| "The Path of Life" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: Vilkath [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2007 07:21 CDT
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Nice start, to bad it seems to have stopped before it truely reached any where important. A more evil Genma? Sure, not to hard to believe his 'stupid actions' are more then just over sights. I could easily see him trying kill off his son early on in the training so he could go back home to the good life. I could even see this version of Genma being the same as the Cannon, just turns to see more value in Ranma as his fighting ability grows. Starts to see the bigger picture or something. Only real complaint is the obvious ways Genma hates Ranma in this, to blend more with the standard Genma you would expect him to at least hide his hate better. ALso a bit sad this stopped now, before the Gold digger cross over really went any where, not to mention what will Ranma do now. Without his father the rest the training trip arc is drasticly different. Best I could think of would be hunting down to kill his mother, since he thinks she wants him dead.
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Reviewed By: Dumbledork [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2007 10:41 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Brilliant. I simply love it. More! MOOORE!!!!
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Reviewed By: pyro12 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2004 17:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I agree with the previous statement, and why is this rated NC-17?
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Title: It rules!
Reviewed By: j0 On: February 14, 2004 06:16 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Better write more soon unless you want to die a painful death ^_^ I mean it.
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Reviewed By: Talon963 On: January 19, 2004 13:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
WEll, this was a very good fic. Now if only it will be continued. If so, it could quite possibly join that of the greats. There are many good fics out there, and yet so very few exceptionally great ones. Then again that is all depending on your own perspective. I've found this story to be great so far, but it will only be a great one when it's finnaly completed, or at least given an open end, but that hopefully wouldn't happen for at least another dozen chapters or so from now, at the very least. Keep up the good work with this story, Later Talon~Blessed are the losers, for they make the winners.
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Reviewed By: Gopu On: January 02, 2004 07:00 CST
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Please continue this story.
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