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Title: Be more creative!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Venomous_Angel_of_Hades [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2004 02:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dudes love the new chapter! Oh yeah, it rocked!!!! What took you so long I was half way to your house when a minion told me you updated. No matter the longer the wait the better the story. Although I'm still camped out on the roof. *guy walks up in a fancy suit* this is for you. *hands her a piece of paper* Lady Vaoh: blah blah blah not to come within 100 yards blah blah blah or you will be placed in police custudy blah blah blah end. *looks up at guy* and this means what to me? Guy in fancy suit: it's a restrainig order against you to keep you away from the twins. LV: and your point is? Gifs: it means if you come within 100 yards of the twins you- LV: will be thrown in jail I know and what's your name? Gifs: Clarence Whitley. LV *parchment appears in hand* oh yes well it says here that you're a lawyer and will die in the next 10 years so there's no point in killing you now I'll just torture you later for even having the audacity to approach me. Gifs: you can't do that it's against the law. LV: dude I make part of the law. *snaps her fingers and the Gifs disappears* Dudes that was really pointless be a littl bit more creative next time. So anyway love the chappie it's cool and funny I was rotf when they were doing the trap with the bombs. Oh yeah and YOU GO NOVA!! Listen to your perverted side every once in a while I mean listen to Lianna. Anyway update soon I can't wait to see what happens with Kuwa. Sincerely your reader, Vaoh Ta Ta For Now
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Reviewed By: YinJins On: July 23, 2004 14:18 CDT
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She's working, she's working. Let her be... as she has several stories in the works right now! TWO YYH that I'm aware of... ^_^ Just calm down. *uses flames to roast marshmellows* ~Yin
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Title: HERE'S JOHNNY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! MUWAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Venomous_Angel_of_Hades [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2004 17:25 CDT
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WHAT'S THIS NO UPDATE!!!!!!!! WAIT FIRST YOU WOULDN'T UPDATE THEN YOU ATTACK MY ARMIES AND NOW ONCE AGAIN NO UPDATE!!!!! AFTER I MADE MY DEMONS FIX YOUR HOUSE!!!!!! *eyebrow twitches* I'VE TRIED TO BE NICE BUT I SEE THAT ISN'T WORKING!!!!!!! *is suddenly surrounded in silver and black flames* TIME FOR A LITTLE VISIT!!!!! Sincerely, Vaoh Ta Ta For Now
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Reviewed By: Venomous_Angel_of_Hades [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2004 12:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
EDA: *running out of the house on fire* AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!! THEIR CRAZY I TELL YA CRAZY Il:MUWAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!! M: OH NO YOU DON'T! GET BACK HERE MISTER! Fl:TAKE THAT! AND THAT! ALL SHALL FEAR THE WRATH OF THE TWINS! HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!! Lady Vaoh:*asks a ED* what happened? ED: they started to attack us after we said their story stunk. Lady Vaoh:*Evil voice* oh really you dare insult their story, then you will also face the wrath of me, VENOMOUS_ANGEL_OF_HADES!!!! DEMONS TO MY SIDE!!!!! EDA:*frightenly comes to her side* Lady Vaoh:*suddenly is surrounded in black and silver flames* you will apologize to them immediately and then repair their house understood. EDA: *scared* yes of course Lady Vaoh. Lady Vaoh: Good Now Go *EDA goes to do my bidding* that was a real good chapter, update soon, I can't wait. *says evilly* oh and before I forget watch your backs because no one attacks my armies and gets away with it. Oh and just for that Hiei and Kurama are not allowed to leave they must stay there until this story is finished. MUWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!! Sincerely your fan, Vaoh Ta Ta For Now
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Title: *sniff*
Reviewed By: Yin-Jins [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2004 20:00 CST
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Oh, yay! They updated! *super-tackle-flying-glomps the first person she sees* Ok, I'll call off my plushies. ^_^ *whistles* Here, my plushies! Come here! *huggles her plushies as they come back to her* Hehe. ^^..... WAIT A MINUTE!!!!!! AIEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!! Their heads!!! *gets out her pinata stick* Ok, I was being nice sending them in there. Now things are going to get messy!! Never mess with MY plushies!!!! *storms in*
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Reviewed By: Jin: Master of Wind On: March 18, 2004 17:43 CST
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Sorry! got sidetracked and kidnapped by*looks around cautiously* evil Kurama plushy. *Evil Kurama plushy comes out of nowhere* AAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE OR I WILL FORGE AN ALLIANCE WITH VENOMOUS_ANGEL_OF_HADES AND WE WILL HAVE YOUR HEAD WITH DEMON ARMIES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OH AND MEET MY EVIL HIEI PLUSHY!!!!!!!!!! *hiei and kurama plushies are sent to annhilate twins* HAHAHAHA oh and i still like it. MOTIVATION IS IMPLIED
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Title: THOSE WORDS DON'T BELONG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Venomous_Angel_of_Hades [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2004 22:49 CST
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Hold up!! REWIND!! Hold up!! I don't think those words are allowed in the same sentence together!!! EVIL DEMON SLAVES OF THE ANGEL OF HELL, HERE ME GO AND MAKE THE TWINS UPDATE OR I WILL HAVE YOUR HEADS!!!!!! Evil Demons: *slightly frightened voices* YES LADY VAOH!!!!! *goes and joins evil plushies in storming the house* I WILL MAKE SURE THAT YOU UPDATE IF IT'S THE LAST THING I DO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! MUWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!! (P.S.):Yin-Jins got some more snacks. Oh, and Kurama and Hiei are free to come and go as they please. Sincerely your very ticked off fan, Venomous_Angel_of_Hades Ta Ta For Now
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Title: SAY WHAT?!?!?!
