| "Only While Human" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Eternal Serena [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2004 00:49 CDT
Comment/Review:
This fic is pretty good. I enjoy reading it and can't wait for the rest to be posted! ^^ It seems to me as if you're really sticking to the characters. I find that a very important factor in all the fan fics that I ead. Keep up the great work ^^ And as I read yourother reviews I can't help but disagree with the first one O.o Yes I agree people won't be interested in a story unless the summary is adequate, but I disagree that the summary reflects the author. I don't find your summary(s) annoying, tis ok, don't worry too much about it. ^^
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Reviewed By: QueenKagome [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2004 18:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update soon! i luv it!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Kara [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2004 15:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I\'m sure I will love reading this fic, I\'m a sucker for relationship/romance stories, especially when InuYasha is involved. I didn\'t rate the originality of this fic because it is based on characters and relationships that have already been established in Rumiko\'s manga...so I didn\'t think that category would really apply. So far its great, and I can\'t wait to read the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: RedHerring [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2004 14:46 CST
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hey, the summary spot is for summaries. if people don't even know what it's about--most won't bother to read it. Also, most people don't care enough about what you have to say to want to read it in the summary. put it in an author's note where it belongs. //////////// also, saying "i s.u.ck at writing summaries" won't work. Get better--or have somoene else write it for you. Because if you can't write a summary, then how the he|| can we expect you to be competent enough to write a story? That's all, and really--change the summary. It's so freakin' annoying.
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