| "Two Halves: Circles" Reviews/Comments [ 60 ] |
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Reviewed By: Turtle Fire On: November 23, 2003 01:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finally! Wufei is awesome! Your Sally is so bold, I can imagine her doing a good job manipulating the twit around after they got married!
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Reviewed By: Devil1 On: November 20, 2003 20:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That's good. And very interesting the "chat" between Wu and Sal. Congratulations.
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: November 20, 2003 19:05 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Your reseach sounds fun. I think the added world superstitions makes your fic more enjoyable. Keep it up and update soon.
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Reviewed By: GoldenRat [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2003 15:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Interesting concept.
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Reviewed By: GoldenRat [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2003 21:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Come on. Just have them make out, then everything will blow up.
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: November 17, 2003 19:04 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO... another cliffhanger! The horror! The pain! LOl! Keep up the GREAT job and update soon
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Reviewed By: Devil1 On: November 17, 2003 13:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellents chapters.
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Title: Zefyr
Reviewed By: Zefyr [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2003 11:10 CST
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Hah! Sally rocks! (And when you throw in J and G, I just can't help but laugh through the scenes... you've caught their repartee so beautifully - such snark! such wit!) ..and speaking of wit, Sally's internal monologue just had me in stitches. Wufei. Twit. Bwahahaha. Yup, I'm definitely addicted to this story, and can't wait to see what you come up with next, but that's not just cause of the story, but also because you pay attention to the other characters, and lavish just as much attention on their quirks as on our two main intrepid heros...so to speak. ;D
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Reviewed By: gail On: November 14, 2003 10:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i've been following your stories, and this, as usual, has me panting...i love it when these guys get sweet and cozy, but i love it more when heero loses his cool and expresses himself. great work!
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Reviewed By: TurtleFire [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2003 23:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gee, will the universe blow up if they have sex?
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: November 12, 2003 21:16 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
You call that fun? How are the last two chapters going to make us feel better when the guys finally admit that there is some sort of attraction yet they keep on blowing up things when they get together? How is hand holding going to keep us sastified when you left the last chapter on an unknown enemy plotting against them? Ahhh! You really like to torture us. But I digress, I love this fic. I enjoyed reading the last two chapters. Thanks for posting two chapters and keep up the GREAT job.
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Reviewed By: GoldenRat [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2003 20:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Wonder where they intend to stop?
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: November 10, 2003 12:00 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
(Does a happy dance) They finally kissed, they finally kissed... this chapter was awesome. I love Duo and Heero moments. Keep it up and update soon.
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Reviewed By: TurtleFire [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2003 01:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Heero, he gets burn pretty frequently in this fic! And Ok, You have officially earned the title of "the Most Evil Cliffhanger Queen of the Gundam Wing Universe". Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: Devil1 On: November 07, 2003 22:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, you did it. You caught all my attention. I'll be waiting more of your excellent work.
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