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Reviewed By: MIztikal_Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2004 00:45 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
dum de da da! that was so cute. i can't wait to read more. I'm glad ur in ur "writting cycle" if only i was there, then i could write. *sighs heavily* well keep up the good work and update asap. i can't wait. i love your story, one of my favorites. Krystal.
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Reviewed By: Orb (not online) On: March 19, 2004 23:57 CST
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lol, oh man thats to funny. I'm glad Inu and Kag are together now, hes so cute when he gets all mad about the guys at the club lol. I cant wait for the next chapter. This story is really awsum.
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Title: heehee
Reviewed By: Daman 388 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2004 03:21 CST
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Orb, I just read a review of yours for Tina. You're jealous of me? Damn right you should be. Heh, I'm sorry, I get moody sometimes....my master helps keep me calm and reasonably insane, as do I for her. My master is very possessive of me, again, as I am of her. To be blunt, we don't like to share! But good to know my assisstance to her works is appreciated. I do make sure the chapters look pretty before she posts them. Anywho, I know I told you this Tina, but I loved the chapter. Pretty damn good story for something you came up with off of the top of your head one day. Oyasumi Tina, love ya!
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Reviewed By: Orb [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2004 18:15 CST
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oooooooo Inu and Kagome sittin' in a tree...lol, I'm such a raetard. This was a cute chapter, Kagome SHipp and Inuyasha seemed kinda like a family....even tho I don't remember how Inu is (if at all) related to shippo...oh well. Can't wait for the next update. I hope you feel better, I get migrains to and I totally know they arent fun at all.
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Reviewed By: MIztikal_Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2004 02:42 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great, great keep up the good work and update asap. Krystal
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Reviewed By: Kidie On: March 17, 2004 19:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awsome! Keep writing! I am soo into this story! Get an Inu/Kag lemon in there, onegai!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: YasashiiAme [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2004 19:05 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter, but I have to run and do homework like you are doing. XP
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Reviewed By: The Almighty Elena On: March 17, 2004 17:57 CST
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yay!updatedness!WOOP! im ok O.O update soon!^^
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Title: busy lives
Reviewed By: whit On: March 15, 2004 22:45 CST
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wow this is a great fic and yoiu must add another cbappie to it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I think its so funny and is kagome naturally moody and bitchy in the story???????????? It was awesome OVERALL RATING: 10
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Title: I LOVE YOUR FICCE!!!!!!
Reviewed By: The Almighty Elena On: March 15, 2004 19:42 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love it!i love it!i love it!!!!!!!!!its wonderful!!i wish i could kiss sesshomaru! T.T anyway update soon!pleeeeeease!
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Reviewed By: Orb [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2004 16:13 CST
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ooooooooooo great chapter!! A possible lemon in the near future? That would be pretty great. I'm jealous of your puppy slave lol, if all kinds of slaves to have, who wouldnt want a puppy? lol I can't wait for the next update, I'm elated that I'm finally caugh up with my updates, I have 30!! This is a great story, kepp it up!
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Reviewed By: Miztikal_Dragon (going to sleep) [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2004 04:29 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol that was cute. i love it can't wait till you update. what's next on the list of koga? muhahahaz Krystal.
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Reviewed By: YasashiiAme [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2004 01:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter... I really should be getting to bed. Thanks for having someone read it over before posting it :) It really makes a difference. Nice job with everything in this chapter! ^^
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Reviewed By: >leah On: March 14, 2004 21:36 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Red Herring while i do think that she needs to be a little bit more original i don't think you need to be so rude about it. it was okay to have a little constructive critisim but you say it very harsh and demmeaning* i thought it was very good and it must have been because it held your attention and mine and 75 other people and countless more that didn't bother to review. i very much enjoyed this and would like to see more of it, espeacially because you left me on the edge of the cliff!!! Please update soon. I also like the fact that your A frequent updater.
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Reviewed By: RedHerring [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2004 20:05 CST
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dull, dull, dull, dull, dull, dull, dull. Spice it up a bit. Turn away from the ordinary, and for God's sake, figure out what point of view you are going to write in and stick with it!! You jump from intimate third, to omnipotent third all the time! Pick one, and stick with it! Ya know what? I don't think you know what I'm talking about when I refer to points of view so here: {http://www.freewebs.com/chrithirteen/mArticles.html} there's tons of articles on how to be a good writer, theories on relationships with the Inuyasha casts, points of vies, Mary Sue-ism, Plagiarism, and baby author syndrom. Please do all of your readers a favor and read them all and apply them to your stories.
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