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Title: Hiiiiii!!!!
Reviewed By: TAB [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2004 22:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heyyyy!!!! I know, I know. I should have reviewed sooner. #_# I was getting pretty bad at reviewing. But no more!! I have this fic indented in my memory! ^_____^ Anyway, you're doing a great job with it(Says the reviews, as well as teh story ^^ ). The insaneness in the last chapter was pretty funny. It made me laugh, when everyone else was laughing. lol It was funny with the girls and boys being seperated. . . Anyway, I look foward to the next chapter! ^.~ Keep it coming!
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Reviewed By: ryushi/ryushi411 On: September 30, 2004 09:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice fic, if i may suggest a few things 1) some games in the dark to pass the time. 2) maybe a little more interaction between characters 3) if u donot have 5 more characters to add can i be one? if u already have everyone it;s okay. Like i said these are just suggestions it is your choice if u want to follow it through. here is my profile if u already have enough people ignore it. (name) ryushi (age) 19 (gender) male (hight) same height as yusuke (hair color) autumn brown (eye color) teal blue (clothng) loose white tee shirt under a blue denim jacket and a pair of blue jeans. (personality) gentleman like infront of ladies snd easy going. but if angered is headstrong and can be reckless
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Reviewed By: kitkat2919 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2004 19:55 CDT
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^^ SOOOOOOOO HAPPY!!!!! **does the Happy Dance** I LOVE RANDOM, POINTLESS LAUGHTER!!!!! yeah, actually, I will think of things sometimes that are totally unrelated to the conversation or w/e, and then I'm laughing histerically! ^^ You finally updated!!! YAY!!!! Just an idea: You should have a candy bar where everyone who wants to can get sugar high! =3 I want some fluff!!! WEEE-HEEEE!!! **is sugar high... can ya tell?**
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Title: OOOO! Me pick me!!
Reviewed By: Hanami_the_Tsunami [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2004 13:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HAHAHAHAHA!! I was laughing so had i started to choke on my chocolate pudding! could i PLEASE be in this? *puppy dog eyes* pwetty pwease wif a cherry on top? if you do, then i am Tsuna! I have dark brown shoulder length hair, green eyes and glasses. i like sugar!! i am short too...eh.. i ALWAYS carry around my big frying pan of DOOM!! i wear a red t-shirt that says " Rule number 1: don't touch, talk or in any manner interact with me" and a pair of dark blue jeans. yeah, i can be a badass one minute, the next a big teddie bear. when i think of my self, i think mood swings. ne ways i LOVED your story!
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Reviewed By: Drof Tceferp [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2004 09:41 CDT
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Hey, could you put me in? Um, me being my human side...BHS...Um, check my bio, kay? AND UPDATE!!
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Title: spelling
Reviewed By: Kouen On: July 08, 2004 16:03 CDT
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Umm... I am sure you accidentally misspelled my name, but just in case, it's Kouen, not Kounen. ^^ THANKS FOR PUTTING ME IN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Love the story, so UPDATE SOOON!!!
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Title: PRETTY PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: kitkat2919 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2004 19:19 CDT
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PLEASE let more people be in your fanfic... specifically, let ME be in your fanfic! Name: Kouen. Age:15. Looks: shoulder-length copper hair, amber eyes, same markings on face as Sesshoumaru. Likes: Sesshoumaru. Gender: Girl. Duh. Personality: Gets angry VERY easily when tired, also gets sugar high a lot, and laughs too much. Appearance: Since you don't already have Sesshoumaru in the fanfic.... Howabout you having me and him walking in together! ^_______^ I know four people already asked.... but I REALLY want to be in it... And its not my fault I happened to read your fanfic fairly after you posted that note... SO PLEASE LET ME BE IN IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Kurama's luver On: June 19, 2004 14:08 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey read ur story it totally roxs! um can i join in on it too. My name is maruma (am secretly in love with kurama) am a half fox demon 15 year old girl. I wear a black top and a red miniskirt. my eyes are light jade green. my hair color is black with red streaks. am as tall as kurama too. my wish to be married to kurama and maybe have a kid with him. *giggles*
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Reviewed By: dark_fire_demon19 (i have not been logged in for awhile now) On: June 10, 2004 15:13 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hi, i was wondering if i could also b in ur fanfic name: Tanishi age: 17 height: 5ft 3in (im so specific lol) clothes: baggy black pants, red tight shirt, black flip flops, black lipstick and eyeliner/eye shadow looks: blonde hair, red and black streaks, red eyes, pointed ears, earrings all the way up the ears, and skinny guy i like: Sano race: demon (fire and darkness) i really like ur fanfic, it rox!!! UPDATE SOON PLZ!!!!!!
