| "Frozen Heart" Reviews/Comments [ 46 ] |
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Reviewed By: gca On: May 29, 2005 09:20 CDT
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hi...just to let you know. i posted the next chapter separately. so please check out Frozen Heart 21/21...thanks for the kind words :)
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Reviewed By: Ki-Meki On: May 08, 2005 10:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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It may seem like I'm being over-enthusiastic about this fic... But I've really enjoyed reading it so far, and I believe you fully deserve a ten for everything. You have a great style, you don't/hardly make any spelling or grammar mistakes at all (haven't seen any), and you describe the feelings and thoughts of the characters very well. I hope you will continue soon...?
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Reviewed By: laku [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2005 15:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great fic. and i liked reading it. i hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2004 10:50 CDT
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Please update soon!! I love your story!!!!
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Reviewed By: Lady Silverwings [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2004 07:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please oh please, update soon! I'm dying over here! Love it love it!
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Title: Mashiro Karasu
Reviewed By: Mashiro_Karasu [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2004 00:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story! Havent stopped reading it for the last 2 hours...so when will there be more to read!?
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Reviewed By: ello ello On: April 10, 2004 17:05 CDT
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yo good job with the story! ^^ keep up the good work and update soon! ^^
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Title: Chapter 20
Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2004 23:52 CDT
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Jeez, I felt like a friggin' yo-yo after this chapter! I'd laugh at the antics of Trowa and Quatre, or all the boys worrying over Duo in the kitchen, then my stomach would tangle up in knots worrying about Jason. Obviously he didn't take what "Max" had to say well at all, based on the appearance of the apartment. At least Duo isn't trying to help Derek out by himself. Thanks for opening Heero and Duo's eyes, no pun intended.
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Reviewed By: shinimegami82 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2004 21:43 CDT
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Hmm...I wonder if Jason's going to go to Duo's home and see Quatre and Trowa together and get made at Quatre since Jason thinks the Quatre is the one that has Duo's heart. Wonder if they're going to tell Jason and Derek that it's actually Heero that has Duo's heart. Oh well, keep up the good work and write more. Can't wait for the next chapter. ^_^
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Reviewed By: CrimsonSeraph On: April 01, 2004 03:22 CST
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ah man! u just had to stop there didn't ya. well, after weeping from the all the angst and romance and stuff, i've come to the conclusion that u should update sometime in the near future so all your readers can read the next chapter :)
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Reviewed By: Terry Maxwell On: March 26, 2004 18:40 CST
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wowwwwwwwww its so beautifulll finally Heero tell Duo that he loves him.... oh my god that was so swetttttt...... n_n
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Reviewed By: shinimegami82 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2004 01:53 CST
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Aw, what a sort of sweet ending for a chapter. Well, I can't wait for you to write more. I'll be waiting.
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Title: *blubbering mess*
Reviewed By: Shadow_Kat [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2004 12:02 CST
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...I've cried all over the damn keyboard!!! What if I can't type anymore...damn you and your romantic notions. I love it, I've been hanging on every word since the start and now that it's finially falling into place I've become a blubbering onna. It's good kid, your style is very descriptive and I liked that. You didn't leave those messy blank spots for the readers to fill in, but you took the time to even describe the layout of the rooms. I love the super computer Shini...God I would love to have one myself. Although I think it would probably have a stroke trying to deal with me. Please don't make us wait for too long for the next chapters! Keep up the good work! ;)
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Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2004 02:32 CST
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Now that would be something funny to read - Heero facing off against Shin! I'm not too sure who I'd put my money on though... Would someone please knock Duo over the head and wake him up to how much Heero's changed and how much he loves him? They both need to stop skirting around each other and just open up and talk. (Can't you tell I love the angst?) : ) Great job once again!
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Reviewed By: shinimegami82 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2004 23:35 CST
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Ooh, ooh! I love this fic. I can't wait to read more. Write more soon, please.
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