| "Two Halves: Circles" Reviews/Comments [ 60 ] |
| Pages (4): [ « < 1 2 3 4 ] |
Reviewed By: black beauty On: November 07, 2003 18:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nooooooooooo... not another cliffhanger. What will happen to Heero and what actions will Duo take? Update soon and keep up the great job.
|
Reviewed By: black beauty On: November 05, 2003 17:56 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
When will be Heero's turn to admit that he is in love with Duo? I love this chapter. Keep up the great job and update soon.
|
Reviewed By: GoldenRat [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2003 11:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Okay, the two things behind the attempts to get Duo now know that they both have the power.
|
Reviewed By: GoldenRat [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2003 17:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
The creature tasted the magic in BOTH of them. Will the "person" behind all this figure out that their magic is connected?
|
Reviewed By: black beauty On: November 03, 2003 14:52 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Great chapter! I love those sneak peeks you give us about Heero's and Dou's feeling towards each other. Keep it up!
|
Reviewed By: TurtleFire [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2003 12:57 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Duo to the rescue, great scenes! He is totally awesome; you've made me hungry for more!
|
Reviewed By: black beauty On: October 29, 2003 16:45 CST
Comment/Review:
Heero has been captured? To be sold off? No way! I want retribution. I hope Dou deals with it personally. BTW don't torture us too much. I want fluff darn it. They already went through a tough time, why continue punishing your readers. LOL! I'm whining too much. I guess that shows how much I love this fic. Keep up the GREAT job and update soon.
|
Reviewed By: GoldenRat [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2003 11:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Not even worried about Heero & Trowa being captured. I mean Quatre can track Trowa and Heero could use his magic if it ever really came to it. Duo's POV of how Quatre acted in just too fun.
|
Reviewed By: black beauty On: October 27, 2003 11:51 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love those moments where Heero and Dou are both wishing for similar things. Keep up the great job and update soon.
|
Reviewed By: GoldenRat [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2003 11:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Will Heero's using his power really drive him insane?
|
Reviewed By: TurtleFire [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2003 16:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Wuffie! I think Duo and Heero should trust him more and let him know everything up front even though he gets too excited sometimes. (and it is funny to see him explode) I hope Duo will learn to dress nothing underneath the dressing gown in the future. What an exciting fic! You are such a strong writer. Thanks a lot! :)
|
Reviewed By: black beauty On: October 24, 2003 13:25 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter, at least Heero is willing to give the whole marriage thing a chance. Update soon and keep up the great job.
|
Reviewed By: GoldenRat [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2003 21:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
well, it good to be reading more two halves. But the cliffhanger, that's just not nice.
|
Reviewed By: black beauty On: October 21, 2003 21:05 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! The horror... Another cliffhanger. It was too good to be true, a wedding but no mushy stuff. Hope you can make it up to your readers down the line. Love the start of the sequel btw, and don't forget to update soon.
|
Reviewed By: TurtleFire [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2003 12:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The best 1x2 wedding night ever! I didn't expect a sequel like this at all and was pleasantly surprised. Give us more lemon or lime loving, would you?
|
| Pages (4): [ « < 1 2 3 4 ] |
