| "Two InuYashas" Reviews/Comments [ 39 ] |
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Title: YAY!
Reviewed By: Felicity_Angel46 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2004 03:05 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As the title says "YAY!" I enjoyed reading the new chapters. They are very exciting! I am wondering though... why doesn't Kagome reconize them and their names... like the Sango and Shippo and Koga and such... Oh well....
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Title: sit doesn't work n e more?!?!?!?!
Reviewed By: loserchild On: December 08, 2004 17:38 EST
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*blink blink* kagome said sit... but nothing happened... she was like "inuyasha jsut sit down" and inuyasha sat down at his tree... what happened to the BAAAAAAAM!!! >.> good story btw... but doesn't inuyasha know taht that person is himself? =P
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Reviewed By: INU-KAGLOVER [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2004 16:13 EST
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Oh, good, the page got fixed and I got another chapter to go with it!! Thanks so muck, you're sotry is great as usual. Can't wait to find out what happens in the next installment!
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Reviewed By: INU-KAGLOVER [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2004 21:57 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm totally loving this story, but for some reason, the typing got all mixed up with symbols and stuff, but I pressed on reading through it all!! It's really good and I hope you update quickly!!
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Reviewed By: RayGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2004 16:57 EDT
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I love this stroy...oh and what was the whole war deal in rozefire's reviews for the story The Sinner? Anyway I love this story so much! You are one of my fave authors
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Reviewed By: MIztikal_Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2004 03:27 EDT
Comment/Review:
oooo good good good . Please keep up the great work and update asap. I can't wait to find out what happens next. Krystal.
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Reviewed By: ShadoE On: July 10, 2004 09:17 EDT
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The storey is interesting but i can't but help to feel that you maybe painting yourself into a corner with two inuyasha's around. One of them is going to get the short straw (so to speak). It will be interesting to see what happens i guess we'll have to wait and see.
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Reviewed By: MIztikal_Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2004 02:27 EDT
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ooo good chapter! Please keep up the good work and update asap. I can't wait to find out what happens next!!!! Krystal.
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2004 00:33 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this plot, I've only read one other story like it. You should really proof-read. The spelling mistakes I found seemd to be typeo's and you didn't look back over the cahpters to fix them. Kagome is ooc, I think thats mainly because you're putting your personality into her. Is this some lame attempt to get yourself with Inuyasha in some why? Bad girl! Oops that was a dog joke *snickers* But really try to keep her in character, makes the story more believable. The many author notes are very cute but they interrupt the story too much. You're the author, you're not suppose to mess up the flow of reading! *rolls up newspaper* I'll punish you if you do it again! I will now continue reading your story.
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Title: Get off your lazy ass
Reviewed By: We_Flame_You_Read [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2004 09:44 EDT
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Your a dumbass to do what your friend tells you. I don't believe that you would actually listen to her when it comes to your story. You should really update. I mean it's only polite. What are you gonna do? Keep us waiting until we all die? Hurry up and update if you still want your damn reviews and fans.
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Reviewed By: plipol On: May 03, 2004 12:09 EDT
Comment/Review:
really good! please update soon!
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Reviewed By: lolololoolol On: April 28, 2004 16:57 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
rly good. update soon
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Reviewed By: MIztikal_Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2004 03:09 EDT
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ooo that was okay i guess, but keep up the good work and update quickly for me please? Krystal.
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Reviewed By: MIztikal_Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2004 03:39 EDT
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LOL that was sooo funny! i can't wait till you udpate. keep up the good work. Krystal.
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Reviewed By: onti On: April 09, 2004 15:41 EDT
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really good. plz update soon
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