| "Two InuYashas" Reviews/Comments [ 39 ] |
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Title: Get off your lazy ass
Reviewed By: We_Flame_You_Read [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2004 09:44 EDT
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Your a dumbass to do what your friend tells you. I don't believe that you would actually listen to her when it comes to your story. You should really update. I mean it's only polite. What are you gonna do? Keep us waiting until we all die? Hurry up and update if you still want your damn reviews and fans.
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Reviewed By: plipol On: May 03, 2004 12:09 EDT
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really good! please update soon!
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Reviewed By: lolololoolol On: April 28, 2004 16:57 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
rly good. update soon
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Reviewed By: MIztikal_Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2004 03:09 EDT
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ooo that was okay i guess, but keep up the good work and update quickly for me please? Krystal.
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Reviewed By: MIztikal_Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2004 03:39 EDT
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LOL that was sooo funny! i can't wait till you udpate. keep up the good work. Krystal.
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Reviewed By: onti On: April 09, 2004 15:41 EDT
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really good. plz update soon
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Reviewed By: nalama On: April 01, 2004 20:13 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
this a really good fanfic. please update soon
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Title: inuyasha1991
Reviewed By: Inuyasha1991 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2004 19:00 EST
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I like the name inuyasha y cant you use it insted of kyo well i hope you get your other storys updated soon welll byebye Inuyahsa1991 *aka Ray*
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Reviewed By: BabayBunny aka BB On: March 30, 2004 11:47 EST
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LOL i so glad your FINALLY updating again...*sighs and take as moment to look back at life*... Why it was just last year that you ranked on me for my love for inu!!! *smiles* how times change. MissNikki: *latches on to leg* *bite* BB: *SHAKES IT OFF AND BITES BACK* Anyways i want to tell you to have inu move to Bolivia then they would use his middle name as his last name. HAHA!! See!? Im smart!
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Reviewed By: Inuyasha1991 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2004 16:53 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE it please keep it going i think its the best ever and i hope you up date soon well i gotta go byebye Inuyasha1991 *aka Ray*
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Reviewed By: Mareana On: March 27, 2004 20:30 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
VERY VERY VERY GOOD!!!!!!!!kEEP WRITING MORE CAN'T WAIT TO SEE THE END!
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Reviewed By: Dreamfox WindWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2004 14:35 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AS:Coolies! WW:¬.¬
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Reviewed By: flame564 On: March 04, 2004 20:45 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
y did u have 2 put that desicsting part in there it burnt my eyes 2 read it
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Title: HOW COULD YOU
Reviewed By: BabayBunny [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2003 15:52 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dana:WHY WHY WHY WHY!!??!!??! TWO INUYASHA'S WAS THE BEST TITLE EVER!!!! *sniff sniff* Oh...and thanks for breakfast...if forgot to say it! But you know that this is my favorite story!!! I love it!!! I want the stuff to happen!!! SOOOO GGGGGOOOOOOOOOOOODDDDDD!!!!*DROOLS* BabayBunny: *hands dana a napkin* clean yourself up....the keyboard is getting wet! You could electrocuted yourself! Again!!! Dana: *looks away* That was only once!!! BB: No it wasn't....*hold up a finger and begins counting* there was the light bulb....Then the toaster....then that time with the electric cord....And then again with the toaster....My favorite time was when- Dana: OK I get the point! Geez....can't you ever forget?? BB: Nope! I was blessed with your wonderful memory. Dana: *growls* Anyhoo....I want you to update this story like NOW!!! Like this minute! Either that or......hmmmm...... Akia: *walks in w/ Tira(cat)* What are you doing? BB: Dana's reviewing Miss Nikki's story. Akia: *looks happy* TWO INUYASHA'S!!! BB: -_-' No. A future in the Past. Akia: WHAT!?! What about Two InuYasha's?! Dana: *fuming* she changed the title. Akia: 0o0! *growls* |-|0\/\/ (0|_|[|) $|-|3!!! Dana: I know....*notices Tira* BB: Can someone translate? Dana: *runs over and snatches cat* Tira: MEOWWW!!! Dana: *giggles* See this cat Miss Nikki! Tee hee he he he....