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| "Camp Koshin" Reviews/Comments [ 283 ] | | Pages (19): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 › » ] | Reviewed By: a crazed fan On: September 19, 2005 17:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes! THANK YOU SO MUCH! I've been keeping an eye on this story for a long time! You have made my day by writing another chapter! I loved it, and rest assured I will be waiting for the next installment. ^_^ As for "slack jaw".... "Kagome and Rin just sat there, slack jaw, dumbstruck, twitching"
| Title: Kewl
Reviewed By: kaira2828 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2005 23:01 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was so kewl I want you to so write another chapter pleezzzzzzzzzzzz
| Title: WEEE!!!!
Reviewed By: i-want-to-hug-you515 (not logged in) On: September 15, 2005 17:36 CDT
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Hi!!! I liked that one!! You know...especially with the echoes....echoes....hehe....ummmm.....fro looosing!!.@_@ haha "Kagome and Rin just sat there, slack jaw, dumbstruck, twitching." HAHA!! I'M GONNA WIN THIS GAME!!! =0_o= hehe....>.>...*ahem* yeah...BYE!!!
| Title: yeah
Reviewed By: Jalexi2004 On: September 15, 2005 13:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow i love, but could you please hurry up and write more. im kinda impatient
| Title: ?
Reviewed By: Jalexi2004 On: September 15, 2005 13:08 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow i really like this story. ilke this story so much it makes me happy. so happy it could me cry. tear, tear
| Reviewed By: angie-chan!! On: September 14, 2005 18:49 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg omg omg omg om gom!!...oops, anywaysssss!! ahhhh!!! story!! weeee!!! yay! i'm so happy you started your story again!! unlike some ppl....*glares* naw, just kiddin, but short chapter much? its just..soo...not like you!! i...i gotta think about this for a second...just kiddin!! at one point in the story though, you wrote "fro" instead of "from"...and of course, i think "what? afro??" but yeah, karen has a myspace now!! yay!! its really boring...but yeah! thought i should tell you, oh! and i have your rurouni kenshin book with me,, but i forgot to give it to you today!! oh, darn...hheehe...oh yeah!! here's the ...magic word/sentence!! 'Kagome and Rin just sat there, slack jaw, dumbstruck, twitching.' gimme a cookie!! sabriel7: i never said anything about cookies!! me: *mouth full of cookies* fwat? great story ...sabriel7-chan!! but i'm lost in/or around the plot...i need to recap on the chapters...anywaysss...yup!! and now dirty images of moku as a slave fill my head... but i know kae-i mean...i-want-to-hug-you, will be happy when she reads the beginning of this chapter!!...and the middle...and the whole thing(hehe...thing)!! but especially the beginning!! cheese!!
| Reviewed By: jade_pendant(n.s.i.) On: September 14, 2005 01:27 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
welcome back to the land of cyber/inuyasha living nice to see you didnt quit on us faithful ones. keep up the good work k chika. arigato
| Reviewed By: sabriel7 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2005 20:03 CDT
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hidden reviews again
| Title: yay!
Reviewed By: kornychic* On: September 13, 2005 19:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sweet deal im very happy that you have updated! the chapter was great lol and by the way, Kagome and Rin just sat there, slack jaw, dumbstruck, twitching.LOL! don't worry about taking long in-between chapters, I do too. Don't I know about stupid computers, homework, exams, jobs, etc. Barely leaves time to eat, let alone write! I understand! Just can't wait for the next chap tho... no rush lol *thumbs up* this story is totally original and the humour involved is great. keep it up CHEERS
| Reviewed By: tell you later On: July 12, 2005 02:13 CDT
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on chapter 15 I wanred to get an axe jump through the screen and beat the crap out of kikyo
| Title: fdhd
Reviewed By: sabriel7 (2 laz to log on) On: July 10, 2005 22:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
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| Reviewed By: goto (remember? angie!!) On: July 08, 2005 19:51 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow kimmy...that chapter sucked...what's A/N?! ...j/k...^-^
| Title: blah
Reviewed By: sabriel7 (2 laz to log on) On: July 07, 2005 19:58 CDT
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*slips in and out unseen* hehe
| Title: Yes!!!
Reviewed By: Star Fire Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2005 00:19 CDT
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Yes!!!! You finally get to update. I can't believe it. I am so happy. And I hope you will be happy to hear that after seven years I have decided myself to write a fic and post it. So now I also have a fic that I hope you will read and enjoy. I am just so happy that you are going to be able to update. *does happy dance of her own* YAY YAY YAY YAY YAY YAY
| Reviewed By: xxxAmy leeXXX On: June 29, 2005 21:09 CDT
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Inuyasha's POV Ramen, Ramen, Ramen, Ramen, Ramen, Ramen, Ramen, Ramen, Ramen, Ramen, Ramen, Ramen, Ramen, Ramen, Ramen, Ramen, Ramen, Ramen, Ramen, Ramen, Ramen, Ramen, Ramen, Ramen, Ramen, Ramen, Ramen, Ramen, Ramen, Ramen… ~Wow, how did i know that was gonna go through his mind, lol. cracked up at this part, the story is great.
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