| "Visible To You" Reviews/Comments [ 22 ] |
Title: YAY!
Reviewed By: dark irish sorceress [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2006 20:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
oh i loved that just as much as Roomates! that was quite cute! i luv your stories!~ur fan~dark irish sorceress a.k.a. shigome
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Title: PRICLESS!!
Reviewed By: Tailz [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2006 21:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was hilarious!! I was giggling like a maniac at the end, just picturing that!! Really great way of writing, it seems so realistic... I love it!
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Title: Nice ending! LOVE the begginging and GREAT PLOT!
Reviewed By: Arenja [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2006 21:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Amazing fic, I loved the story plot and how Syaoran rescued Sakura! He literally beat the crap out of that pervert, Akira! I loved that scene! And the ending is HILARIOUSE! He kisses Sakura and TOUYA IS IN THE CAR NEXT TO THEM! LOL! LOL! Took me all day to read that! Mainly because I went to the store half way through it but still... Anyways, I'm looking foreward to reading more of your fics!
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Reviewed By: yanna_enoah [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2006 13:17 CST
Comment/Review:
Hey...the story is cute..kept me awake until 4 in the morning... the link to your site is broken so i was not able to read any more of your stories. anyway, i like this one.
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Title: unemployed author
Reviewed By: interested reader On: August 04, 2005 00:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
first off I must say that you are a very talented writer and should take this up as a job. second, mind you this isn't a bad thing, I had a relitivly easy time predicting what was going to happen this meaning I would had done the exact same if not extremely close to the same thing myself. Third I was thouroly satified with the ending and the humor thoughout the piece. lastly I happen to enjoy the "Roomates" piece because it kept me up all night with wondering what would happen. Also I was wondering when you would finish Natsu? Albeit a little away from the norm I can't bring my self not to finish a story. If you would maybey send me some answers by e-mail I'm At:Sephorothkhstyle@sbcglobal.net Hope to read more Ja Ne!!!!
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Title: Visible To You
Reviewed By: MzEvilBlossoms [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2005 13:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! Awww... I love this story! Its so cute, and I really wanted Syaoron to confess his feelings... that was really good. You have talent, my friend! =D Keep writing! Well done! Byeee... MzEvilBlossoms (aka Rapuzel) xxx P.S. What other stories have you written??? Let me know!!! Bye!!!
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Reviewed By: some girl On: June 21, 2005 17:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
haha! funny chapter!
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Reviewed By: some girl On: June 21, 2005 17:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
cool fist chapter!!
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Title: love it
Reviewed By: pure hope [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2005 16:11 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love the story please rite the last chapter i really want to know what happens so please UPDATE
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Reviewed By: elisa ang On: September 23, 2004 19:40 CDT
Comment/Review:
do u reliz itz been lyk a year since youve updated????
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Reviewed By: takeruHikari [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2004 14:13 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story. Please finish the last chapter and what ever is left.
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Reviewed By: elisa ang On: July 18, 2004 20:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
okay!!! i read this story like a year ago on ff.net but it wasnt finished, then my dad locks off the site!!! i was extrememly depressed for a while then i find it here and i was so happy!!! then you go and font update it for like.... for ever!!! how is that fair??? how is it that i can be this attached to a story??? why am i asking you??? plezze update soon or i might just do something unhealthy!!
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Reviewed By: marcy On: July 15, 2004 18:10 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story love everything about it so plz plz plz update as soon as posible plz plz
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Reviewed By: Elisa Ang On: July 11, 2004 17:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is just great because it seems like you actually came up with the plot instead of just takin one from another movie like most of the authors do here! i mean, it takes no talent to copy and paste a script from the internet and change the names! i really enjoyed this story because it is funny and cute!!! except you need to UPDATE once and awhile!!
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Reviewed By: no one in paticular On: May 27, 2004 14:54 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE IT!!!!! please continue! i want to read the ending. please update soon! ^_^
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Reviewed By: kayekay On: April 21, 2004 20:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
wen're u goin to finish this story. i'd really like to read tha ending. cus this story's incredibly cute. i love tha part where syaoran's trying to tell her wat to do an say to get a date. poor sakura. hehehe. =D plz hurry up finishing. i love this story!!
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Reviewed By: mugs_n_ron On: January 23, 2004 23:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Mugs: AMAZING! If you don't update soon I think I'll die! >loads gun< So update soon! >puts gun to her head<
Ron: >waiting<
Mugs: >glares at Ron< Ron: ^^; Mugs: Anyways... like I said UPDATE! Love your fics! Keep up the amazing work! Peace Out! ^_~V Ron: >eating a cream cheese pogo<
Mugs: =S Ron: ^-^
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Reviewed By: insanecherry On: January 20, 2004 18:22 CST
Comment/Review:
hey kitty neko tis is sofie/triple s or u can say triple s how long r u going 2 keep the reader waiting i need something 2 read 4 fun. i read al 326 books i just bought while waiting 4 u 2 update. plz update and finish the story soon or i actually hav 2 listen 2 my annoying cuz. talk about her love life in high school. man, it toture she only 2 years older and her life is sicking. plz help!!!!... and 2 all u reader R&R so she wod update, wod ya plz. bye now i hav 2 go feed my dog real quick. don't 4get 2 R&R. t2l
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Reviewed By: triple s On: December 21, 2003 03:05 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please hurry up and finish
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Title: EXCELLENT!!!
Reviewed By: CrayZee On: November 14, 2003 23:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LUVED IT! I REALLY LUVED IT! if u can, don't take 4eva 2 update (what am i talking about? I take 4eva 2 update, myself!) OK, WRITE MORE ASAP!
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Reviewed By: Medatsu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2003 21:04 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
KOOLIES!!!!!! This was done very well! I definitaly loved it.....it's hard to find 'good' autors...
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Title: Great!
Reviewed By: Jo On: October 26, 2003 12:41 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Funny! I like your sense of humor and hope that you'll continue writing the story, by the looks of it, Syaoran might become visible before he's old and grey. That would be a good thing. Anyways, I really like the plot line, it's original and it's a funny story. Please continue!
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