Reviewed By: Yin [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2004 19:44 CST
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SAY WHAT?!?!?! WOAH!! Woah!! Woah... back it up a minute... Can't post.... Is that even in the vocabulary?! *eyeborw twitches* Grrrrr... Where are my plushies!! *sends all her plushies into the house* Write!!!
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Title: How's about...
Reviewed By: Yin-Jins [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2004 18:53 CST
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You know, if I felt like it, I'd go live at their house... like I said, if I felt like it. Icelung has some... issues... if you know what I mean. ^^;;; Kinda scary... hehe... But I wouldn't mind camping out with ya for a while. *climbs up on the roof to camp out* ^_^ Let's par-teh!! Woooo!!
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Title: Come on down!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Venomous_Angel_of_Hades [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2004 22:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Vaoh: *still camped out on the roof* MORE HOT CHOCLATE NOW!!!!!!!!! Sarad: yes Milady *goes to make the drink* Ryack: *hurriedly* Milady one of them is leaving. Vaoh: WHAT!!!!! Minions surround that window NOW!!!!!!!! Minions: yes ma'am *surround window* *the next second* AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!! MOMMYYYYYYY!!!!!! Vaoh: that's better *starts drinking hot choclate* oh before I forget nice chappie it was so funny I laughed so hard. Oh yeah I really can't relate to being grounded because my mother doesn't ground us but still haaaaaaarsh. Update soon and don't worry reliable readers they will as long as I'm here and if Yin-Jins or Jin Master of the Wind want to drop bye feel free. UPDATE SOON!!!!! MUWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA *trails of laughing evilly* Sincerely your fan, Vaoh
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Title: Got my plushie back!
Reviewed By: Yin-Jins [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2004 15:09 CST
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*huggles her Kurama plushie* Hehe. ^_^ He's back! *sets him in her pile of plushies from various other animes and such* Ok. ^_^ Guess what?! I love it!! And you finally let me read all of it! Yes!! *dances about triumphantly* Wooohooo! Anyways... I put up the pic of Nikia from my story and I'm working on Josie and Nova!! You'll be very happy to know. And... I have a kitty-cat on my lap...*blinks*
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Title: UPDATE NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Venomous_Angel_of_Hades [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2004 02:59 CST
Comment/Review:
WHAT'S WRONG WITH YOU TWO DON'T YOU KNOW THAT FANS ARE WAITING TO READ THE NEXT CHAPPIE!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?! UPDATE OR I'M SENDING MY EVIL DEMON ARMY IN THERE TO MAKE YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Sincerely your fan, Vaoh Ta Ta For Now
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Title: HOT CHOCLATE, NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Venomous_Angel_of_Hades [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2004 18:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Also, ICELUNG WHAT WERE YOU THINKING GOING ON THAT CAMPING TRIP!!!!!!!!!!!!!! IF EITHER ONE OF YOU EVER TRIES TO GO ANYWHERE BELIEVE ME YOU WILL BE SORRY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *says nicely* Oh and update soon. Sincerely your fan, Vaoh Ta Ta For Now *standing on the roof of IL & FL's house with powerful evil demon armies circling around the house* Lady Vaoh: YOUR ORDERS ARE TO MAKE SURE THAT NEITHER ONE OF THEM LEAVES THE PREMISES, GOT THAT!!!!!!!!!!! Evil Demon Army: YES LADY VAOH!!!! Lady Vaoh: GOOD NOW ONE OF YOU GET ME SOME HOT CHOCLATE. HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Jin: Master of the Wind On: February 07, 2004 16:26 CST
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i really like the demon armies idea. Icelung, it's about time you got your ass back here. I was starting to think you got swallowed by that*looks around cautiously* evil Kurama plushy. *Kurama plushy comes out of nowhere* "I'll show you evil Jin" I have to run for my life now. UPDATE OR FACE A SLOW AND PAINFUL DEATH!!!!!! Those are just words of encouragement by the way. Well, some of it is. MWUHAHAHAHAHAHA
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Title: HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Venomous_Angel_of_Hades [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2004 00:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The last chappie was great I loved it please update soon. I recommended this story to my sister she still hasn't read it no matter how great I say it is. Oh and please update soon, IF YOU DON'T YOU WILL FIND YOUR LIVES IN THE HANDS OF ME, VENOMOUS_ANGEL_OF_HADES, HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *trails of laughing evilly*. Sincerely your fan, Vaoh Ta Ta For Now * P.S.* I can take your mother anytime. BRING IT ON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! * gets into fighting stance*
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