| "Camp Koshin" Reviews/Comments [ 283 ] |
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Reviewed By: Dreamfox WindWolf(too lazy) On: September 04, 2004 15:59 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was in a trance, the only way to explain it.Update!!!
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Reviewed By: CiralFox(2lazy) On: August 31, 2004 23:13 CDT
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anyways, somehow I got cut off by the "character" crap, pardon my french and the pink shirt that she wore the always sweet never sour I was like O.O!! I have that shirt! but it's gren and black, not pink and white. I love your story and I hope u can read mine! It's called Punks Just Wanna Have Fun. Keep Writing!!
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Reviewed By: CiralFox(2lazy2sign in) On: August 31, 2004 23:09 CDT
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heya! I just finished reading ur story and I LOVE it!! I read the part when Rin was wearing a pink shirt with white writing that says
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Reviewed By: Orb (n.o.) On: August 31, 2004 21:31 CDT
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nooo!!! *cries* no thats not fair. that lazer tag was really funny! I love this stoy, its so happy ^.^. I hope you can write more in preferrably LESS than 2 MONTHS!????? please please please *anime puppydog eyes* lol keep up the grrrrreat work.
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Title: Yeah!
Reviewed By: kasumi the vampire queen [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2004 19:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you for the wonderful reading material. Here are the sentences that you used trance in- Kagome snapped out of her trance and looked at Inuyasha in an innocently confused way. I was in a trance, the only way to explain it. Thanks aghain and have a nice day ^_^
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Reviewed By: angie!!! On: August 30, 2004 21:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know what kimmy? I thought "awww, kimmy is such a good writer! i mean look at this fluffy part! If i didn't know any better, I would have thought that you and inuyasha have met before-" wait, is there something you're hiding from me? anyways, that fluffy part was sooo good!!! except when you wrote constipated...pfft...*hardy har har* anyhoodles, i hate you for writng this cliffy!!!!!!!!!!! but, that chapter was good ebough to ease my hunger. hey! I can write good 2! no, wait, I still suck...anyways, just b/c school started, it doesn't mean you can't update!! every day in art class i'll keep reminding you!! so, yea...constipated...heehee!! remember? *poke* tee-hee! lol! oh, um, other reviewers, don't mind me...speaking of reviewing, I GOT THE SENTENCE!! actually, there was two, you bastard! ~hehe, you know that episode of inuyasha, when the gang goes after the little bear cub that got all big 'n' stuff? yea, remember those guys that were trying to kidnapp kagome and sango, I love when inuyasha says sumthing and they just say "you...arrogant bastard!" I love that! what was i talking about? oh, yeah, wow, i can only write 353 letters now, okay, so the two sentences are "Kagome snapped out of her trance and looked at inuyasha in an innocently confused way." and "I was in a trance, the only way to explain it." so..WRITE MY NAME! YOU...ARROGANT BASTARD!! anyways...crap...i forgot what I was gonna write...78 characters left...57, 55, 49, 45, 42414242!!I guess I'll-oh!-no more le |
Reviewed By: lunar_girl (not logged in XP) On: August 30, 2004 12:26 CDT
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Kagome snapped out of her trance and looked at Inuyasha in an innocently confused way. and I was in a trance, the only way to explain it. nice job on the fan fic. hope u update soon... a lot sooner then before. XP
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Reviewed By: Star Fire Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2004 05:16 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh That was so mean (*pout*)oh well as long as you update soon I'm good. On to the game. Ok you have more than one trance in here so here they are . (I don't know which one you want.) "Kagome snapped out of her trance and looked at Inuyasha in an innocently confused way."I was in a trance, the only way to explain it."
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Reviewed By: Kitsu Kurasei On: August 26, 2004 22:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"One illustrious fox interrupted the moment before anyone noticed each other's interest." is the sentence. POVs just add that extra spark of humor, don't they? Make more occasional POVs ok? Love the fic, keep em' comin'!
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Reviewed By: sabriel7 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2004 08:31 CDT
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NVM this.
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Reviewed By: LoSt_gUrL8o8 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2004 04:38 CDT
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great fanfic..please update...we are all dying for more chapters so please update...
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Title: GOOD!
Reviewed By: SES_Inu On: August 09, 2004 17:51 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
REALLLLLLLLLLLY GOOOD REVIEWWWWWWWWWWW NOW and i like that game you play...u should continue it^^ ja ne Jaz
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Reviewed By: Alatril [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2004 14:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ur story is the best ever!!! Luv it!(on hands and nees begging)PLZ!!!PLZ!!!KEEP WRITING CHAPTERS!!!I've already told all my friends and their just waiting for another chapter!PLZ!
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Reviewed By: dmak [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2004 14:39 CDT
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Hi! I really like this story, but this chapter, where you did the first person POV thing wasn't really fitting with the way you normally write. My opinion is that you should just write the way you always have, because you're a genius at that already!! Oh, and here's my entry for the game: "One illustrious fox interrupted the moment before anyone noticed each other's interest" There! Keep on writing!
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Reviewed By: sabriel7 (2 laz to log on) On: July 21, 2004 18:59 CDT
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*sigh*
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