm I LOVED the part with Heero fighting the Chain dude. How you described it was coolness! hehe DEfinitely captured my attention. Could almost see him fight dancing like that... or fight looking like it's a dance, I guess I should say. ^_^ Wish I was that good at discribing things heh eh well. I LOVED all three chaps! Sorra, too tired to write a better review. ::chuckles:: They were great though. I love reading this story, it always keeps you guessing and the relationship growing more and more between Heero and Duo is just wonderful with all the ups an downs you put in there, and trials they have to over come. It's really good! Much luck in the next ones!! ^_~
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Reviewed By: GoldenRat [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2003 11:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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So that's how Trieze "survived."
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: December 04, 2003 09:25 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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So Treize has decided to wait. Does that means that we can expect more Heero and Duo moments? If so, You have to update soon. Keep up the GREAT job and update soon.
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: November 28, 2003 18:49 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Wow! That was unexpected. You have to give us the answers soon. As for Duo checking Heero out, I suggest that you even things out. I just love Heero and Duo moments. Keep up the GREAT job and keep updating.
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: November 26, 2003 18:18 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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LOL! Queen of Hell... (ponders for a while) Actually it may suit you since you... You, I can't believe it, they were so close to kissing again and chances are they will get attacked. BTW a midnight picnic sound so romantic and it was very creative and original from your part. Keep up your great writing talent and update soon.
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Reviewed By: GoldenRat [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2003 16:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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::Laughs:: Poor Heero, having to ask Quatre about sex, when he could have just researched it...
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: November 24, 2003 17:55 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Ahhh! Just when I think things will start getting better for us the reader, meaning those wonderful Duo and Heero moments. You turn it around and give us more bad guys (sighs) Update soon and keep up the GREAT job.
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