| "Camp Koshin" Reviews/Comments [ 283 ] |
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Reviewed By: Elaine-sensei [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2006 18:27 CST
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"He reluctantly opened his eyes to see Sesshomaru, Rin, Miroku and Sango all staring down at him in varying amounts of shock and happiness. He looked down at himself, surveying his situation. If they looked that happy to see him he must be coated in $1000 bills or something. When he looked down though, he saw only an awakening Kagome and pieces of driftwood. That's when it came back to him." The $1000 bills thing just got me ^_^ MORE! *holds out empty food bowl*
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Reviewed By: kornychic [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2006 13:58 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Miroku's eyes snapped to hers, and she was startled and frightened to see a strange fire in his eyes that burned away any evidence of good humor. This was a good sentence because I love the whole burning away evidence of good humour part. Creatively spoken! Yes Inuyasha lives on, yet the boat sank...who is the culprit(s)? i wonder... lol keep writing and ill keep playing the games and reading the excellent chapters! CHEERS
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Title: Yo
Reviewed By: HigherBeing [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2006 19:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello, yes, I am a story Nazi... Well no, I just read all of your chapter so far and I wanted to say that you have a new reader! Yay for you! Right so, I just wanted to say that I thought(so far) that your story was really touching and funny and romantic and suspensefull and... lots of other great stuff all other stories should have! I want you to know that I really really like like.... alot like it!! I LOVE IT! (i think I already said that too many times) anybob: PLZ UPDATE! It's really great and I'll keep on reading. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Vagabond [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2006 09:17 CST
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"Sesshomaru seemed unable to take his eyes from whatever he was looking at. Then, much to everyone's disbelief, he did the strangest thing. He smiled. Sango shuffled gingerly over to where he stood. Her hand immediately went up to cover her mouth as she gasped. Tears formed in her eyes and spilled forth as she made strangled noises behind her hand. The hand that wasn't covering her mouth motioned Miroku and Sango over. Miroku got there first, his face looked first confused, then broke into the good natured smile she had become accustom to. Rin was the last to see." This part was extremely well described. It was almost as if you were right there with them, seeing anad feeling absolutely everything they felt and saw. The tears began to well up in my own eyes. Keep up the great writing! +Vagabond+ (Yes I'm back!)
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Reviewed By: White Wolf of the Moon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2006 12:18 CST
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About 20 minuted later the entire group returned. Inuyasha was being reluctantly supported between Miroku and Sesshomaru. It was only when Kagome threatened to steal all his Ramen that he finally agreed to being helped, though not without constant protest. By the time they got back to the beach, Sesshomaru were so annoyed by his incessant complaint that they simply dropped him in the middle of camp, headless of breaks or bruises. To explain it all, there can be no ramen on a desrted island. C'est imposible. or imposible. its funny still. I liked this chapter and don't worry if it takes a while all good stories do. and yours is good. better than good awesome, spectaculare, nobel peace prize worthy. don't worry im done now
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Reviewed By: sabriel7 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2006 21:36 CST
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I will kill the error that makes me post to see hidden reviews!
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Reviewed By: Elaine-sensei [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2006 18:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
"Kagome touched his cheek gently, it felt cold and clammy..." '-' .............. That's just.......... That really snuck up on me ^^; The fact that something as important as Inuyasha nearly dying happens in only two chapters (SHORT chapters might I add *glare*). Man. I was reading and glaring at the screen at the same time ^^ Ehehehe.... Please write more often! This story is really addicting!! I rated grammar 7 because you forgot a few periods *is a perfectionist* Sorry!
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Title: don't stop
Reviewed By: angle54 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2006 19:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my god please don't stop i love your story and i wanted to know if you would read mine it's called some one to trust and it's my first but i need a little help and plese update
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Reviewed By: kornychic [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2006 23:44 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
merry xmas lol and to my defense, you updated so quickly that i didnt even get a chance to play last chapter's game! lol (updating quickly is fantastic, dont get me wrong) but i would have played it grr. i have been having a busy holiday ;) Kagome touched his cheek gently, it felt cold and clammy, no doubt due to the cold depths of the ocean. so there, i am a fantastic genius. happy new year as well! CHEERS
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Title: just luv it!
Reviewed By: yasha_21_12 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2006 18:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
pls update very soon
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Title: great story pls udate
Reviewed By: yasha_21_12 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2006 00:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i luv ur story pls udate soon
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Reviewed By: White Wolf of the Moon [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2005 08:07 CST
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OMG if InuYasha is dead alot of people are going to kill you, or worse stop reading dun dun dun. Oh well im not okay with that but still good story from happy to sad. Hopefuly he isn't dead. oh yeah rooms whoshed by her indistingishable or indistingished blurs bad memory sorry good srory and glab that you finnaly updated. update whenever you can because I know it takes a while for good ideas to come to you somewhat because if you write 7 chapters in two weeks your brain will die like mine lol
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Reviewed By: sabriel7 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2005 21:14 CST
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Hidden reviews suck! AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!
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Title: Oops...
Reviewed By: Kitsu_Kurasei [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2005 13:23 CST
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Thought that said 2004. Is an update coming soon? I hope so. Glad you're back! See ya!-Kitsu
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Title: I know, I know...
Reviewed By: Kitsu_Kurasei [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2005 13:21 CST
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I haven't been on in like ever. From you're last update I'd say this is a year later. For a while I was off fanfiction and when I came back I was into Final Fantasy fanfiction but I'm back again and catching up. This always was one of my fav camp fics (I miss 'em, they aren't all that common where I was (FF sections of FF.net) and I'm glad I atleast got a new chapter while I was gone. Hope you come back to this sometime. The sentence for riveted was "Kagome's eyes stayed riveted to the screen waiting for something."-Kitsu
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