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Title: oops!
Reviewed By: SliverInusasha [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2004 19:04 CDT
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sorry i forgot i wear a dark purple tank top shows a bit of my belly. a black skirt. my eyeles are light purple
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Title: Can i be in the story too
Reviewed By: SliverInusasha [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2004 19:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Can i be in the story too. My name's Mira, i have sliver hair with random black streaks.i have tiger like ears. am a half tiger demon girl. am 16. am as tall as miroku (my secret am in love with miroku).
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Reviewed By: Deathlady [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2004 21:28 CST
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0_0 yor scaring me drof.... Any way UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOOOON!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Drof Tceferp [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2004 17:38 CST
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Hm...Hiii!!! EAT THE BANANA OR I SHALL DEVOUR YOUR LIVER!!! Sorry, that's my random-thing of the day...UPDATE IT SOON DUDE!!!!!!! And, here's a thought: If you want info on people, check their bios! I mean, NO ONE checks bios anymore!! I told someone who wanted me in their fic: 'Check my bio for my info', and they said 'So, tell me...' and listed everything I'd just told them was in my bio!!!! This is for everyone else out there too: CHECK PEOPLE'S BIOS!!! IT'S SIMPLE!! DON'T BE LAZY, USING A MOUSE TO CLICK ON SOMEONE'S NAME ONCE, MAYBE TWICE, DOES NOT TAKE THAT MUCH EXERTION!! I'm not meaning to rant, but it annoys me to no end when someone asks my info and I tell them to check my bio, and then they ask my info again!!!! I'm sure it annoys lots of other people too!!!! Well, I just needed to say that...Sooo, UPDATE SOON DUDE!! And everyone, keep that in mind!!
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Title: Funny!
Reviewed By: HotsummerYami [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2004 21:06 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is soooo hilarious! I like it when the girls and boys were speaking to each other on the other sides. It was funny with the Soda part where the pizza man wanted to give Botan Taco! ^____^ Yusuke is acting like a jerk in the story. Miroku? Well the same old perverted monk. But cute. It was really weird when Hiei had to kiss Yukina in the lips. It was soo weird! ^_^ Update please! I want to see what happens next!
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Title: chapter 1
Reviewed By: inuchoyu [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2004 18:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is so funny. That is so yusuke. Hiei kind of scared me there. I love your fic so far. -Inuchoyu p.s please try to read mine. They are; Goodbye my love(Chobits), A Diary for two(Inuyasha), The three show battle(inuyasha, sailor moon and yuyu hakusho). Thankz ^_^
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Title: chapter 1
Reviewed By: inuchoyu [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2004 18:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is so funny. That is so yusuke. Hiei kind of scared there. I love your fic so far. -Inuchoyu p.s please try to read mine. They are; Goodbye my love(Chobits), A Diary for two(Inuyasha), The three show battle(inuyasha, sailor moon and yuyu hakusho). Thankz ^_^
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Reviewed By: queenserena12345 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2004 17:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's Arigatuo.
