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| "Hateful Transformation" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] | Title: Ya havent u been updating?
Reviewed By: Tom RO 91 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2004 08:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
God,im an idiot.Sorry,for all those annoying reviews....the first 1 was actually my first review ever considering i only joined like a month ago. I wanna know why you haven`t been updating.Well,if you didn`t know,I have a new fic of mine.Sephiroth`s Return.I was hoping if you had a screen name,you could IM me(Tom RO 91).If you don`t have one,thats ok.You and Sephlier have become my freinds on MM.org and I talk to Sephlier alot.Thanks to tips by Sephlier I have become much better of an author.I want help from you to write Fanifics as well.If you do IM please give me the link to the stories you`ve made made on FF.net.Love ya!
| Title: Y havent u been updating?
Reviewed By: Tom RO 91 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2004 08:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
God,im an idiot.Sorry,for all those annoying reviews....the first 1 was actually my first review ever considering i only joined like a month ago. I wanna know why you haven`t been updating.Well,if you didn`t know,I have a new fic of mine.Sephiroth`s Return.I was hoping if you had a screen name,you could IM me(Tom RO 91).If you don`t have one,thats ok.You and Sephlier have become my freinds on MM.org and I talk to Sephlier alot.Thanks to tips by Sephlier I have become much better of an author.I want help from you to write Fanifics as well.If you do IM please give me the link to the stories you`ve made made on FF.net.Love ya!
| Reviewed By: Mal-Link [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2004 23:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was really good and interresting I hope that you will get some more done real soon
| Title: Sorry, I'm not really here for revenge:-)
Reviewed By: Amy (Back for revenge) [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2004 19:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi, I'm Amy! How have you been? I don't really you know you, but hey it's a pleasure reading your fanfiction. Your prologue was very good, but you should really cut back on the "he said, she said" though. You don't necessarily need it all the time. Your fanfiction would be fine if you just keep it down to a minimum. I read up to chapter 3...I believe and I noticed a lot of blanks, like this "........." Way too much there, it kind of distracted me from reading, I didn't think you would have so many of them. Anyhow, you don't have to take my word for it. You have quite a few chapters there and I'll be more than happy to read them all for you (in due time, of course). Well, continue writing (like you have been) and good luck to you!
| Title: Hmmm...
Reviewed By: sephlier [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2004 20:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This review is offered for this/these reason(s) strictly: (While I do thank you for your review of one of my stories *this had, by no means, nothing to do with ratings, just thanks to you, on my part ^_^) I noticed this story a couple weeks ago. I have been trying my best to keep up with newer fanfictions because I do not have a lot of time to spare when I am home (dead honest) and there have been very few that have been able to attract my attention AND keep it *yes, limited as my attention span may be* (not to sound conceited or anything). This would follow: While looking into a selection of other stories, I saw your mediaminer/pen name in a handful of reviews and checked into the attached bio to see if any fanfictions could also be associated. Some people are here strictly to read and review and not offer any other form of writing, I have found. I am glad that you have offered SO MUCH MORE* even with one story, which this site says you have*!!! (I am taking notes ^_^) I love the title you have given this particular story. I, in all the years that I have had internet access, have only read ten fanfictions in four years...some were just SO BAD that they killed any interest in reading anymore fanfictions. I thought your prologue (and your story summary) served as an interesting means of presenting your story. I have not come across any stories that have covered this view point (Cloud's)...at least not tastefully, yes. (somehow they all end up ecchi (?) or yaoi *not that I don't like my fair share of yaoi yes ^_^'* (like I should talk, I have an NC-17 on mine). It does bring an interesting way of seeing "things". I have been given a new trailer to Final Fantasy VII: Advent Children (alas, have not had time to watch). I have just started your particular fanfic but I have added you to my favorite author and story list. On the off chance, if you have any more writings, I would like to read more. I also like the fact that you are a Sephiroth fangirl, ^_^ XD *hash fangirl pics and renderings hanging on apartment walls* I am anxious to see your views on the possible happenings of the Nibelheim affair...not many people are strong enough to share their insight on/to the vents that led up/included this incident. I AM looking forward to reading more!!! Thanks (as conceited as it sounds) again for being one of the few!!! ~sephlier
| Title: Went Bak
Reviewed By: Tom RO 91 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2004 20:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
I noticed 1 mistake on chapter 9.We leave when the rain starts can we leave....will the rain ever stop?You should`ve wrote `stop` not `start`.No hard feelings....remember Gumblade?Hehe.Imagine a Bubbleicous sword.
| Title: WOW!
Reviewed By: Tom RO 91 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2004 20:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok....i lied...i hadn`t finished it.I `m the only review writer presently for this story .WoW!I`ve finished it now though.I `m trying to make a long story like you called "Dragonblade" for FF.
| Title: Hey
Reviewed By: Tom RO 91 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2004 08:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey.Thanks for that recent review of Cloud`s Quest.I wrote a review about this earilier but didnt finish the story.I`t`s awesome!Continue to correct me of my mistakes and I may become a as good a writer as you are now.PS:if that`s your screen name i`ll put you on my buddy list
| Title: nice....
Reviewed By: Tom RO 91 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2004 17:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah....this is a great FF fanfic.I enjoyed this tale.I suggest you read my FF fanfic Cloud`s Quest(If it ever makes it to the website).I have one spelling mistake.I think his name was Zack not Zax.
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