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"The Man Or The Dragon" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ]
 Title: It doesn't matter much.*Sad eyes*
Reviewed By: Seto_YamiMyLovers [Not signed in at the moment]  On: March 07, 2004 21:06 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Sighs It doesn't matter.In my perspective,it wouldn't.Seto,i'm assuming,loved Yami,but had met Jou and had fallen for him.Because he was innocent in not loving Yami,unknown to him,he would be with Jou.Though,because he followed Yami's right hand,who knows of such knowledge? Yami was jealous,and as hesitant.But even though he would despise himself so;if he led Seto to Jou,he would want him to be happy and live because he loved him.I feel the slightest hatred towards Seto in this particular fic.;he loved Yami,but he also with Jou,even though he knew full well that Yami loves him with all his heart.It was as if he was using Yami;love him;goes in trial;picks the right door because of Yami;and then leave himfor Jou;whom he secretly loved,i'm guessing.Though,if he chose the door with the dragon,Seto would die a horrible death,but if he truly loved Yami,he wouldn't care because he would be with him in the afterlife.But Yami would never want to see Seto die that way;even if he knew they could be together in the afterlife;even when hatred and jealousy welled up inside of him;he would want him to live and be happy.As i think my review left you perplexed,it has confused me as well.Though,i do not have superior knowledge,i assume you are also confused by the story you have created.I bid thee farewell,~Harika Huynh
 Title: Either Way
Reviewed By: Dark Sanctuary [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 06, 2004 22:33 CST
Rating(s):
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
What I gather from the story is that no matter what Door, Seto opens his life will be taken from him. Yami will lose Seto either way. I do not think, that its Seto that would be the one to suffer, but it would be Yami who would suffer. Because if Seto would open the Dragon's door he would feel pain, die but it would be done with. If he opened Jou's Door, then he would be loved, and he would eventually move on without Yami. But Yami would lose Seto either way,because he would always have his feelings for Seto. The question is whether or not Yami could stand to see his love killed, or have his love's life given away. Actually, it doesnt matter what door Seto opens, because it's only "ONE DOOR" and depends on the emotions of Seto, and those of Yami what they see come out of the door.
 Reviewed By: Blue September [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 06, 2004 17:52 CST
Comment/Review:
Oh that was cruel! Cruel, cruel, CRUEL!!! And I still don't have an answer. On one hand I do NOT want Seto to end up with Jou and I don't want Yami to end up alone. Yet on the other hand, to betray Seto who trusts him so wholeheartedly would be unforgivable. So I choose Jou!

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