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Reviewed By: RyousGirl567 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2004 15:03 CST
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Could I be in it too? My name is Rikoh, i'm female, age 15 (I wish, really 13 but want to be 15), I have shoulder-length brown hair, about the same height as Ryou (my bishie!), and normally just wears a knee-length skirt and regular shirt. Pretty please put me in, it's hysterical so far! ^_^ Oh, and could you possibly read my fics?
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Reviewed By: Dark Flame Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2004 12:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: hehehehehehe
Reviewed By: MasterSlyGOC [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2004 21:07 CST
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i know more .hack//dusk characters here they are Shugo,Rena,Balmung,Hotaru,Ouka,Mireille,Aura,Komiyan 3,Reki,Kamui,Magi,Zefie.Thats all of them from the comic that i know of! the 3rd one is in japan so i cant get it. *sobs*
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Title: holy crapolie!!!
Reviewed By: dark_fire_demon19 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2004 12:13 CST
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THAT WAS AWESOME!!!!!! I MUST SEE WAT HAPPENDS OVER THE NIGHT...UPDATE!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Yuki1000(not signed in) On: March 04, 2004 19:30 CST
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Update update update update update I like please read my fics Why Me? Sweet Dreams Revenge And Love What if? Can I be in your fic and if u want to be in mine just email me Nickykit10@aol.com
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: MasterSly(GOC) On: February 14, 2004 22:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
u put .hack//sign charaters instead of .hack//legend of the twilight charaters, but i'll tell u them anyway! Shugo,Rena,Balmung,Hotaru,Ouka,Mireille,Aura,Komiyan 3,Reki.Thats all of them from the comic that i know of!
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Reviewed By: Kurama-Is-MINE [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2004 08:32 CST
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LMAO oh god that was creepy...I would've taken the soda though, I'm thirsty...
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Reviewed By: Drof Tceferp [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2004 22:35 CST
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^___^ Goodie....I have more, but they have something to do with Karasu and they're sadistic...And please, call me Ford. Or, Lord or Master if you prefer. Whichever floats your boat, or whichever I want! BWAHAHAHAHAHA!! As a demon lord, I am permitted to laugh evilly without hacking and coughing. UPDATE SOON DUDE!! Here's something for you all to ponder: The initials for 'the Pirate From Hell' could also mean 'Toilet Paper From Hell'. Also-fluffy orange lemon-limeade! You all know what fluff, lemon, and lime are, right? ORange is between lemon and lime, it's not mine. However, fluffy orange lemon-limeade IS mine, if you write up one give me credit for the name or so help me I will hunt you down and throw banannas at you! That reminds me, I was called 'Bob' for my entire second grade year by my art teacher...My name doesn't even have a 'b' or an 'o' in it...Sad, huh? UPDATE SOON!! And ponder those things!
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Title: Cute!!!
Reviewed By: TAB [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2004 22:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kinda feel sorry for Botan. ^____^ But it's really good! I really like this! Hope you can upload the next chapter soon! ^___^
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Title: >_
Reviewed By: TAB [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2004 15:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was only able to read the first chapter, but it's good so far. I'll read the next chapter tomorrow! 'Till then!
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Title: Writer from FanFiction.net
Reviewed By: Aura's Awakening On: January 07, 2004 16:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was awesome! I have some truth and dares! Truth- Is it true that you sleep with a bear named John? Dare- I dare you to uh.... That's it! Hope you use one of them! Aura
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Reviewed By: cutie_pie_2101_1012(2 lazy 2 sign in) On: January 03, 2004 16:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like it update soon please hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha inuyasaha had to hug hiei
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Reviewed By: Ford Prefect [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2004 19:47 CST
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Hehheh....Wait, KARA-CHAN IS DEAD?!! WWWAAAHHH!! ...Why doesn't he give ME flowers?! Karasu: ...8.8... Me: Stop... Karasu: 8.8 Me: 8.8...I HATE HARETENKI!! Sorry, chappie of ND and TWTH I'm referring to....Sadism, Karasu-torture....Poro Kara-chan...UPDATE SOON!!!!!
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