*smiles* See your coat! *smiles wider* it's a few weeks till the vet appointment. And you know she really does love your coat! BWAHAHAHAHAHA!!! I'll no longer protect you from Tira's attentions!!! *maniacal laughter* BB+Akia: -_-' Scratch: *walks over and picks up coat*Oooo. Dana what's your coat doing here! Dana: That's Not My Coat! Its MissNikki's!!! Scratch: What a pretty color....red....i wish i had a can of Coke....that would be good......i wonder what i would do if Coke was outlawed! That would be fun! We would have to sneakily drink it! Like Prohibition....What a horrible time....Did you remember that dream- Dana: Someone take her! *holding cat and coat* Akira: Could you keep it down! I was watching anime! ooo...look money *picks up hundred dollars* Cool! Dana+Akia+BB:0.0 Akia: How come i didn't see that? BB: I was here longer the she was! Scratch: THEN WE COULD ALL GO TO JUPITER!!! Dana+BB+Akia+Akira: *Look over at Scratch* Akira: I like her better drunk. Dana: *nods* BB: *Looks at computer* Oh yea....Oops. I really like this story i wish you would update! *to Akia* who wrote this? Akia: Miss Nikki Dumbass! BB: Oh! Akira: FanFiction?! *walks over and reads story* Ooo not bad- Scratch: THE ANTS!!! SAVE ME!!!- I think i saw this one before? Dana: Remember it was in the Shakespeare book? Akira: Oh yea. I put it there. Man i forgot all about it. Good thing you guys found it! Ooo look a twenty *goes down and picks up money* AND an InuYasha plushy! Akia: *vein popping* YOU PUT IT THERE!!! DO YOU KNOW HOW LONG WE WERE LOOKING 4 IT!*growls* *makes flying leap for Akira* Akira: Ooo! New Manga!*walks over to get it* Akia: *Hits wall* |)4/\/\/\/ |_|!!!! Dana: Sigh.... BB: *giggles* i never seen Akia get so mad. Dana: She's just jealous of Akira's wonderful luck. Scratch: What is wrong with you people? I was out there running for my life and NO one did anything! Dana: Sorry, didn't hear you!*to BB* Did you hear her? BB: *shakes head* Sorry Scratch! Akia: I thought you had gone to make us sandwiches? Akira: No one hear her? I did....Cool! Thanks Scratch!*takes Hot Fries* I love these! Scratch: Wha? But those- Akira: Remember i sent you to the store to get me some? I gave you money? Scratch: I thought- you didn't- Akira: So were is my change? Scratch: *is confused* You never- Akira: Sure i did! Scratch: *fishes out money* All i got is a ten...*holds out money* Akira: Well i guess you own me five then. Thanks anyways. *walks away* Scratch: *blink blink* *walks away shaking head* Akia: *growling* *brakes baseball bat* BB: How does she do that? Dana: Don't know....But keeping Scratch quite! Now that is a skill i WANT! BB: I didn't see her give Scratch money. Akia: *growling* that's cuz she didn't!!! BB: Oh. Dana: Anyways....I really want this story to be updated!! BB: I like it that Kouga and Inu are friends! I love Kouga and Inu! I hate to see them fight. Don't you think they would be great friends if it wasn't for the whole Kagome thing! Akia: Kagome is such a bitch! That slut always gets whatever she wants!!! How could she just walk in and take something that NO ONE saw!!! I mean there was Inu....and COUNTLESS girls were in the village. But NO Kagome comes in and then just FINDS Inu!!! That slut! Can't leave ANYTHING for anyone! For gods sakes! How much money was that! And the chips! No one likes those more then ME!!! ME!!! Not Akira! Akia!!! God damned Slut can't even find her own name! Trying to steal that from me TOO! How could she!!! *stabs knife threw wall* But I'll get her just watch! she'll pay...Oh yea...she will! BB: I think she gotten off topic.... Dana: And i don't think she's talking about Kagome. BB: But you gotta admit she is lucky. Dana: Akira or Kagome? BB: Kagome...and Akira too. But think about it not only does she had InuYasha, she got Kouga TOO! But now she just got ANOTHER InuYasha!!! Dana: I guess that is kinda un fair *takes out note book* *under breath* Wish one....Posses Kagome. BB: Well i guess what we are trying to say is that we love your story. and i gave you a present.... Dana: *Smacks BB's head* Mook! I gave her a present! BB: Fine. We both gave you a present! The first EVER skit review with Akira as a character. Next time we will put ED if you want! Akia: Who would want ED in a skit?! She never even talks! BB: I don't thinks she can talk. Dana: ED can TO talk! BB: But- Dana: Never mind. Also I am pretty sure this is my longest EVER review! Which says something cause you know how long they are.... It is another way of saying Thanks for putting up my favorite story! Oh and thanks for keeping me company. And being all in all a really kick 'ultimate' ass friend. Akia: BWAHAHAHAHA!!! 'Ultimate'! BB:......Oh yea! LOL AND she spelled 'really' the correct way! Akia: Did you thank her for breakfast? Dana: *smiles* Yeah...Update! BB: HEY! I just realized...Dana didn't once 'growl menacingly'!!! Dana: *growls menacingly* Akia: Did you tell Miss Nikki thanks for the correct spelling of 'menacingly'? Dana: *growls menacingly* When the hell did you become so maternal? BB: And when did she get so cheerful? Akia: *Giggles* Dana+BB: 0.0! BB: *under breath* She giggled... Akia: *laughs* Since this *hold up whip and 100 dollars* HAHAHAHAHA!!! Akira: *from room* WHERE MY WHIP!!! AND WHERE IS MY 100?! OOOOOooo....a doze roses? From the weird T. Mobile anime like guy? Akia:NOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! BB: Poor Akia...She cant win.. Dana: LOL. Update!!! AND it IS the longest Review!!!
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Reviewed By: Laura-chan (too lazy to login) On: December 10, 2003 15:29 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Really interesting: I like it very much for now ^^ please write more ^_~
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