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Reviewed By: Evilkitten On: November 16, 2007 23:28 CST
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YAY thank you for the update =^_^= I can't wait for the next story you're the best =^_^=
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Title: scary
Reviewed By: Knincompoop On: October 13, 2007 17:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lol i thought they where gonna stay just friends i was so releived when u said there gonna nt stay broken up phew lol or i would of read all of tht for nothing i love happy endings lol which is anoying but 1 thing i think they go totaly all over the top because first there fine then they just break up for a year! and i think ryo would just tell him he wants 2 be with him but what ever its your story lol thz 4 the read x
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Title: happy
Reviewed By: babymaplebar@yahoo.com On: October 09, 2007 23:52 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so glad you are committed in following this story but man, Ryo still makes my teeth hurt. You did such a good character portrayal and one can really see it coming to this sort of situation that might never heal. Anyway, I've been engaged and I am looking forward to more. I do hope Dee gets to find out what role Lyn played in his life. I think Ryo needs something to open him up more...it seems so easy compared to the suffering he has caused. Perhaps you did too good of a job on that Ryo...viva la Dee!
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Reviewed By: Garita [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2007 16:18 CDT
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Thank you so much for updating! When I first read this story my reaction was somewhere along the lines of, 'No! How could he? I don't want to read this!' But now, you have me intrigued. I can't wait to see where this is going! You have a wonderful grasp on your character development!!
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Reviewed By: FoxCat [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2007 09:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm sooo happy that you're continuing this!!! ^_^ I've missed reading your work very much
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Reviewed By: Nitelyfe [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2007 12:58 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I've only recently started rereading this series again and I actually enjoy this revisit to your original characters much more than your first story. While there's still a ton of delightful angst, I find this one more reasonable and easier to relate to. Which doesn't mean I don't want to knock the characters heads together, but I like it. ;) I'm all for Dee's approach in trying to 'move on' by avoiding Ryo, but I hope he realizes soon how ridiculous that is if he's going to remain a significant part of Bicky's life! There's no way to avoid him forever.
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Reviewed By: Minska_Catral On: February 26, 2007 22:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am glad to see that this fic is still being continued. As in previous works I still enjoy your original characters and am glad that they are so well developed.I feel that you have a good grasp on the inherent natures of the characters and portray them in a believable manner. Keep up the good work, I look forward to seeing where this story will go.
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Reviewed By: lady_kail On: February 25, 2007 08:49 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! Another chapter! Everytime I see an update it just makes my day. The story is lovely and heartrending.
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Reviewed By: lady_kail On: December 25, 2006 09:07 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH WOW! So worth waiting for! I don't know how you do it, but every chapter wrings my heart; brings a knot in my throat and tears to my eyes!!! Look forward to the next update!
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Reviewed By: Jycaegima On: October 16, 2006 15:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is incredible. You have made me cry and you have taking a believable and heartwrenching view of the characters. I was leery about reading this at first because I am never usually fond of OCs, but you have nailed this. Ryo is being an ass and hurting himself, but he is doing so in a way that is absolutely realistic. Bikky is fabulous in this. There seems to be a tendency to write him as a stock character, rather than exploring how his life must be. You have fleshed out Dee so well in that his personality does not fall into caricature and so that he is not only the brash, rude, loudmouth that so many authors seem to portray him as. I very much enjoy the fact that Ryo has demons in this. Too many times he is written as totally good and without any faults, but his situation would definitely lend itslf to at least some soul searching. I really enjoy this story. It has ripped my guts out and hurts and god, I have never understood why people hurt themselves like this when the world is so hard anyway, but its true. Thank you very much for that, and I cannot wait to read the rest of this.
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Title: catti-dono (baka deshi of Tsuki-sama sensai)
Reviewed By: catti-dono [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2006 20:24 CDT
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My god...this is an awesome story...I feel so bad for Dee...Its like you want to make every one feel sorry for Dee...he knows his feelings...he knows his desires but cannot get them from Ryo...We all can relate to Ryo...Our feelings clog our emotions and we cannot tell the difference...is it right or wrong or wrong or right to have these feelings for the same sex...but man Dee is so left behind and beaten by these emotions....he knows who he is and what he is but fails in trying to convince the man that he loves that its okay to love him...talking about a total tear jerker...yes I did have to use Kleenex throughout this whole story...I love the OC that you created...they bring such warmth and love to the story...Lyn is totally awesome...you could write a whole different saga on just those characters, Lyn and Andrew....that would be totally awesome...the whole knife up the back side from the psycho boyfriend....man they are awesome OCs....I love how they seem to surround Dee, keep him happy and stable..They are so supportive of Dee...So protective....I have seen that you update very, very rarely...I just wish that you would update sooner on this story...43 reviews, not counting mine, is an awesome count...mainly for Media Miner where reviews are short or far between...You have seen other stories that are totally awesome and have like 1000 hits but only two reviews...your 43 have to be encouraging mainly when you only update like once every nine months...which is pathetic....you know that...you need to update more often...I believe that if you updated more often you would have double the reviews...please do not be insulted by these words....I love you stories, this one in particular...I only encourage you to update more because Hell I love the story...*smirks*...catti
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Reviewed By: moimoi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2006 22:13 CDT
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oh thank heavens, I thought Ryo was going to be an idiot forever. At least in this chapter he knows he's being an idiot. He's finally getting somewhere
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Reviewed By: lady_kail On: June 02, 2006 15:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! It was worth waiting for.
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Reviewed By: musicalphrase [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2006 17:48 CDT
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Oh, this totally just made my entire evening. I'm so happy to see this continuing. I was actually ranting about this fic to a friend of mine the other day. Needless to say, she slapped me to get me to stop. You know, in that friendly kind of way. I'm really really fond of Lyn and Andrew. I'm not usually a big fan of OCs, but these two just make the story very real. Dee's slight literacy problem just shattered me. I don't know why, but this small little detail just broke my heart into a thousand little pieces, and I just wanted to reach into the fic to give him a hug. I'm really fond of your Dee portrayal. It's very realistic. Overall, this chapter broke me even more than the last one. It's really a hard thing to witness, but I really thought that Ryo was... well, he's being a complete bastard, but I like the softer side of him, the deeply wounded side of him that is being shown here. We know he loves Dee. We know he has issues. We can't help but love him. Thanks again for the wonderful ride! Looking forward to the next chapter, but that being said, this one was more than enough goodness to tide me (Unfortunately I can't speak for everyone) over until the next update. Until next time!
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Reviewed By: chgi On: February 25, 2006 08:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Been reading the story now for the past couple of years. Love it but please update - I'm dying over here waiting for the next chapter!
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