| "Trouble At The Sphere Break Finals" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: lil lottie [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2006 17:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello there! Just decided to return the favor and read a few of your fics. This is a wonderful novelization of this scene in FFX-2. Your characterization of everyone was dead on. The descriptions were also very well written; I was able to clearly imagine that whole FMV again. I'll be sure to read your other fics when I get the time. Keep creating! Fantastic work. BTW, much appreciation for the helpful feedback on my fics.
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Title: It's great, even though I'm lost.
Reviewed By: AmyAnderson45 (I've only seen a little bit of FF10) On: May 11, 2004 23:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've seen just a little of FF10, but I do know about the character Yuna...I think. Anyway, I consider this to be a great one shot, even though I don't really know what's going on. I guess...sooner or later, I'm going to have to play this game in order to understand this fanfiction. Well, I don't see any mistakes; your dialogue and grammar are always very good. Besides that, you are practically on a roll with this one...need I say more?
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Title: Loven it
Reviewed By: Inuyashalover27 ( I must not be signed in) On: May 08, 2004 20:47 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loven it. I loved the whole thing. Yuna's funny. Loven the kid act at the end. If this isn'r a oneshot then update asap!!! keep writing!
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Title: Sup Sephlier?
Reviewed By: Tom RO 91 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2004 18:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
It`s pretty good.I liked how you described Paine.I`m going to make a story about Paine when I`m done with Dragonblade.It`s gonna be called Paine`s Story.It has a connection with another FF so it`s definately false.Check it out ASAP.
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